
Douluo Dalu: The Unrivaled Tang Sect: I Picked Up Qian Renxue, Who Had Transmigrated
斗罗绝世:我捡到了穿越的千仞雪
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- Ongoing
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- 221k Words
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- Light Novel
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- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2d ago
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- Qidian
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84Chapters
632Votes
4.7kRecs
23.6kFans
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It's better to include all the main characters that should be included, otherwise it will become a fanfic. It's just a matter of pure love to include one or two. If you don't want it at the beginning, most readers will be eliminated directly. The audience can be said to be very small, except for the senior sister's book, which is not very popular.
The level of human development of the book Douluo Dalu is less than 1/10000
After reading more than ten chapters, let's talk about it
According to the development of the plot, he will not go to Shrek Academy. Of course, Qian Renxue and the protagonist cannot be brainwashed by Shrek. Also, if you want to rebuild the Wuhun Palace in the Dou Er environment, it is basically impossible in the original Douluo Three Kingdoms, unless you go to the Sun and Moon Empire to develop, and the protagonist's Wuhun is his true self, so he will inevitably come into contact with the Noumenon Sect. I hope the author can handle the subsequent plot, and I look forward to it~
Accept the Snow Emperor or not, this is a gentle big sister who can become my mother 🙂
Except for my senior's book, none of the others have exceeded 1 million. Is the author experiencing a bottleneck?
I just want more girls, no sex, don't live broadcast for the male partner to watch/don't leak/don't touch.
In fact, it would be better for the author to arrange for the protagonist to go to the Noumenon Sect. As for Zhang Lexuan. You can learn from other fans' conspiracy theories. For example, Moon fell in love with her innate talent of full soul power. He wanted her to be a child bride for his great-great-grandson. As the mother body that reproduces offspring. But she has a family of her own. The talent is so good. Her parents would definitely not agree to letting her become a child bride. So just do one thing and two things. First, collude with the evil soul master to destroy all their families. Afterwards, they killed people and silenced them in the name of revenge. Repay the favor again. In this way, you can obtain a reproductive mother who is extremely talented and dedicated. Makes sense. Otherwise, how could an evil soul master with the ability to destroy a whole family not find her under the bed? And don't tell Zhang Lexuan. Just fake this clue and message. Let her discover the clues slowly by herself. Then connect them together. She must be convinced 🙂
I'm writing a chapter of Douluo a day, but I'm not in the mood to pursue it anymore.
I have read fifty or sixty Douluo fanfics and I have some opinions of my own. The most popular and exciting storylines in Dou Yi include the following 1. Theoretical flow, using self-justifying martial soul theory to constantly adjust some of the tricks of matching soul rings and soul skills, and even in the later stages, stepping on the left foot and the right foot turns the meter upside down. From a reader's point of view, the most important thing for this genre to be enjoyable is that the "theory" must be self-consistent, and the second is to have "fancy work". 2. Ntr flow, needless to say more about this. Although you can see many comments in the comment area saying that they don't like characters with flaws like Bibi Dong, Liu Erlong and Xiaowu, but judging from the results of the Taitule professional users on the site, there are still many readers who like to read NTR's yellow-haired perspective. If you want to have a sense of satisfaction, you have to write about the feeling of being awesome to others. It is not just about bulldozing love, but about being awesome to others. What readers want is the kind of contrast and excitement that takes advantage of the situation and turns a flawed character from a high to a perverted one. But it is very taboo to write about the heroine in a very negative way. Readers will know the result of ntr in the introduction. What readers want to see is the process of ntr. 3. The third level of abuse and the first level of abuse. This one is basically bundled with the previous one. It just depends on which aspect you focus on. The core of the fun is that the "reasonable" or at least logical and self-consistent plot makes Tang San and Yu Xiaogang doubt and deny themselves in their hearts, and they will be frustrated every time they want to rise up in the plot. But it is very taboo to flatten the villain character for the sake of being black. Even if you want to torture the three gangs and the gangs, you must set up a reasonable reason for the "enmity" between the protagonist and the gangs. 4. Plot flow, this feeling is a bit outdated. Although the audience is wider and the upper limit is higher, it is difficult to write your own unique selling points. It is not vertical enough, and the requirements for writing and plot arrangement will be higher. Most of the many useless articles I have read that are tasteless and discarded are mostly from this track. Moreover, this track was the first to appear. There are too many existing articles and too many high-quality articles, and there are too many substitutes for ordinary readers. As a result, the reader retention rate is not high. Combined with the author's consistent writing style and Dou Yi Dou San's unique Taitale options, this book can combine the elements of multiple women and ntr. The author's character creation is still relatively three-dimensional, adding more emotional lines of the female character to show the psychological changes of the female character, the sufferer and the protagonist during the process of being a cow. Of course, in addition to the ntr elements, the normal female characters should be included. After all, there are many female novels. As long as they are within the author's control and don't write like a stallion bulldozer, the female protagonist will have a larger base of readers if she receives more points.
Sure enough, Dou Er is easier to write, but there are really not many people who can write Dou San well.