
The Game Merchant from the Ninja World
从忍界开始的游戏商人
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- English
- Request a translation
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80.3kFans
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My perspective and some suggestions
This is a fanfiction about a mastermind behind the scenes. There are two main points to consider. Firstly, many characters in the original storyline, after learning a lot of information and gaining the power to change their fate, disrupted the original storyline.
It's interesting, but it's better if the protagonist remains hidden. After all, this is an ensemble piece, a behind-the-scenes story. The greatest joy of this book lies in the sparks and interactions between characters from multiple worlds. As for how the protagonist becomes stronger, the conspiracies, and the power struggles, those are completely irrelevant.
The protagonist didn't "disappear" at all!
First, let me clarify: the book was written by the author. As a reader, I'm not asking the author to create something tailor-made for me, but rather offering my opinion and simply stating my personal preferences. (Armor layering complete) I've seen other readers, like myself, commenting that the main character should have less screen time and shouldn't constantly interfere in the course of…
If cleaning up pollution sources can be done without any deaths, then how did the pollution source win in the first place? I just want to ask, if there are no deaths, isn't the pollution source just a piglet?
The author of Cloud Naruto is quite lacking, with many things deviating from the original setting. In the original work, the Senju clan was disbanded by Tobirama himself, yet Tobirama still asked where the Senju clan was? The conspiracy theory version of Naruto has so many logical flaws, yet people still dare to use it; it's nonsensical.
Surprisingly interesting. Ninjutsu is easy to understand, but I can't figure out how the currency in the ninja world can be exchanged for Origin.
What I wanted to see was rivers of blood, a change of fate, breaking free of shackles, and the original characters gradually breaking free from their destiny. But what you wrote was just the protagonist interacting with a white-haired loli, and filler chapters with scenes of the protagonist's daily life every few chapters—it didn't advance the plot at all.
That's too lowbrow. A world god wearing a noble robe? No, the entire robe should be covered in dynamic depictions of heaven and earth, humans farming, the sun, moon, and stars, plus countless life forms—not just humans, but also those battling pollution sources. The imagination and the level of sophistication could be much higher, and it could even foreshadow future events and stir up the emotions of the warriors.
The character designs in One Piece are really inconsistent. Sengoku doesn't actually have any goodwill towards the Celestial Dragons. In this book, Sengoku is practically the Celestial Dragons' most loyal lackey. Sengoku only speaks ill of the Celestial Dragons because of what the World Government says. Garp constantly calls the Celestial Dragons trash and useless. With Sengoku's lackey-like personality in this book, one of them would have died long ago.
What's the use of paper money? What can you do with it? The organization responsible for printing money is practically invincible. They could just print an infinity coin and use it to buy up everything on your shelves, and you'd still owe the printing organization supplies.