The Exorcist Detective in Detective Conan

It's too old-fashioned and clichéd; the classic petty thug develops into a major problem. The romance is well-written, but those somewhat annoying and awkward tropes detract from its appeal. Actually, it would have been much better if it had been written as an exorcism and crime-solving story with a sweet romance (I quite liked the romance story written by the author), but it's a pity that they had to add this kind of unappealing plot. Tasteless to eat, but a pity to throw away

Could you also include Ran as the female lead? 🥺

The author overlooked many details; how could Ran and Sonoko possibly be from the kendo club?

Why are there so many ShinRan fans even when reading a novel?

First of all, there's a problem with the introduction. Sonoko Suzuki is the second young lady, and the eldest young lady is Ayako Suzuki.

Every plot point you write, whether it's a major storyline or a minor episode, must shape or showcase the protagonist's personality. Whether the protagonist suffers or retaliates is not important; these design considerations only relate to the reader's reading preferences. What you must do is highlight the protagonist's strengths, and their overall character development must be positive; otherwise, it will read like a diary.

Ran isn't here? What about Eri?

Ran really did add her. Could you add Suzuko Kujo too? It seems she doesn't get along with Eri Kisaki. Maybe she could be with Eri later…

Of the main female characters who have appeared so far—Haibara, Sato, and Suzuki—Haibara and Sato are better portrayed, while Suzuki's portrayal is quite average, like a typical school novel plot. Haibara's relationship is like that of a tsundere cat and her rogue owner, while Sato's relationship is similar, starting with their mutual entrustment of their lives during the case and then having…

To be honest, the protagonist's constant staring at Sonoko's feet is a bit perverted.