Douluo Dalu: I Am Not Ma Hongjun

Isn't this to compete for the top three thrones among Douluo fans? And do you want to dominate the three thrones? "The Legend of the Dragon King: He has been licking dogs for thousands of years, and now he is leaving." " "Douluo: The general Moye can kill everything. Well, sorry, I forgot about the other new one. But it's also a dog licking. It seems to be a copy of the first book. From the four major elements of the novel, plot, characters, environment and theme. First of all, the humanistic environment is fixed, and the theme mainly depends on the meaning expressed by the combination of plot, characters, and environment. Therefore, in the early stage, you mainly need to look at the plot and characters to know whether it is a good book. After all, the number of words in the early stage is small and it is difficult to highlight the theme. I have read twenty chapters of your book. Plot: When the protagonist wakes up, he knows that he has traveled through the novel world of his previous life, but he is not familiar with this novel. What this is, to old readers seems to be a precursor to the main plot. Then continue watching, the protagonist is broken up and the protagonist gets into an argument with someone in a restaurant. Two original events plus a precursor are 100% solid. I can't watch the good plot, I'm watching the characters. Character: Set soldier. There is no problem in terms of combat effectiveness. Then he was separated from the protagonist and shamelessly attached to her. It seems that the protagonist is a love interest! I looked closely to see if the protagonist had any brains, and found a discrepancy. Has the protagonist ever thought about the separation of yin and yang in a few decades? Then the protagonist stops Tang San, and Tang San loves the rabbit and wants to kill the protagonist with his backhand. The protagonist is like a normal person. In reality, I really want to find a friend like you. In other daily matters, the protagonist seems aloof. Personally, I would describe him as being as cool as a fool and meddling in other people's affairs. Doesn't it feel very contradictory, but that's how he portrayed it. There is no plot, the characterization is not good, and the environment is the same as that of the same person, what should I do! Depends on the theme? Late comeback? If there is no early stage, why neglect the later stage? Some people will skip the early stage and look at the excellent late stage?

Inexplicably, the protagonist looks like a soldier. This is what a soldier looks like in your eyes.

You look more like a kid than I did back then, which is outrageous. If you write about mercenaries, you will not be criticized, so you just go ahead and steal it from me. I have been in the army for eight years and have been a manager and a managed person. To be honest, you should delete it and rewrite it. These three golden chapters are not as good as Private's Reflection

Copying according to the original work only enhances Ma Hongjun's strength. Today, when the group is in decline, writing like this will make people angry.

Not good, he was so awesome, he was almost killed by Tang San, but the result was like nothing happened

There is a section in the front. When I looked at it, I didn't even know it was time travel. It started from the freshman. There is a small part of the chapter in the back, which is copied exactly like the original without any changes.

Brainless whitewashing and brainless blackmailing of others, how many Goldman Sachs did you and Shrek get into?

The last few chapters have been too toxic. I don't know what the point of the protagonist joining the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect is. He is not with Ning Rongrong, and now he is being tricked by Ning Feng. That is the protagonist, and his partner is such a crooked melon and cracked jujube? Don't let these women get pregnant. The protagonist should leave the Qibao Glazed Sect as soon as possible. The protagonist has the realm of the God of Killing, and can inherit the God of Shura in the future.

I feel like the word "missile" I wrote is too bad. I don't even need to write it down. Why don't you make a nuclear bomb? Directly bring peace to Douluo Continent

It feels very awkward to recommend for the sake of advancing the plot. Just work on it yourself and slip away.

The name of the village chief is too discouraging, right?

I didn't read the book, I just read what the author said in the comment section. It's hard to stretch. . Go out and find a class

I don't dare invest in this book. . . Fear

Your completely modified version of the original work, Ma Hongjun's max version...

Recommend a new book - Peerless Tang Sect: I Simulate the Legend of the Dragon King