Dragon Ball, I Live a Slow Life

Author, the pace of your book is too slow! In fact, it is not bad to perfect the martial arts competition, but the pace is too slow, because there is no popularity in the early stage, and the popularity started with Dragon Ball Z. You should be able to write about Piccolo the Great Demon King, the transition in the next five years and the details of Dragon Ball Z. Laying the foundation in the early stage does not need to be so long. There are too many. And if you write about Dragon Ball. If you want to choose a female character, you have to write it. Don't mention the popular one. Hey, this heroine keeps appearing, and everyone doesn't like it. In fact, data can best explain everything. Why so many fan fictions like No. 18 Or Bulma is because they are relatively popular. A small suggestion. Instead of writing like this, it is better to start a new book, streamline the original details of this book, speed up the pace, and focus on the key points.

Like the title, please leave more comments, maybe your thoughts will be added to the subsequent plot.

Light bringer, it is really the tears of the times

If the author was good, he would create the Dragon God, and it would be the super-demon one!

Come on, author, your book can make people read it with confidence.

Is this book still worth investing in? ? Why is there no investment sign? ?

Leave some comments to give me some inspiration.

No wonder no one cares about it. Others find water when they open the lid of a thermos cup. You find water when you turn on the faucet.

As the title says, here are a few people who can just write some comments and express their opinions. It's another half-month window.

Do you know why your book is not popular? First, do you understand the three golden chapters? You've already discouraged most readers in the first three chapters. Second, what is your main line? Third, what is your dividing line? Fourthly, the protagonist talks too much nonsense, which is a waste of time. Fifth, this is fan fiction, but fan fiction should also consider those who have not read the original work. Now I have read more than 20 chapters. If I had not read the original work, I would have no idea what you are writing. Sixth, don't write emotional scenes. If you don't know how to write, just brush it off. Seventh, the protagonist should not be surprised all the time, which makes the protagonist appear weak.

If the super demon god and the light user have the same worldview! Then the three gods of light energy merge into the Sun King! And the Super Demonic God Dragon God can also be manifested.

Keep paragraphs small, two to three lines is just right

Great author, I like Dragon Ball fandom very much. I haven't read your book yet. It's too short. I have no desire to read it. I look forward to the next one you write seriously. I don't have many suggestions. I think no matter how original it is, the protagonist group of Dragon Ball must be an important supporting role. Then, the protagonist must participate in the main plot line of Dragon Ball, and it takes a lot of time to write in detail, and then the protagonist's participation must be something different. Then I hope that the protagonist and the supporting characters will not be too shallow, not too middle-class, not too two-dimensional. I think Wang Lin's character style is more likable. But how to combine it with the style of animation may be a question that the author needs to consider carefully. Finally, I wish the author success!

Writing fan fiction is nothing more than making up for regrets and making good use of resources and techniques such as superpowers, technology, and auxiliary martial arts.

Seedling? The introduction looks okay. I'll give it a try.