If I Have Full Favorability, I Will Never Die in the Shura Field.

Which one of you will replace you?

The arrangement of Shuangdian is too dense, and the next 20 chapters are a bit boring and boring. There are too many female characters, and sometimes it can be confusing to tell who is who. At present, except for the protagonist and the little fox demon from 300 years ago, all characters lack subjective initiative and are too instrumental and homogeneous. Secondly, the images of the characters are too thin. After reading it, most of the characters are only remembered by their names. Regarding homogeneity, in the currently unfolding story, the little fox demon and the Shaoqing of Dali Temple were both rescued by the protagonist when they were young and found a way out. They both have complex emotions for the protagonist and are demons. Although it feels that the author has different positions for them, as a reader, the difference between these two characters is only A and A. If you delete all the plots where the female characters are similar, it will not feel inconsistent even if you say that they are the same person. Regarding tooling, most characters only have a golden tool like tags for the protagonist. In the plot that has been unfolded so far, they are either becoming the Riddler or creating opportunities for the protagonist to pretend. Furthermore, it is wrong that the female characters have no other feelings for the protagonist other than their love for the protagonist. Take the little fox as an example. In her previous life, when she had no parents and a repressed childhood, the only emotion she could have for the protagonist was the pursuit of father's love. The protagonist is a symbol of her father, who shielded her from the wind and rain when she was most helpless, wanted to act coquettishly and cutely in the protagonist's arms, or did something deliberately to gain the protagonist's attention. Take Dali Temple Shaoqing as an example. When she was desperate when she was a child, she was rescued by a cold-faced killing god, and later practiced martial arts with him. In this case, the easiest thing to write about is the feeling of admiration. More than the emotion of a hero saving a beautiful woman, I want to be as strong as him to help him, or stronger than him to protect him, or to become him and save others like him. The story is too bland. Although there are many incidents, the protagonist seems to have seen through everything and solved the problems step by step. There is really nothing wrong with writing it this way, but it lacks a sense of tension and crisis. You can read it once or twice, but it will be boring if you write it this way later, because everyone knows that the protagonist will solve the problem, but the process is just unexpected. I have already figured it out, and there is no dramatic conflict. Even the only crisis so far was that the protagonist deliberately showed mercy, only grabbing the horse but not killing anyone, and was injured. After two battles, the protagonist finally won. This short-lived seemingly crisis was meaningless when written in two seconds. Sigh, I personally don't like reading this kind of harem novels, and a character like the empress is even more poisonous to me. But when I saw a book review that said it looked like Kamen Rider, I had the courage to read the update, and I just pretended to be a bit more like it. The above are all personal opinions, let's just pass them by.

There are a lot of dark streets. Living in Bengbu, you have to go there whenever something goes wrong. The aesthetic fatigue and the concentration of stories here make it a bit bloated.

The supporting characters in Black Market are so stupid, they look like they have lost their brains.

How can you control people's hearts if you don't drive?

The black market part was stupid, but everything else was good. I voted for it.

It's okay, but the descriptions in some parts are quite stupid.

Hasn't this book been written and published before? Do it again?

The content is pretty good and the subject matter is pretty good too, but I don't know why I didn't find it boring.

I identified it as watching "The Legend of Tiangang"

The logic disk of Goldfinger at the back is better, it should be Liangcao

Just finish the book and keep working hard, no big deal

It's beautiful, but why doesn't anyone see it? 2 Ahhhh