Immortality Begins with the Last King of Shu

The writing is neither fish nor fowl, the writing style of historical writing is not good, and the description of scenes in martial arts writing is not good.

The military writings were not brutal and realistic enough, and the martial arts writings were too mediocre without magical skills.

For a martial arts practitioner to break through the innate realm, he needs everyone's spiritual recognition, support and concentration of spiritual power to break through. If the founding force collapses, he will still fall into the realm. I have never seen such rubbish.

If you want to start with martial arts first and then fantasy, just go step by step. A strange and chaotic god suddenly pops up in the world of martial arts. If the wild gods can appear in a wave through sacrifices, when Chongzhen died, the golden dragon of luck in the Ming Dynasty could not kill Li Zicheng before he died? History is not history, those who cultivate immortality but not immortality will look like crap

Only bastards can emerge from shallow water, not giant dragons. The level of civilization determines the height of the peak of martial arts. An emperor of a feudal agricultural dynasty will never be able to play Call of Duty 4060 😏, even if he keeps shit in his head, he will never be able to play it. A world of martial arts does not have the foundation to cultivate immortals, what is the environment? Shape the environment, accumulate knowledge, slowly engage in scientific research, enlighten the people's wisdom, and improve productivity.

Is there any kind of book that is blocked by the navy and makes you feel that the book is terrible? After all, many Ming Dynasty novels are criticized and criticized.

Why does it feel like it's a bit out of line? Shouldn't we quickly enhance our strength in all aspects and then push forward?

Introduction Jin Yong's martial arts world is the Blue Blood Sword, right?

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The concept is a bit interesting, but the writing and storyline are not so interesting.

I think they are of the same type. The author can read it and learn from it.

Okay, I'll add some streams at the end of tomorrow. I've been waiting for you for a long time. The author is awesome plus.

It's meaningless to write about the protagonist like this, and it's not satisfying. If you write about an army, you can't write about the protagonist's military strategy of winning every battle and defeating the strong with the weak. If your personal culture is not good, you can just add your golden finger to your personal power. If you know that some aspects are unsatisfactory, just focus on the individual. The coolness written in Weili is equally interesting, but when the only coolness is suppressed, there is really nothing to watch. I don't care what worldview you set, whether it is a non-magic world view or a retrograde world spiritual energy that is not obvious, but it is unique when the protagonist has a golden finger system. There is no limit to my own way. Don't write that a bunch of masters of the same level appear after the protagonist has just been upgraded. Then what is the use of the protagonist's character? You can either write the protagonist as the controller of Haotian's will and the world of heaven, the master of the world. The stronger the creatures in the world, the stronger their spiritual energy. The stronger the protagonist, and the stronger the creatures in the world, the protagonist can make the other person become a mortal with a single thought. This is the power of the rules of the world of heaven. This is the best. When you have finished writing, change to the world of heavens.