Douluo Dalu: My Martial Soul Is Gengar, and I'm a Guardian of the Soul Hall

When will the author write Groudon? Groudon's solar domain matches well with the angel family. And when Qian Renxue flew into the sky and laughed at the protagonist's Groudon spirit that couldn't fly, it felt pretty good to use the Cliff Sword. Original Groudon also felt great fighting Poseidon Tang San in the sea. He pinned Tang San down in the sea and beat him violently, then said that I also know a Poseidon, but not as hard-hitting as you (the Poseidon specifically refers to Kyogre).

Originally the front line was pretty good, Twin Martial Spirits also had the advantage of knowing the plot well, with a little bit of planning, a little bit of growth, the anticipation was overwhelming! As a result, the style of the painting changed and a system suddenly appeared... And it suddenly felt boring. It's not that the system is bad, it's just that it's boring if the system is too high. Moreover, the title and introduction of your book do not say that there is a system. The contrast is too great. In addition, there is a system that definitely makes it easy to pass the level, which instantly dissipates most of the sense of expectation. Even the 100,000-year-old soul bone mentioned earlier by the protagonist, and Xiao Wu's soul ring... Their value has plummeted, regardless of whether they have it or not. After all, the system is already the biggest plug-in. If there is a system, nothing will be difficult, and readers will be sure that the protagonist will succeed 100%, without that vague sense of expectation... Sigh.

Dou Po came and Douluo opened a branch of the Soul Palace.

You didn't change Chapter 55 and just pushed it down. No matter what your purpose was when you wrote it, no one will see you pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger.

Food and grass can be read, the protagonist has not lost his IQ, has not stepped into any traps, and the meat-eaters are not eunuchs.

It feels like there are too many things added. Just add a Geng Gui martial spirit and a Poke Ball martial spirit. Gengar is poisonous and ghost type. The ghost is immune to physical attacks, which is equivalent to being immune to all Tang San's hidden weapons. If you develop poison attributes. You can take Dugu Bo as your teacher and find a way to take Bloody Swan Kiss to turn your body into a poisonous body. In the future, you can become stronger by taking poison. Eating Dugu Bo's poison, then eating Dugu Yan's poison, and then eating Tang San's poison in turn poisoned Tang San. This kind of plot should be very interesting. There is also an elf ball martial spirit, which can subdue spirit beasts and add a life soul ring to the elf ball. Use the life ball to collect the bodies of the two dragon kings of ice and fire, and slowly resurrect the two dragon kings in the life ball to form an army of soul beasts and become beast gods. In the future, we will create a system similar to Pokémon, allowing spirit beasts to team up with their own spirit masters to fight together. And using the spirit ball spirit and Geng Gui spirit to perform spirit fusion skills can make Geng Gui spirit become a giant. If you write it like this, half a million words will definitely be enough, and it will better integrate the elements of Pokémon and Douluo. Author, your writing is very good, and I keep reading it. But it seems that the highlight of Pokémon is not written out.

Wang Po sells melons and boasts about herself.

I hope the writing is reasonable. Nowadays, many Douluo texts can be written about existences similar to Daluo Jinxian. Don't even look at Douluo's character. It would be good to raise a being who is more powerful than the God King. I don't know how many years the Dragon God has lived. Still gifted. Only slightly stronger than the God King

Er said that even if Xiao Wu was a rabbit, there would be no need to target her like this. Isn't this too villainous? You might as well just force the sacrifice to you in the early stage.

First of all, I have never been an author, but I want to say, is it difficult to write 100 chapters a day? It's not that I am being unreasonable. After all, I said at the beginning that I have never been an author.