Break the Situation and Move

The creativity is good, the story is very good, I look forward to watching the exciting follow-up, keep going👏

I like novels in this style. The beginning is eloquent and fascinating. Come on💪

This article revolves around the protagonist Lu Jiamu, whose parents who were engaged in scientific research disappeared mysteriously when he was a child. When he grew up, he decided to find his parents to join a mysterious organization. Later, he actually encountered an incident similar to his parents, so he launched a follow-up follow-up. In terms of plot arrangement, the rhythm is good, relaxed and relaxed, sometimes fast and sometimes slow, but it does not make people feel dragged out or compact. The author cleverly interweaves many details with each other, and seemingly unrelated little things can form a big network behind them. The advantage of this approach is that readers can follow the protagonist through events, think about clues and fall into traps together during the reading process. In terms of characterization, Lu Jiamu has keen insight, extraordinary wisdom, rich emotions and firm beliefs. He will get emotional when encountering the same cases as his parents, and he will also make rational decisions after careful consideration. This feeling of having sadness, happiness, prosperity and adversity just like ordinary people, but always able to turn danger into safety, makes readers unable to put it down. Because we can always see in him what we want ourselves to be. In addition, I like the author's writing style very much. Although the overall story direction is very similar, the character characteristics and details of this article are less like online articles and closer to everyone's description. But from another perspective, it actually looks a little more ethereal without the smell of fireworks. In general, during the reading process, we can feel a fantasy world that is different from daily life, and we can also appreciate the impermanence of fate while following Lu Jiamu to find the truth.

The detailed description in this article is very exciting. Zhou Qing's appearance and appearance description are very attractive, and his image can be regarded as a contrast when he first appeared. Earlier, he was so disdainful to Lu Jiamu that he clung to Lu Jiamu when he was assassinated. It will make people feel that this character is very distinctive and will make people remember it. Later, Zhou Bai first appeared as a missing person. His The introduction is very, very powerful. Although the person does not appear, a brief introduction can make people interested in him. His image is highly coincident with the image of Lu Jiamu's parents. They were both intellectuals and then disappeared inexplicably. Using him as a clue, Lu Jiamu can solve the mystery step by step and find his missing parents. The plot is compact and logical. Looking forward to the follow-up development.

The novel's language style is concise and powerful, and can effectively convey the tension and uneasiness that the author wants to express. At the same time, the author's description of the environment is so delicate that readers can smell the blood in the air, hear the sirens in the distance, and feel the characters' breathing and heartbeat. At the same time, there is not a lot of suspense. For example, when Lu Jiamu was framed for murder on the street, the description of the environment was extravagant, and then the old man appeared to testify, which did not make people feel the thrilling twists and turns of suspense.

This book is a character-centered detective suspense novel. The protagonist Lu Jiamu, because of the mystery of the mysterious disappearance of his scientist parents when he was a child, decided to join a non-governmental organization dedicated to maintaining peace - the Secret Hand Society. Since joining the Secret Hand, Lu Jiamu has been looking for clues about his parents' disappearance. Until one day, he was invited by Zhou Jimin to investigate the cause of the disappearance of his son Zhou Bai, a scientist. During the course of the investigation, Lu Jiamu continued to discover new clues, and eventually received an invitation from the Guangfuhui, the mysterious organization that kidnapped his parents and Zhou Bai. He decided to take the risk and go to the base of the Restoration Society to reveal the truth of all this. This book is particularly clever in handling the relationship between the main plot and daily life, so that the storyline is neither too abrupt nor out of place. The protagonist Lu Jiamu is always able to remain calm and restrained when dealing with various situations, and make the most appropriate decision based on the current environment. Such a wonderful plot setting makes people can't help but want to continue reading. Every page is gripping. Although this book has an attractive storyline and wonderful characters, it also has some shortcomings. One of the obvious flaws is that the layout is too tight, and long paragraphs cause reading trouble to readers. In contrast, the paragraphs of most online novels are short and concise, which greatly improves the comfort of reading. It is recommended that the author split those overly lengthy paragraphs into shorter, easier-to-read paragraphs in subsequent editions to improve readers' reading experience.

As a suspenseful mystery novel, the author is very clever. The protagonist Lu Jiamu has a complicated life experience. The overall story pace is fast and there is nothing sloppy, especially the first 30 chapters, which are interlocking and full of ups and downs. The death of the security guard with strange causes and Luo Zhou who was killed by a poisonous needle make the incident confusing. At the same time, their deaths also promote the development of the plot, allowing the "big shots" hidden behind to gradually reveal themselves to the surface. But there are also many shortcomings in details. The worldview structure is very sloppy and there is no detailed world background. The private organization Secret Hands and the International Police INP are the two organizations mentioned in the article, but a country should have official power. However, in the article (such as Luo Zhou's car accident, and the protagonist's encounter with two people who were killed under the company building ) did not mention the existence of the police. These details made me feel like an NPC. Secondly, the details were ignored to promote the development of the storyline. The Liberation Society is a large and strict underground organization. Zhou Qing can bring in silver needles at will, and Moreno can launch missiles at will to destroy an area. These behaviors also make me feel a bit illogical. I hope the author can write a more exciting plot.

In my opinion, this novel is very detailed, both in the description of the environment and the little actions of the protagonist. The introduction and arrangement of the plot are also very appropriate, including why the artificial being was involved in this case? Why is the Lord determined to investigate this case? Although I rarely read this type of novel, I think the formula used in the novel is relatively mature. Speak well. The pace of the novel should be well arranged, but for someone like me who particularly loves urban novels, I may feel that the process is a little slow. Because I haven't seen much of it, I haven't found it yet. What makes this novel more eye-catching than other novels of this type is the author's writing style and the storyline. They are all relatively classic.

1. Personally, I feel that this book is quite well written~~~ I would like to say that I usually read more short stories and longer novels, mainly horror novels, so I rarely read suspense books! So please bear with me if some things are not quite right. ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑ 2. The rhythm is quite fast, very suitable, and the hook is also relatively good. It only takes five chapters to set the stage and enter the main plot. This rhythm should be very good in a long novel, right? The core expectations are pretty good, and it can be seen that the writing is very careful. As a reader, it also has a strong sense of immersion. It has a certain writing power. After reading the first few chapters, my first reaction is that you have a writing foundation, no matter what kind of online article it is. If you have no foundation, it's already very good to be able to write to this level, and your talent is relatively good₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑, come on~ 3. The character creation feels really good, the old man in front and the protagonist, for example, the old man suddenly stopped the violent explosion, and the ridiculous feeling of the protagonist slipping to his knees after pretending to be a bashful man, and when being scolded, he mentally refuted that he was not doing it for money, and the details observed in the room. 4. Overall, I feel really good~ It can be seen that you have a foundation. If you don't have a foundation, then I think you are really smart and can consider long-term development. The only shortcoming is that the transitions are a little bit different~ Also, some details can be added to the dialogue between the characters, otherwise the whole dialogue will look a bit tiring~~ (Of course, this kind of detail is already advanced~~ Now the baby has written very well₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑) 5. I have only read the first few chapters (because I really hate suspense works!!! It's not that I hate you, it's that I hate the whole category and have no interest in it, just like some people don't like reading horror novels), but it can also be clearly seen that your rhythm control, main plot advancement, and character creation are very good, and you can retain a large number of people who like to read this genre. Man, it's enough to write a book review~~~ (If I still force myself to read ten or twenty chapters of this type of book that I don't like to read, I'm just trying to see if I can dig for gold in history qwq, so baby, if you can make me bang on the table within five chapters, you are great! Come on!!) 6. Typesetting is history. It's too tiring to read two paragraphs on one page. Please sort out the typesetting! ! ! ! Don't let the simple and non-technical parts lower your baby's reading quality of your article! ! ! Come on, baby˃ʍ˂ Whispered: Baby, you can absorb the female channel's taste hahahahahahaha, you can see that she is a female author under the skin. Come on, baby~~~ I will follow you, and one day you will write other content that interests me to get your votes₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑