Zhutian: Start with Flowing Gold

The author must have just come out of society. He made a lot of common sense problems in his writing, which shows that he has no knowledge and did not research the information carefully. As a result, there are many poisonous points in the first few chapters. Then there is the mentality problem. His identity has transformed into a wealthy class, but his mentality is still in the state of being a loser. He still silently pays to girls while acting cool to impress them. Give birth to a girl, and then let the girl take the initiative to get into your arms. I'm sorry, I'm sick of it. Yellow hair doesn't use this kind of routine anymore, but you still use it. How does a rich man chase a girl? First, he checks the eighteenth generation of his ancestors, and then finds an acquaintance to intervene in her circle to show off his wealth crazily. Then he sets up a trap to make her whole family financially bankrupt. If she doesn't want the whole family to beg for food, she kneels down and begs for support. It's simple and effective.

Nowadays, most books like to write that the male protagonist is handsome, which seems uninteresting. Just be about the same height and make people feel a little fond of it, or just start the chapter by saying that he is handsome, and don't make handsomeness the focus later on. Looking handsome, I also focus on the benefits brought by being handsome. When the buffs are full, the difficulty of any dungeon is reduced by half, and the story quality is completely different. Novel is not reality. In reality, there is no problem in reaping the bonus of being handsome. But if I talk about it separately in the novel, it doesn't make much sense What else is there about "I'm attracted to you"? This statement really feels like a domineering president's message from a female channel. Routines (So many people think that I don't understand anything, but I understand very well. The following words are what I replied to the first floor a long time ago, and now I also reply to the understanding brother who thinks that I don't understand anything. If after reading this, you still feel that you are right, and what I said is completely wrong, Then just be happy) "You have to be sure to feel happy when writing cool articles, right? This is like obscenity. Someone brings their boyfriend home, even the kind of boyfriend who is about to get married, and then you send a message to him after having a meal, saying " I've fallen in love with you"? Anyone with a slightly normal outlook will think that you are so smart, right? Do you really feel so good about yourself? If you want to say that there are so many women who only care about their looks, then why write these plots? Forget it about young models in clubs. , You don't need a guide, you can still queue up to write another one every day, maybe people think you are handsome, and they don't charge you. Seriously, is there any difference between writing about this kind of woman and just writing about it and selling it? What's the cool thing about writing? You just have to look good. Urban novels are not about youth idols. They only focus on the appearance but not the plot. The protagonist is strong, so wouldn't it be more fun? But I chose the least cool way to write it, which is that I'm handsome. Take a look at the part about going to the general's house, and you'll always get a line about how the protagonist is handsome. If this plot is a dungeon, then this section is completely about the protagonist being handsome in the front, and the protagonist being handsome in the back, and then I've completed most of the dungeon. I don't even know. How do you manage this kind of plot to make it more exciting? Novels are not reality. Finally, it's okay to write about the protagonist's handsomeness, but don't just write about the protagonist's handsomeness. If you pass the copy, it's all about the protagonist's handsomeness. That's not a novel, it's about obscenity."

I don't recommend watching movies and TV shows. There are so many women, it's like rushing to a place. They come alone.

I can't even watch it without thinking. Cruel

It's all over the place, so don't accept those heroines with unflattering characters. It's not like there's a shortage of women. You can just play for fun and don't accept them.

The car is very fast, I like it 😍

It's still a pleasure to read this kind of article that just does what you say. I've read hundreds of chapters of a stock trading article with more than 1 million words, and the pig's feet held hands with the heroine... It's impossible to even get to the home base of the finale. . I'm just wondering whether it's a male eunuch or a female Lily who has no need.

It's a very good idea but it's so poorly written. I could have written something interesting in these entries.

I don't know why it feels weird starting from the first chapter! There is a sense of shrinkage in the text!

I really can't stand it anymore. When I first met Jiang Pengfei, I called him Uncle. When I met Fan Shengmei, I called her Sister Fan. What's wrong with that?

Tianlongli can drag Ye Erniang to Shaolin for public trial, and bring the person who killed the child with him. Xu Zhu depends on the author's mood.

It doesn't matter if you are a novice and have no brains to read cool articles. Don't set the requirements so high. I still think the authors are all from scratch to old. Be more encouraging. If you don't like it, just change it. As long as you are willing to write cool articles, you are a good comrade. As for writing and plot design, just take your time.

Golden Chapter 3 is too long. I deleted one sentence and summarized it better.

It's okay to accept opinions or suggestions for the next plot development. Reply when you see it. I would also like to mention here, don't keep books. I am very interested in reading data in the new book issue. Thank you.

What plot is this? Is anyone still watching?

As long as I write the lead role in a movie variety show, do I have to accept it if I see a woman?

What other entries can there be? Let's talk freely. Will be added if useful.

Those worlds and plots that I want to see will be my priority. Thank you brothers for your support.

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