Visionary of the Marvel Universe

After reading more than ten chapters, I felt it was okay, except that there is a problem with the cat that the protagonist raises. It appears many times in the book that the protagonist's ability to digest magic potions is not as good as that of cats, which makes people feel that the protagonist is useless. Especially because currently only the protagonist and the cat are on the path to potions, which makes this point more prominent. Although I know that the author drew on the images of Audrey and Susie in the mysterious original work, the protagonist is an extraordinary person who knows a lot of secret knowledge. Unlike Audrey, who was a novice in mysticism in the early stages of the original work, this description of the protagonist as worse than his own pet affects the perception. Of course, this is just a personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.

The protagonist doesn't act like someone from the "audience" route. He is high-profile from time to time. Fortunately, the setting has a good relationship with Stark S. H. I. E. L. D., Otherwise he would have been suspected.

First, it was the classic parents' sacrifice to God, and then because his parents, SHIELD took special care of the protagonist and asked him to receive psychological treatment from Captain America. Then cousin Iron Man and cousin Doctor Strange, it feels like everything is arranged for the sake of the plot, the cliché among clichés. Then the protagonist recruits an assistant. The classic heroine Gwen Spider-Man makes her debut. Is the next one going to be Black Widow or something like that? The review feels like a set of formulas imposed by the author. Referred to as the cliché of clichés.

The audience is too strong, let's cut down the warriors

The author should revise Chapter 12. Don't write about Pig's Foot as a fool. You go in, sit down and stare at Hawkeye for a minute and then Hawkeye is fine. If someone sees that you are capable and you are surprised, you will laugh to death.

It's okay, but the cat is too annoying and seems to be taking over the spotlight. Moreover, the protagonists are all in front of the stage, and there is no sense of development behind the scenes.

It can be seen that the author likes dreamers very much, but he did not write about the dreamers. The dreamers strategize like Adam, rather than charging into battle like a soldier. You can write it like Sherlock Holmes's archenemy Moriarty.

That's not Cthulhu, that thing is a polyhedron. The strongest Cthulhu type in Marvel is the beholder, which is most similar to the polyhedron of the Cthulhu type.

Iron Man is a relative, and Wizard Strange is also a relative of the main character, so fucked up

It feels a bit inconsistent with the audience's acting method

Two Audiences Is the author ready to kill the cat to preach?

My evaluation is that Utopia Cat is not as good as Witch Cat

First, the protagonist's parents were from S. H. I. E. L. D. And then died. It's a classic parents' memorial ceremony, and then because of their parents' death, the protagonist becomes a temporary employee of S. H. I. E. L. D. And provides psychological therapy to Captain America. The protagonist's relatives cousin Iron Man and cousin Dr. Strange recruit an assistant, Gwen Spider-Man Assistant. I feel that your writing is a bit too cliché. If you recruit a passerby assistant in Chapter 19, I can even say that it is not cliché without any conscience. 😭

This was written by a cat, I don't find it very pleasant.

I'll start with what I think is the best, just to inspire others. I hope everyone will give you a better one! Lord of dreams and souls God of creation Incarnation of all reality

This cat is a bit annoying... I hope the cat's appearance can be reduced.

The audience path is quite suitable in American comics. After all, the end point of his path is called God, the omniscient and omnipotent Lord, the God who created everything.

What's going on in the latest chapters? Why, you can't walk when you meet the Scarlet Witch? They were still confronting each other just now, but are they going to give her the infinite stones in the future? If you lick the original protagonist without writing a sequence in the future, just say so and I will leave immediately