Immortality: Starting from the Entry on Luck

I don't understand why the protagonist in the author has already guessed that someone is going to mess with him, and he is still a powerful being in the sect, and then haha, there is a great master who takes the initiative to let the protagonist hug him. Hey, the author just forcibly subdues his wisdom. Why doesn't he want to have too many ties with the sect, so he won't hug him even if he is beaten to death? It's okay if you want to write about the protagonist's own development, but the villain you created is something that the protagonist can afford at this stage? The true biography of the sect master, the great master, the author asked the protagonist to go to the sect to find fault? Just force the plot. Originally I didn't want to subscribe to a chapter, but I just couldn't help but want to complain. It's awesome, next book.

If you follow the label of decisiveness and killing, you can just quit it. The protagonist is written as a person with low emotional intelligence. He is also very talkative. There are more dialogues in a fight than descriptions of the battle. When people want to run away, the protagonist also says that he wants to run away. Have you asked me? Xxxx, do you come and leave when you want? At the end of the battle, you still have to ask the enemy if he has any last words? I just want to know how the label of decisive killing was affixed😒

I don't want to read anymore, it's all poisonous, it's the old way of writing, there's nothing new.

When I first started reading it, the beginning gave me a sense of instant vision of a martial arts novel. Later, when I entered the immortal sect, it got much better and I had a feeling of cultivating immortals The plot is generally good, and it is a good subject for a refreshing article, but the plot is too flat and there is no big excitement. Many plot characters The IQ and thinking are not online, it is more like the kind of writing that is written specifically for the sake of fun The more you go to the back, the more you go. Really, every article is constantly improving the word count. At the beginning, it is just one chapter and one panel. Later, there are many conversations and panels in each chapter. After finishing one chapter, the male protagonist has not improved at all. Many times it is necessary to use other characters to flesh out the male protagonist, but what you wrote... Includes panels. You can write about what the male protagonist has obtained, but there is no need to list everything the male protagonist has every time he obtains one. You can open a small chapter every dozens or hundreds of chapters. It is used to remind readers of the abilities possessed by the male protagonist. You Shuwenshui... Be careful, there really aren't any cool articles to read recently. This article is generally good without mentioning Shuiwen. If you want to read cool articles, you can read it, but don't have high expectations.

I really can't stand it anymore. He feeds me again and again💩 Can the author himself stand it?

I was getting more and more wet, so I read the book while reading it.

This book is good. I found a lot of things that I didn't like. I'd like to ask those who say it doesn't like it and leave quietly. After all, there are many people who like it. There's no need to mess with other people's mentality.

Regarding where the divine soul's luck went in the later stage,

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The protagonist of this book is the coldest and most selfish protagonist I have ever read. When I read Chapter 283, I suddenly couldn't stand it anymore and my heart dropped. Such a protagonist can be considered a human being! ? Xiaoxiao devoted her whole heart and soul to you, and gave you control of her natal sword, which is a life-and-death relationship. What did she get! ? It's just a useless hairpin, and you can just pile all the good things on yourself. Those unwanted exercises, retired magic weapons, etc., Just sell them. You don't think about the people around you. If you don't give them first-hand goods, you won't even give them second-hand goods. . . Damn, I've never thought of it this way. . . Do you still remember your sword god guard who was willing to do anything for you? ! When it is useful, it is kept nearby to fend for itself. When it is not useful, I don't know where to throw it now. . . . That little phoenix. . . . You only let the cattle plow the land and don't let them graze. . . When I come to you, I can't even feed you, and I don't have any help. I don't have any spiritual fluid, so I have to rely on myself to sleep and practice. . . . If you hadn't wanted to suck their golden luck, you would have dumped them long ago! ? The most rubbish and coldest protagonist, others should give you good things and give you fine clothes and fine food, while others have to eat chaff and drink rags and rags! ? The low combat effectiveness of the people around you is caused by you. It hinders the development of others, just because of you. How can a person like this expect him to save the world and turn the tide! ? Does he have this panel? ? Rubbish!

The biggest logical flaw in this kind of book is that after a bunch of talents are acquired and a few years have passed after completing hundreds of cards, the talents you acquired are as useless as achievements. You just need to practice your talents for several years to get anywhere.

At the beginning, a bandit came to the city and robbed it openly, without even giving up the appearance of peace. Is it true that the greatest strength in the world is the bandit?

In stallion stories, all the lucky ones are women, and then they get entangled with the protagonist. There are not many children in the story who are pregnant 😤

When I saw it on the shelf, I felt that I had no taste for this book and it was a pity to abandon it, but I still gave it up because the more I read, the more uncomfortable I became.

This protagonist is really suppressed. There are so many good luck entries, and Jingtai Palm has been cultivated to perfection. It is described as similar to the Eight Forbidden Gods that cover the sky. As a result, such a strong protagonist cannot even fight across realms, and is still torturing people in the same realm in the Tongmai realm. I just saw that the title of that chapter is called Cross-Border War. Does this mean it's called Cross-Border? It's obvious that they all have Tongmai, but it's just a ghost. This is only the early stage of this book. Cross-border fighting is so difficult even at this level. So what should we do next? How to highlight the protagonist's awesomeness? The whole body red entries can only go up to a few small steps (such as Tongmai 4 versus 6) I guess. In this case, what kind of fighting power is needed? As long as the state is improved, you will be invincible. Just like in the article about the outer sect competition, everyone is optimistic about the girl's name, Su Luo, right?

The original article said that if you reveal your identity token, a saint will give you face. If someone wants to kill him later, I will not reveal it. I will just say that once the decree is sacrificed, it can only be used once. Who asked you to write down the ritual paper? If you show your identity token, who dares to touch you? I'm convinced, I'm really convinced. As mentioned above, I have the identity of a student of the Holy Academy, and I don't have any worries anymore. There is a Dharma image in the backhand that wants to attack you. I have no choice for a moment. I just don't reveal my identity, just play, win, that's it.

I regret having ordered 20 chapters in advance just for the sake of a review. It doesn't matter how wet you are, even if you want to make money, you can tolerate it. But Yoneda Kyou couldn't bear to feed her when nothing happened. Especially if the queen of the sect refuses to become a disciple...

Obviously the author has changed I told Ji Yueyue in Chapter 288, and Ji Yueyue said in Chapter 301 that she didn't know. . . And the writing style seems to be changing all the time. The only thing that remains constant is that it is getting better and better.

Let's not talk about the water. The key point is what the hell is it that poison is used? The protagonist's father is chopped off, and the protagonist helps guide a woman from the enemy's family to achieve immortality? ? ? What the hell kind of logic is this?

The author knows how to write a book, even if he needs water, he should also feed him from time to time💩

When I see it now, I feel that in order to set off the protagonist, Gu Mo's talent is not like the purple talent at all. For example, Chapter 36 gave me the feeling that the purple swordsmanship talent of practicing the Wind and Thunder Sword is definitely not as good as the protagonist's blue comprehension talent.

Well, let me tell you, it's not that I'm reluctant to spend money, but the problem is that money is also spent. Once it is put on the shelves, most of the authors' writings are getting worse and worse. This is really disgusting. As for IQ, the nine-year compulsory education in time travel, that is, junior high school, if you are in high school or university, you can't be so low-IQ, right? It's difficult to write novels. At least my IQ is online.

I've been wondering about the word count since I saw 300 chapters. A new setting only takes a few hundred words. I wish I could have a new setting in every chapter. Why do you explain it in such detail? Who wants to read the setting? Can't you just summarize it in one sentence?

The brainless protagonist is a perfect match for the second-rate author who likes to improvise street settings.

It's really a waste of time to take such a good idea for you.

The most useless protagonist's combat power I've ever seen 😅, top-notch gold entries, and a bunch of purple entries, most of which are used in the early stage, either with unparalleled physical combat power, special physique, or pupil skills, giving Ye Fan a two-step jump in the early stage. All the big realms are crossed. The protagonist is facing a so-called genius with a small horn. After crossing the third or fourth level, just because he has crossed a big realm, he worries about this and that every day 🤔, saying that the other person is also a genius and cannot be compared with ordinary people. TM The ancient human emperor used his mortal body to kill an immortal! The person who can become an immortal is not ten thousand times better than you, the arrogant genius from the lower realm, isn't he still being beaten by someone from across the realm? Why is it that when you get to the protagonist, you are dancing like this 😅? Isn't it the blood of the Human Emperor? Isn't it the ancient double eye? I beg you not to insult the Human Emperor and the ancient sages. The only purpose is to write it on the panel to give readers a sense of comfort, because any bull demon genius with a corner of my head has purple luck. If they gather together at any time, they will be as purple as dogs, and gold will be everywhere🙄. That Wanshou Wujiang thing has been working for a long time without discovering its effect. What's the use of being alive? Without the power to protect the Dao, he is nothing more than a walking corpse. If you don't have that expressiveness, don't play this trick on the protagonist and just brag about it, buddy🤔.

I watched it on QQ. I couldn't stand it after reading 300 chapters. There were no book reviews there. So I came here to take a look. I was relieved to see that the deacons were scolding me. But can this book really equalize 6000? The logic is self-consistent. "Only 10,000 people can be on the list. One person is on the list and one person is off. Do you know what this means? It means that none of the 100 people on the Supreme List of the previous generation were on the list." My hair? Where did you come to this conclusion? Repeat indefinitely, let's not talk about the panel, let's talk about the most classic one, how many times has this nonsense phrase "the sea of ​​​​qi doubled" appeared? ? This is really invincible if it can equalize 6000.

Just made up a bunch of notes, no good stories or good people. The protagonist is ruthless and unreasonable, and the story is all about upgrading along the way. I don't know why it is always recommended. The protagonist's outlook on life makes me always feel that the author is also such a person, otherwise I wouldn't be able to write with this feeling.

If anyone doesn't know what the protagonist is like in the early and middle stages, I'll show you the original text: Chapter 183, the protagonist suddenly understands the rules of the wind system, and the female supporting maid Shu Xiaoxiao said: The protagonist's talent is not only unprecedented in the history of the Qianyuan Kingdom, but it is also at a level that can only be counted on one finger. Hahaha 😆😆, one gold, nine purple talent entries, talent like an ancient human emperor, in a small marginal country founded by the highest legal realm on the initial village map, its talent is "can be said to be" only a handful, hahaha, only a handful 🤔🤔. May I ask how many true immortals your ancestors produced?🤔🤔

He obviously has the writing power of a second-rate writer, but he wrote this third-rate trash called "The Crooked Master". This is all due to what you said in Chapter 11: (Ma Quan, follow up! As soon as he finished speaking, Jiang Yuan's figure suddenly disappeared here, running towards the north)... At least in this case, if you think about it a little, you will not fall into the ranks of third-rate garbage writers. What a pity.