A Winner in Life Starting from a Baby

After reading Chapter 25, it started off well, but after the kindergarten program, it started to get boring. The first thing is the system settings. The abilities currently given can be skipped by just saying "Reborn Talent", and are dispensable. They are more like water injection tools than plug-ins. If the feedback is insufficient in the future, the system settings will definitely become objectionable to readers. The second is the plot. At this stage, the characters are young and have a low sense of achievement in interaction. Each chapter records life and plays house. The mother is happy and the father is jealous. The highlights are more reflected in the adults' reactions, and then the cycle continues. The mood of the plot rises and falls in a straight line. The main character has a Buddhist mentality and lacks a strong sense of presence. At the same time, he gradually integrates into the segments. Although he is a drummer, it is difficult to empathize and feel happy. It is interesting to climb fast before he was a child. At the beginning, he can smell the smell of being lost to everyone as he gets older... There is nothing to talk about in the preschool chapter. It is better to skip it. As for the issue of the characters appearing (it doesn't matter whether there is a single heroine or multiple heroines, as long as it is interesting and provides emotional value), 1. Xiaoyu will always be accompanied by negative emotions every time he appears. The purpose of the character's existence seems to be to become a light bulb that affects the interaction between the male and female protagonists. 2. The setting of Reina Sakura seems redundant at present, but it is actually the same as that of Chinese people. It might be more interesting to write about the elementary school transferred from Japan, involving family, language, environment, ideological differences, etc. There should be a lot of things to write about, and adding a Japanese proficiency to the protagonist can change the situation (). Or go back to elementary school and go back to middle school in Japan? But judging from the length of the preschool chapter, the gap period will be a bit long... The two have been keeping in touch and it seems that there is less fun in the sky. I don't know how the author plans to write it. 3. Zihan and Xiaoyu are a little funny but not too much. I can only say that he is a kid brother. I can't do anything with him and it's not too annoying. I don't have any suggestions for male co-stars. I just want to become a villain and bring some interesting conflicts to the plot to realize my value as a supporting role... The above three look like the main characters. There are too many others to remember. Those who are not interesting will be classified as water-character tools.

Sometimes it's not boring, sometimes it's boring😔

Overall, it's a good read.

In the melee between the three classes, Kelan's class deliberately targeted Fang You's Class A, letting the more powerful students deal with the people in Class A, and together they divided up Class A's winning points. After this back and forth, Class A's score became This paragraph has become nothing. I missed typing.

Ah, ever since Qingmei, words like "wuwu" and "cry" have been used more and more often. The previous account did not use such writing style. I suspect and speculate that in the past few years, men and women were slowly becoming popular. I wonder if they are slowly becoming men and women.

I really don't understand what some authors who write female protagonists are thinking. Writing female protagonists is not impossible, and there is still a certain audience, but some will create many female supporting characters, and some even make the female supporting characters better than the female protagonist but do not accept them.

I used to have Qingmei who I played with since childhood, in kindergarten, elementary school, high school, until I went to college and I saw her cuddling in the arms of her senior and entering the hotel. From then on, I was no longer interested in girls.

Can't the author even distinguish his own selling point? I want to see the reborn kid's skills, playing drums and being shocked by this and that in entertainment, not just watching a few TikTok kids' videos that are copied from my daily routine...

If it's a single female protagonist, I don't want to watch a harem

To be honest, I wanted to see the harem so much when I wrote it. I was upset when I thought about the other girls who couldn't be with Fang You after high school and college.

A Qingmei binding was arranged from the beginning, and then the plot was tied to death. The plot has never been able to escape from this framework. It is said to be a Winner in Life series, but in fact it sacrifices the various characteristics of a Winner in Life and drags all kinds of burdens forward. There is no particularly satisfying feeling. If you like to read Qingmei stories, you can accept it, but Winner in Life, forget it.

Single and more than nothing? I have never taught an author to write a book, just leave if you don't have one, read more, it's very simple, I hate those authors who are hanging around. Especially I have read a book with a harem label and ended up marrying one of the heroines. The other heroines were either married or single all their lives. You directly started to say that you are single, and I didn't bother you too much. In the end, you spent a lot of plots to create a bunch of heroines to trick me into coming, but they are not together at the end. Then aren't you just disgusting? Clear the audience, everyone is good.

Is there any novel that starts with sperm? 😰 The game of life and death should be very exciting to write.

The following is simply a support. Can anyone think of what the heroine said in those two chapters? Isn't this the new era xxn? He is not proactive and responsible, and he also likes to suck blood. He almost poisoned me to death. Anyone who can write such a plot in a sweet novel is a god.

Is it true that reborn people are just like little kids in kindergarten? Is it just a matter of environment? Or is the author naive? Nowadays, playing friends and falling in love in elementary school can no longer satisfy readers' curiosity. It has to start in kindergarten. Really awesome.

Is it single or multiple? An excellent urban novel will not lose readers because of a single heroine or multiple heroines. The two most typical ones are: "They are all reborn, who falls in love?" "I really don't want to be reborn." One with a single heroine and one with multiple heroines are both popular, and I like to watch them all. It is wrong to like to eat both ends. I don't dare to subscribe to your book now. 😅 I've known you since the book Rebirth of Green Plum, and I didn't see you like this at that time. If you write multiple female protagonists, just write multiple female protagonists. If you write a single female protagonist, just write a single female protagonist. Why are you so vague? 🤔 I am a reader who accepts single female protagonists and multiple female protagonists, but I can't stand this kind of vague novel.

Well, after reading nine chapters, I feel surprisingly good. The old author's writing style is still there, and the writing is very smooth. Currently, it is visually judged that there will be only one female protagonist. I am not picky about it. No matter how many female protagonists there are, the emotional line is well written and enough to touch people's hearts. Speaking of which, I may be unfounded. If this book develops in this way, there will be a more obvious difference compared to the previous two books, because the background of the first two books has a hidden appropriate tragedy line, so as to achieve a contrast that makes the main plot sweeter and more touching (the if line is strongly mentioned here) As for the current book, all I can see with the naked eye is candy, and this one has It may be a purely sweet article. Of course, there is a small chance that the author will create conflicts between characters to achieve the purpose of promoting emotional lines. This is indeed feasible, but controlling the characters is a big trouble point (if you really want to arrange it this way, the first priority is not to collapse the character).

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Wang Zihan was going crazy because the girls were surrounding Fang You!

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Not as good as Qingmei. I went back and watched Qingmei many times. I never felt embarrassed or bored every time. Even if I knew the plot behind it, I could still read it. Why did this book end up like this with plug-ins?

I'll post something about what I wrote later. The system is the system, forget about aliens. The rhythm is a mess. The writing is so good in the early stage, but it will be messed up later. Password

The author of this book writes very pure and beautiful feelings, so it was very beautiful when I was a child. But in high school, where the past and the future are connected, readers will have different opinions. Accepting everything is naturally good for chauvinistic men, but in fact it is disrespectful to women and selfish to a certain extent. Single heroine victory is equivalent to running away after flirting with someone. It is irresponsible and cold-blooded to abandon a person of the opposite sex who has spent most of your life. This is the line divergence. Furthermore, the author incorporated some contradictions in life in the later period, and many people can't stand and cannot understand women's works. In addition, social criticism: fat cats and other lessons bring back painful memories, so naturally the reputation is not good, but the author's real life experience cannot refute it In fact, this is a phenomenon that is substituted for oneself. On the one hand, in the later stage, the protagonist's superpowers, which only include charm, can lead to cult belief, and can even lead to upper-level narratives. All legal and moral logic is not an obstacle. In this case, not accepting girls seems very unconvincing. On the other hand, the girlfriend's work may really be just fun for a superhero like the protagonist. It's like Superman being restrained by Kryptonite, but between a couple, it might just be fun. Finally, I hope that the author's books will get better and better as he writes them. In fact, I like to read all the author's books so far.

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Chasing Yuanxi is a classic childhood sweetheart in kindergarten, but it is very interesting until elementary school, especially the kindergarten plot, which is really interesting. The middle school plot in the back is a bit sci-fi (it doesn't feel like much), but the problems are okay. The whole text is in a relatively relaxed style, but Reina's disappearance was a bit long~

Are they those perfect girls who have always liked Youyou? Is a book just a game in the end? What is your regret...?

The early part was really well written, and it completely attracted me. The middle part was also pretty good, until I saw the later part, starting from that summer camp... I really didn't expect that the author's childishness combined with science fiction was such a sci-fi fairy tale... 😭

It was going well, but some big Nono appeared out of nowhere.