Marvel, Invincible Starting from Simulation

The protagonist is a scumbag who works part-time in simulation and reality. Personally, I can't stand it after reading more than 20 chapters. Come on π_π

The protagonist is not a human being in the simulation, killing people, setting fires, and doing all kinds of evil, which is okay. After all, the simulation is about maximizing profits. But when we get back to reality, it's better to hold back a little, otherwise the protagonist will look like a pervert and be unlikable. 🔨

I guess the author is going to run away. I guess I can't grasp it. Too much writing creates too much space. The following represents personal suggestions for reference only. If you don't like it, don't spray it, thank you. First is the introduction of the story. Especially fan fiction. It's best to explain things clearly at the beginning. What we write is Marvel fan stories with or without novels, comics, etc. Or it comes from movies. You have to explain everything. They are not the same thing. Then there is the entry point. Marvel originally brought the Inspector and the Ancient One, right? How do you introduce yourself to a person who appears out of thin air? It would be fine if he were an ordinary person. Then there is the common problem of time travel. Time travel is time travel, belt hanging is belt hanging. Not every time traveler must have a hook. Very low-level. If you look at Qidian, there are so many books that are said to be masterpieces with hangings. Is there any? I think it's a cool article if there is any hook. Shuangwen's reasoning is a bit stupid. Just a knife of 999. It would be great if you can work hard to achieve miracles. Just feel good enough. There are still people watching, which relieves stress. If you want to write well, then you need to take time travel with you. Just push forward with the story background. If it were me, what would I choose. The biggest advantage of a time traveler is knowing the plot and having one more lifetime of memories. That is to say, my past and present lives are all pig's feet. The author has a lot of control over it. Give an example. Personally, I think it's best to write something unique. If I were a pig's trotter, what would I choose? It's 100% 10 rings and 10 points of Chinese characteristics integrated into the Marvel Universe. Transform him into a whole new one. Let's talk about why 10 rings are needed. The timeline is long enough, and there is time for transformation. Pig's feet are considered a pig. His own strength has also increased. There are many things you can do in the middle. Make arrangements to get potions in the early stage. Fine-tuning in the mid-term will do. It won't be weak in the later stages. You can just add a little Chinese element. It's no problem to get a book with a score of 70 to 80 points. In the later period, the author has matured greatly. In the second book, he created his own world and stopped writing fan fiction. Right. All personal suggestions are for reference only. Come on!