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I thought he was the rational protagonist of Goldfinger, but he turned out to be a person under Goldfinger's care. His physical behavior can be controlled by Goldfinger. Even if he doesn't want to, there is nothing he can do. No wonder the comment section said that the protagonist has no brain.

Laughing to death, author, don't you know what it means to have a female protagonist without a female protagonist? No heroine? Get rid of the categories. Don't think about eating both sides.

Very good, follow your own ideas, don't let some readers dictate the rhythm

Why write the protagonist as such a mentally retarded virgin? I really, really recommend that the author make the protagonist a little colder and have fewer female supporting characters around him. Maybe this book will be a lot more colorful.

Yes, very good, very interesting. I will give you all the recommendation votes tomorrow. Come on, by the way, women can have it. The plots about the two women in the book are good, but it is best not to have the kind of male protagonist who goes in and out seven times and travels thousands of miles to save the female protagonist. I think it is good as a life adjustment. It is good to just tune in after a main plot. The main thing is to see how the male protagonist improves his strength and the weird things he encounters. Come on!

I think the writing is interesting, much better than the superficial flow.

A ruthless scumbag, what on earth did the author go through to be so twisted. A normal person would save even a passerby's baby, let alone the child from his previous life. Could it be that the author realized that the child was not his own child?

Why does the protagonist have to fight to the death with the White Lotus Cult? It's completely possible to cooperate and get benefits.

The author actually published two books, but this one feels better.

"Shadow Puppet Fairy in Troubled Times" is pretty good

What is his relationship with the female ghost in Tsing Yi? Why did the female ghost help him? Obviously both sides have a grudge, so if the female ghost wants to get out of trouble, shouldn't she kill the male protagonist?

The plot logic of this book is too brainless, and many things the protagonist does are incomprehensible.

A blunt group. There was a ghost village in front of them and they said they should avoid it. Then they went to test the enemy inexplicably. They went looking for death without exposing the horse rider. Sure enough, they encountered a ghost village while running.

You should slowly write shadow puppets as puppets, or say that the main character is cultivating skills to control others, and should slowly hide himself behind the scenes, and those who come out are clones. The ghost realm and the dragon veins can also be written as the interplay of yin and yang. Isn't that the foundation of a world? Whether you go to the real world or the underworld later depends on how you write it. Personal opinion, just read it to the author.

Personal suggestion: Write a good book and keep it updated. If there are too many updates, you will not be able to update it. Newcomers should first build a fan group and find a group of authors to recommend. Also, set up logical problems, and be able to fully describe the human world and the characters. It is best to have an outline and write the content according to the needs of the readers. After all, it has to be just right, and you don't want to be a eunuch who will easily lose popularity!

I feel that the author may not be able to control the rhythm anymore. I basically have no desire to read anymore. I just want to come over and take a look from time to time to see if the author can stabilize the rhythm again. But at present, the author can no longer control it.

The protagonist doesn't even know the zombies, and has to use the trick of shadow puppets to know whether he is a time-traveling mute.

The previous books were either short or messy, but this one is written seriously and well.

The author's writing is quite good. It seems that there is a bug. Since you can hear the voices of others, which is an invincible golden finger, why do you need to develop secret skills such as shadow puppetry and directly find a way to listen to the voices of warriors and monks? It is no better than this practice.

The author of Xiuxian Shadow Puppet Play? Hey, I found you,

In the past, the protagonist practiced evil ways in order to survive, and now he has certain strength. Why not practice some righteous ways and some skills, so that the cost will be much less.

Why is it that the main character is over when it comes to passionate scenes? It makes me feel that the main character is a little impotent.

Isn't the finale with just over 200 chapters too short? Author, can you do it?

Once a person leaves the Cave Heaven Paradise, his cultivation will regress. This is really an interesting setting. Can't the spiritual energy of the world be absorbed? Those monsters and monsters did not retreat in their cultivation after leaving the Cave Heaven Paradise.

There are only three Nine Mirrors, and you have to die or ascend to get the next one. This setting is a bit awkward.

I finally cut it. In fact, the writing is very good and the ideas are reasonable. You will become a god in the next step. Good luck, author.

A story about two male protagonists, "The Last One" The first male protagonist is ugly and lecherous. He was supposed to be the devil in the world of demons. But by some mistake, he was recognized as the holy son of the fairy world. From then on, he embarked on the path of the prodigal son's return... The second male protagonist, his personality, is upright and handsome. He was supposed to be the holy son of the fairy world. But by mistake, he was destined to be the holy son of the fairy world. Next, he was identified as the Demon Son of the Demon Realm, and has since embarked on the path of becoming a villain... The story unfolds between these two half-brothers... This is the theme of this novel, if you are interested in reading it, read it, at least the logic is online, the plot is reasonable, and there are laughs and tears. Welcome to complain

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The character of the male protagonist is not good. He is too weak. He was bullied casually at the beginning. I really can't stand it. I don't dare to fall in love with ghosts or people.