Tokyo: How Did I Become a Yakuza Boss?

First of all, I have never been an author, but I want to say, is it really difficult to write a hundred chapters a day? It's not that I am being unreasonable, after all, I said at the beginning that I have never been an author.

It's a really good book. It's written like a hot-blooded Japanese idiot. But if you're not sure about the emotional line, don't write it yet. This will save you the trouble of trying to quit.

I suggest that the protagonist should not be too rigid. He should kill and collect when he should. In Neon, power means power.

Big sister, here comes the ginseng!

I made do and found a rough picture

Watching the video, those bloggers said that the current Japanese yakuza is only supported by the elderly. The yakuza sells milk tea and sells yakuza peripherals to support the gangs. It is terrible. I don't know if it is true.

I always feel that the author's impression of the prison in Toutonji is based on the Hong Kong prison-themed movies and TV shows of the 1990s, or based on the description of the conditions in the prison in Yingjiang... Also, the cooperation between the police and the people in Toutonji is very pleasant. Of course, this citizen refers to Yakuza. After all, the Toutonji gang is legal. If the protagonist is undercover as a drug lord or an arms dealer, that's okay. The undercover Yakuza doesn't have to be so troublesome at all. He can just be dismissed from the police force on the file. The Yakuza are very happy to accept such people...

Some readers feel that the fight scenes are too wordy, and would like a simpler, more enjoyable plot flow. But some readers come here for the bloody battle scenes. . . How should I put it? It's difficult to reconcile everyone's opinions, so we can only consider both. In addition to the indispensable description of battle scenes (this was my original intention in writing this novel), the author also wanted to write a good plot and tell a good story. Therefore, there will definitely be cases and a small amount of emotional description in the article. The case is the impetus of the story, and the emotional description is the lubrication of the story. I hope you will know and understand it. As for some readers who say that the author's writing is not good, I admit this. Newcomers don't know what the standard is for good writing. I just want it to have the flavor of a Japanese manga and a Japanese drama, and it has to have a bit of a shen-shen-nao-tao flavor. In fact, I feel like I can write it in a general style. . . . Above.

I once dreamed of traveling through time to become a red policeman and a gangster, and then be the leading actor in a feature action film 😳😳😳

The new book is on the way and has passed the internal investment! Everyone can invest and collect with confidence! What is a recommendation ticket? Haven't seen it yet. . . . . . .

I want to ask, is it an original work or a passionate fanfic?

You can't rest even if there is no pallu in the computer 😜

Is the name of the main character of Takiya Genji added to Hosen High School?

In fact, it is to arouse everyone's sympathy. What you don't know is that this experience has long been beautified. In fact, 23:30 was put on the shelves after readers got tired of it... 23:30'S true identity is the Qidian seller. He is everywhere They all sold Gouzi. Many people saw him entering and exiting the Goblin Cave of readers and traveling around. He must be attracting customers... At 23:30, it took such a long time from the release of the book to the time it was put on the shelves. In fact, he was selling Gouzi. Once he sold it, he became more famous. Editors, and even readers, all sleep past 23:30. Many people can't believe that he was selling hooks before 23:30, but think about it, he is a newbie, why is he not starting to play the stand-alone version as soon as he publishes the book? The competition in Qidian Library is so fierce, ah, just because he is a newbie, can he have good data? He must have to pay something, right? Isn't this world's capitalless business just selling out?

I have been in jail since the first chapter, and the latest chapter 51 has no sign of being released yet. This book is also called: "Hot-Blooded Prison"

It's better to write a hot-blooded high school fanfic. Now we only see that the protagonist has high enough patriotism to choose to join the Japanese police and become an undercover gangster.

It is recommended that good and evil points should not always be used to add attribute points. You can also buy other things such as titles. The price can be higher. Or the bonus of attribute points to a certain value will double the value required to add points, otherwise the growth will be too monotonous and too easy. The above are my personal suggestions for reference only. The author's writing is pretty good. I hope I can keep it up and finish writing. 😁

If you can't write about a hot-blooded college, what about a hot-blooded neighborhood?

I would like to ask whether the main move is black or the main move is white?

Personally, I feel that some of Goldfinger's winning reward systems don't fit the title of the book.

What's next: Released from prison→Promoted→Encountered Narumi's objections because of what happened in prison. It feels a bit deliberate.

It's a bit messy, the character portrayal is too deliberate, and the protagonist's personality doesn't match the writing style.