
The Game Merchant from the Ninja World
从忍界开始的游戏商人
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- 1.1M Words
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- Light Novel
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- Fan Fiction
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- 1y ago
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I've been reading for over ten years. I've been bored and in a reading slump lately, so I thought I'd put together a list of books I'm reading and give them a quick rating out of five.
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A personal reading list, bookmarked whenever I feel like it, to keep track of books I enjoyed at the time. If you don't like one, or it eventually falls apart or gets abandoned, please don't take it to heart. Thanks for stopping by.
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My thoughts and some suggestions
This kind of fanfic about the mastermind behind the scenes. There are two main points to watch. First, many characters in the original plot, after knowing a lot of information and gaining the power to change their destiny, destroyed the original plot. Second, the protagonist, as the mastermind behind the scenes, arranges various tests and trials. The ingenuity of the level setting and the trend of the times it arouses, and the pleasure of being the mastermind behind the scenes. The following are some suggestions The first one is to stimulate subjective initiative The good ones will follow you, and the evil ones will admire you! The light longs for you, and the darkness also longs for you! You are an existence that transcends everything If you want to achieve such a goal, then the pattern must be relaxed. The protagonist can die personally, but he cannot simply become a messenger of justice. He should be a devil! Give the sinking the possibility of breaking free! Hinata Neji. Give the Avengers a smooth path to increase their strength! Uchiha Sasuke. The author handled the positive characters of the original plot well. But we need to open up the pattern and broaden our horizons. Why can't the Daimyo of Fire be given power? As the nominal ruler of the country, doesn't he want to have the power to suppress the world and actually hold power? Why can't the Tianlong people be given a chance to establish themselves forever? The ability to execute under ambition and the determination to sacrifice others will surely bring huge benefits. Besides, opportunity does not mean it can be realized. Don't underestimate the greed and stupidity of people. As long as there is hope, no amount of posters can stop the darkness and collapse of the regime caused by greed and ambition. And the deeper the oppression, the more ruthless the resistance will be. The game of reincarnation is the biggest and only opportunity for the resisters. The more fiercely the Tianlong people oppressed, the more the oppressed people explored the game of reincarnation, and the more determined they became in overthrowing the mountains above them. Give all living beings hope! Hope is the most precious thing. Whether it is a kind person or an evil person, people are willing to pay everything for hope. Nami's transformation in this article is quite good. The second guide changes destiny The protagonist relies on the advantage of knowing the plot to chat with the main characters of the original plot of the animation. Using this to guide and change their personal destiny is actually a good point to watch. However, the protagonist should not let the public guide directly say that if he guides 500 people at one time and each person asks a question, the scene will become a vegetable market and the guidance will take too long. Therefore, the public guide of Novice Village should be a cold, rigid and mechanized mechanism. First, shock everyone with absolute coercion. At the same time, silence everyone and deny them permission to speak. Second, actively control them to commit suicide. Let them not fear death. At the same time, it is also a show of force. Third, instill the purpose and mission of the reincarnation game. Fourth, give them ten minutes to buy and sell points and equipment information in the novice area. Fifth, when the time is up, throw them all directly into the mission entrance. Although you really need those people to help you work. But as an excellent HR, you have to show that you can be my dog and it is your honor to work for me. After all, the protagonist really gives a lot. The protagonists and supporting characters of the plot, the princes, nobles, and powerful technicians can see the shadow of the protagonist that only they can see. This phantom that is exclusive to them will occasionally provide reminders and guidance based on the protagonist's personal preferences. This kind of guidance can be given directly. You can also entice them to use points to purchase. You can even guide them to explore the background information and side tasks of the open map. For example, guide Long to explore library materials in the ruins of modern technology, and discuss with him the pros and cons of various political systems. What is given directly is always doubtful. Only when you think and reason by yourself can you firmly believe. The third one is self-packaging and passing on responsibility The protagonist should package himself as a savior. He wants to tell players that the pollution of the world is not caused by games. Pollution is the public enemy of all worlds, and the world around us is facing the threat of pollution. The game of reincarnation is a savior and an attempt by the great and powerful to act as a buffer and a barrier against pollution and the world. In the game, the natives of each world can be resurrected infinitely, and some simple pollution can be initially eliminated. In this way, we can cultivate the younger generations and continuously train our troops. In the end, they will get out of the reincarnation game, out of their home planet of birth, and truly face the horror of pollution. This package tells the best players that the world of reincarnation is on the same page as them. They are not working for the world of reincarnation, but fighting for themselves! If the player sincerely thinks that I spur you and torture you for your own good. As the mastermind behind the scenes, you should never become the target of public criticism from your players. Not to mention standing on opposite sides, we should not even stand together. The protagonist's current position is the game company. How can any player not criticize game companies? If the benefits are sufficient and a little bit of aversion arises, that's perfectly normal. The author didn't handle it well enough and now just fills them with huge profits. The human heart is always greedy and never satisfied. Being able to feed them now does not mean that players will still be satisfied when they become stronger in the future. The fourth one: Heavy pressure to push forward The author obviously has no experience in squeezing his employees. I don't even read enough novels. Until now, the protagonist has been using the mentality of a game company to lure players forward. This is far from enough! There is great potential to be tapped! The first power. Give players hope to climb up and realize their dreams. For those outstanding people with a strong will, hope is their eternal beating heart and a firm will that is unbearable. Akainu's justice is absolute justice! If there was no other way, how could he just lift the table and compromise in the end when he was arguing with Wulaoxing. If there was any real hope of realizing absolute justice, he could just breathe fire and hit the Five Old Stars. It wasn't impossible for him to do it! The second pressure. Stir up the situation in the world, use limited-time activities to help careerists improve their strength and start a war. There are always many people who are content with the status quo. For example, Nami, after finishing Aaron's group, she would only happily go sailing and collect treasures, without any motivation to become stronger. Let careerists improve their own strength. Raise your ambitions and jump into world war. In times of crisis and war, people have more motivation and pressure to improve their strength. The third pressure. The protagonist's ultimate goal is to fight pollution. That requires the major forces to fight and compete with each other, and to cooperate with each other when necessary. The evil of human nature is unworthy of belief! If there are no restrictions, there will definitely be some forces that play dirty tricks on each other without any bottom line. For example, Danzo sent his roots to the boss siege activities led by Yun Ninja Village, causing Kizuko to blow up the city wall with his own hands. This pressure of world destruction should be passed on to the major forces in this world. It prevents them from committing evil acts without a bottom line, and also allows them to pay full attention to various activities in the game. For example, the player failed in this event. Then all the monsters in this event will be randomly dropped into the strongman settlement area in this world! Without the infinite resurrection in the game, how much blood would the natives have to shed to annihilate the monsters? Without this rule, if the event fails, the player will only make more or less. The game has always given a lot, and players naturally don't pay enough attention to it. They always think that even if the activity fails and they don't make enough money, then I can just work for another ten days and a half. But with this rule, failure of the event is a bomb that may explode at any time! There would be no way Konoha would relax its investment in gaming activities in order to hold the Chuunin Exams!
It's a bit interesting, but the main character should be invisible. After all, this is a group portrait, behind the scenes. The biggest joy of this book is the sparks of collisions between characters from multiple worlds. As for how the main character becomes stronger, conspiracy, conspiracy, and infighting, these are completely irrelevant things. It is best not to have such a shitty idea that the main character wears a vest and mingles with a certain team. The main point of the main character sneaking into the indigenous team, no one will praise you if you write it well, and you will almost get picked on if you write it.
The protagonist has no "divine hiddenness" at all.
First of all, let me state that the book is written by the author. As a reader, I am not asking the author to customize it for me, but to provide opinions and only express personal preferences. (Armor stacking completed) I saw some other readers speaking in the comment area like me, thinking that the protagonist should have less roles and not frequently intervene in the direction of events, and the author also responded. Then this suggestion should allow for continued communication. In the latest update, the protagonist will be attacked by Danzo, and the subsequent plot seems to evolve into: the protagonist issues a mission to all ninja players targeting Konoha (of course this has not happened yet). I personally would not like it if the above-mentioned plot happens. First of all, the plot I personally hope to see is: the protagonist, as the official planner of the game, is an independent character. He should play all the roles in planning the game and promoting the development of the game, and the player's plot (although it is arranged by the author) should also happen naturally (at least on the surface, naturally), instead of the protagonist directly intervening, which is very biased. Secondly, if a plot happens for all players against Konoha, what is the significance of this plot? Does he have anything to do with the maintenance of the game? Does he have anything to do with the main plot of your novel, cleaning up the world from pollution? The only purpose I see is: to make the protagonist look awesome. I really don't understand why there is a plot where the protagonist is pretending to be a member of the player team and is being slapped in the face. In the comments section before, there were voices saying "behind the scenes, don't have plots where the protagonist pretends to be a member of the player team to show off". Isn't it the same as "the protagonist appears in reality and is attacked, and then instructs the player to fight back against real characters"? Why do readers like me have such a big reaction when the protagonist appears and does something? Because I didn't take on the role of the protagonist, I just wanted to see the plot change naturally after each original character gained different powers, and they also changed their destiny. Instead of the protagonist pretending to be a slap in the face. I reiterate: I only stated my personal preferences and did not instruct the author to write a book. Writing a book is a private matter, and we are not crowdfunding a novel.
There can be no death when cleaning up pollution sources, but how can we win in front of pollution sources? I just want to ask, if there is no death, isn't the source of pollution just a piglet?
The writing by the author of Unhokage is very lacking, and many of the settings are inconsistent with the original work. In the original work, the Senju clan was disbanded by Tobirama himself, but Tobirama actually asked where the Senju clan was? I don't know how someone dares to use the conspiracy theory version of Naruto with so many IQ loopholes.
It's surprisingly interesting. Ninjutsu is easy to talk about, but I can't figure out how the currency of the ninja world can be exchanged for its origin.
What I want to see is a river of blood, a change in destiny, breaking of shackles, and the process of the original characters breaking free from their fate step by step. But what you wrote is about the interaction between the protagonist and the white-haired lolita. It is about the protagonist's daily life every few chapters, which does not promote the plot at all, okay?
The level of force is low, the god of the world uses noble robes? Not only is there a dynamic world on the robe, humans are plowing fields, the sun, the moon and stars, but there are also countless living beings, not just humans, who are the source of pollution in bloody battles. The imagination and style can be bigger, and it can also be used to ambush and arouse the emotions of the bloody battlers.
The character design of One Piece is really bad. Sengoku doesn't have such a good impression of the Celestial Dragons. The Sengoku in this book is simply the most loyal bastard of the Celestial Dragons. Sengoku just heard that the World Government has no good opinion of the Celestial Dragons. Garp calls the Celestial Dragons trash every day. Just because of Sengoku's bastard character in this book, one of these two would have died long ago.
Banknotes are made of wool. What can you do. The agency responsible for printing money is simply invincible, right? Directly print a ∞ amount of money to recharge and buy out all the things you put on the shelves, and you will also get the materials owed to the money printing agency. 😃😃😃😃😃😃