Myriad Worlds: Starting with Devouring

Good women should be cherished, bad women should not be wasted, and the fate of others should be respected!

In chapter 53, the protagonist tells Huang Rong that he is going to kill a demon more powerful than himself, and Huang Rong says she wants to go with him, to which the protagonist agrees! Knowing full well he was about to do something big—slay demons stronger than himself—he still brought along a burden, despite his potential for growth! His desire to show off is blatantly obvious! He's hypocritical!

I hope the protagonist is a bit cold and aloof, doesn't meddle in other people's business, and is decisive about leaving the sofa (on the sofa). Thank you.

A disastrous start, and the story of Huang Rong is told through the lens of Swallowing the Stars.

To be honest, I really shouldn't have written about immortality, because the world of immortality is too far-fetched. The most typical example is the Xuanhuang Great World. According to the initial description, it was just a slightly larger continent, but later they added the existence of infinite parallel spaces, like billions of light-years away. But what's the reality?

I won't go into the details of what came before, but I remember seeing the protagonist refine the Five Yin Bag to exchange for the Dragon Blood Potion and then the poison took effect. Even if the author considered the Five Yin Bag as ordinary storage equipment, its value from devouring the primordial universe would be far greater than that, not to mention it's a magical artifact with growth potential and additional attack capabilities. 🥵

This book is utterly uninteresting. The protagonist seems to have the mentality of a loser. If he looks down on the world of Condor Heroes, does that mean only Huang Rong is worth it? I can't understand how the author could write something so boring and uninteresting.

Could you write more about Devouring? Could you write less about Japanese manga? Japanese manga is so nostalgic these days. If you really want to write, then write a book for those who like it. Adding Japanese manga to a novel/fanfiction feels like adding shit to my reading list. I have absolutely no interest in subscribing. I almost never watch Japanese manga; in my 27 years, I've only ever watched one: Akame ga Kill!

This isn't fan fiction; it's plagiarism disguised as fan fiction. It shows absolutely no respect for the original work.

Since the author created the world of The Legend of the Condor Heroes, they shouldn't be criticizing the original work while simultaneously claiming it's inadequate. Seriously, if the author put the protagonist in the world of The Legend of the Condor Heroes, give them an internal energy cultivation manual—they wouldn't even be able to get started.