Starting from Tianlong: Who Is Not the Sword God?

The protagonist is not even as good as Duan Zhengchun. No matter whether Duan Zhengchun can be slept with for the time being or not, at least she is my woman and I will openly admit it. Even the part in Shaolin Temple is willing to accept Ye Erniang without knowing it. The protagonist was so handsome in the introduction of the author at the beginning, and now his martial arts skills are so high, but in the end he is still coy about falling in love with a woman. The woman does not dare to say a word when they are together, and always "coughs" and "laughs dryly". The protagonist is not even as good as the natives of the original novel. However, most of the protagonists written by Zhutianhougongliu authors look like Sima Xiaoshou. The narration in the Tianlong chapter despises Duan Zhengchun in various ways, but in the end he does not have the courage and courage of Duan Zhengchun to open the harem.

Ah... Here, fans must at least respect the original work. Let's take the aspect of women as an example. If you use your foresight to intercept Hu Mu Wanqing and Zhong Ling, it is of course possible, but if you pry Duan Zhengchun's woman away in just a few words, you have already gone astray. You must know those women I have been infatuated with Duan Zhengchun for decades, and I have not changed my original intention, and I am not even afraid of death in the end. How could I be coaxed into changing my mind by just a few words? This logic does not make sense, just like how Qiao Feng was coaxed from a Northland hero into a despicable villain with just a few words. This has gone beyond the scope of fandom.

This book should call me a nanny and dog licker in Tianlong

After taking all the skills and waiting for another five years, just to wait for Duan Yu to show up, what kind of stupid person can come up with such a plot?

Are all people who travel through time this kind of dirty shit nowadays? ? How to act righteously if your heart is not righteous? ? Most people nowadays are hypocrites, right?

Just a fool, a fool with better luck

The processing of emotional lines is so rough that it can even be described as inexplicable. Most of the female characters are basically dismissed in one stroke. The main plot is basically to keep looking for women, take them in, and live with Duan Zhengchun's women and daughters.

A 25-year-old boy returns to the world of Tianlong. Everyone else wants to be Duan Zhengchun's son-in-law, but the protagonist wants to be the stepfather of Duan Zhengchun's daughters. What a unique taste. No wonder my grades are not improving. How do you ask readers to assume the role of several heroines in their forties?

I've read Chapter 168, and I really don't know what to say. There's no main line in the writing. I think it's just a story that's force-fed 😅😅😅. It's a waste of money to subscribe. Damn it.

I only recognize this one Li Qingluo

Oops, the protagonist has such a powerful golden finger and foresight, but after five years it still takes so much effort to defeat the Infinite Sword Sect. Do you know how long it took Duan Yu to go from a scholar who didn't know martial arts to the end of the original work? What a useless protagonist

The author is of Japanese descent and is an enemy agent lurking in China. You must know that many middle school students and high school students read novels now. It is simply a bad way to teach children. I don't say you can't write, but you must have the minimum moral bottom line.

This protagonist is somehow mentally ill, so he gave away his magic power the first time we met him? Even more dog-licking than Duan Yu, I would like to be called the dog-licking king

Personally, I feel that the protagonist in this book is far less attractive than Duan Zhengchun. At least he will not deny his relationship history and is willing to sacrifice his life for the woman he likes. The protagonist looks down on Duan in various ways, but in terms of personality, he is not as good as Duan.

Mother and daughter, do you really think that women also have sperm in their brains? Do you really think that all women in the world are mentally retarded? Sure enough, it's not without reason that I became obsessed with writing novels.

Even the top masters in Tian Long Ba Bu, one monk, two guards, three old men and four masters, all use bare hands. Those who use weapons are second-rate, third-rate or even inferior. The two most powerful weapons users are probably Duan Yanqing and Murong Fu. Duan Yanqing is still disabled, otherwise he wouldn't be able to use crutches on his one finger. In Jin Yong's martial arts, internal strength is king, and weapons are redundant. Even in Dugu Qiubai's practice, he won without a sword until the end with a sword, and any grass or tree could be used as a sword. There is no need for weapons. .

This calligraphy was considered good a few years ago, but now it feels outdated.

The cross P is so awesome. What can I say? It looks good. It feels a bit like writing about the emperor's uncle and working part-time. Like it. Like it.

I'm afraid you haven't even read the slanderous comments made by many people below! Is it really necessary? If you don't like it, you don't have to watch it, or you can just give a realistic evaluation. The protagonist doesn't even let Ye Erniang go. It's so awesome.

Tian Xing Jiu Ge Qin Shi Mingyue Sword is not criticized too much

After reading all the chapters, it is quite interesting and non-toxic.

Why isn't it updated? I'll give you the monthly pass every month.