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The coolness is not as good as the original version, and fan fiction does not seek to surpass it, but you still have no hair on this coolness 😐 It feels like the experience of anti-inflammatory before clearing the level with low damage 🥱

A lot of copy and pasting of the original text, the writing is very poor, I can't bite the bullet and read 🙂 The two books next door are good, but I have read them both. There is no Yao Lao Xiao Yan to accept the inheritance, and the main character in the academy takes the Devouring Pill at the beginning of the academy. Most parts of this book are directly copied from the original text, with a small part of the original plot, but the protagonist's character is also very fragmented. He is said to be gentle and respectful of his teachers. He often pretends to be cool like a rz. He licks the female partner when he sees him. When he meets the Yao Lao, he has an inexplicable bad attitude and bad temper.

After reading a few chapters, the writing style is too bland. It's like writing a diary to record your daily life and explain what you have done! No desire to read any more 💤

Why do I always think about what Xiao Yan should do? What should I do? Is the protagonist of this book Xiao Yan? I didn't say that you have to go against him! I just want to say, can you treat Xiao Yan as a normal person? If he doesn't mess with you, just ignore him. If he messes with you, just mess with him. If he's friendly to you, you'll be friendly to him. But it's not okay to be Xiao Yan's licker. For example, you give Xiao Yan whatever he needs and give him what he needs for free. Is that a friend? You can exchange it for the alien fire, but first of all, the protagonist or the protagonist's woman does not need it, and don't say that the value of the things the protagonist exchanges for the alien fire with Xiao Yan is too low, or it is just given away for free or something! Or maybe they are afraid that Xiao Yan will not be able to become emperor in the future and will not be able to prevent the Emperor Hun from annihilating the world (it can be prevented, just keep reading if you want to know!). Or they have to say that this is Xiao Yan's future belongings and cannot be taken. Whether Xiao Yan can become emperor or not is none of your business! If you are really afraid of this and that, hide the ancient jade and no one will find it! No one can be found! The Soul Clan can't find it either. If it could be found, it would have been found long ago. (Xiao Yan ran around in Zhongzhou with the ancient jade and no one found it. Unless Xiao Yan took the initiative to expose his traces, so he concluded that there is no way to find the Tuoshe Ancient Emperor Jade.) The Soul Clan can't find it either. Hun Tian How could the Emperor destroy the world? The destruction of the world started after finding the Emperor Pill first, that is, the destruction of Zhongzhou. In other words, it started by using the Emperor Jade to open the cave and get the Emperor Pill. If the ancient jade was hidden and no one could find it, wouldn't the protagonist have time to develop? Without the ancient jade, no one can become an emperor without the ancient jade to open the cave, so that's it! There won't be any Soul Heaven Emperor slaughtering Zhongzhou or anything, and there won't be any big danger! If you hide the ancient jade and no one can find it, then there is not that much danger. There is no danger at the same level as having the ancient jade and without it. The degree of danger is different. As soon as you tell me what to do with Xiao Yan and what to do with Xiao Yan, I know that this book is going to start licking Xiao Yan, and you are saying that Gu Xun'er is not important! Let me tell you, Gu Xun'er is the friendliest to innocent people. If you hide the ancient jade, no one will be able to find the ancient jade. (If the ancient jade could be found by sensing each other, it would have been found long ago. When Xiao Yan ran around with the ancient jade, the Soul Clan would have found it directly. But did the Soul Clan find it? No, why? The fact that the ancient jade was not found means that there is no way to find the ancient jade. The ancient jade is obviously very important to the Soul Clan. If they can really confirm it. The ancient jade is on that person, so the Fighting Saint of the Soul Clan takes action. It is not easy for the Fighting Saint to take action against Xiao Yan who has not grown up. Considering the importance of the ancient jade to the Soul Clan, the Fighting Saint will definitely be sent, and eventually the Fighting Saint will be sent again, and once the Fighting Saint fails, the Fighting Saint will be sent immediately to fight monsters and get promoted. They will send you people one by one, because the longer it takes, the worse it will be. Not to mention things like fighting saints and above who cannot take action. Who knows when the Soul Clan is secretly destroying the other eight ancient clans? They don't even know it from the beginning, so wouldn't it be easier for them to deal with Xiao Yan who has not grown up? The most powerful ancient clan has fighting saints, and the soul clan can be wiped out silently, let alone Xiao Yan! And in the original work, Xiao Yan didn't take the initiative to jump out, and the soul clan couldn't find it. At most, they would attack your power, etc., Which means that the soul clan has no way to find the ancient jade) If you can't find Ancient Jade, no one can become an emperor. The protagonist will have time to develop. If you don't die or Gu Xun'er really can't develop, didn't you see that Xiao Yan, a fighter, asks Ling Ying to follow him when he goes out for training?

What is the protagonist's attitude towards Xiao Yan? Let's call it hostility. He doesn't want to steal Xun'er Yao Lao, but is afraid of affecting Xiao Yan's success as emperor, and then wants to steal Qinglian's heart fire. What does he think 🤫

You said earlier that you were afraid of affecting his mentality and delaying his becoming emperor, but you also snatched his most important starting strange fire. This strange fire is the most important. Without his Xiao Yan Kung Fu, Huang Jie's cultivation speed is like constipation, and his combat power is rubbish. Qinglian's Earth Core Fire has less impact than Qinglian's Earth Core Fire, unless you provoke Han Feng before Xiao Yan's master, kill him and trade Hai Xinyan with Yao Lao for things. This is the best solution I can think of that does not affect Xiao Yan. As for adding new strange fires, can the time be grasped, and it is quite abrupt in itself.

Why did Hu Guxuner set his birth point in the Xiao family?

If you don't stop Hu Xun'er, the Xiao family started the game just to make the Soul Clan remember you, and the Soul Palace pays attention to you? Just to attract hatred without any benefit? You must know that the stronger the Xiao family is, the easier it is for the ancient soul clan to think that the ancient jade is on you. Create a Xiao family identity and you should be Xiao Yan's father. Help him attract hatred. Don't use Xuner's Xiao family identity.

If you have time to not practice, just go to the desert to lick snake humans? Last time, I was blackmailed by the Snake Man and the Lion to extort the elixir. Now I will go to help evolve for free. I was insulted by the Snake Man and gave him the Po Sect Emperor Pill before leaving. What? Is this Snake Tribe version T0, or can he become a Dou Emperor if he licks it?

The protagonist was born in the Xiao family. As a result, Hu Guxun'er instantly felt that he had no soul, so he decided to delete her and leave 😤😤😤

Does the author still have the mentality to write? 😂The title of the book is about Lei, and it starts in the Xiao family? I can be sure that if you write original plots from other places at the beginning, it will definitely be better than now. In this way, you only need to set the realm so that it does not conflict with the original work. Take a look at 👀 the other reviews of your book 😂 If you had an original opening plot, those problems would be gone.

If we don't accept Xiao Xun'er, there is no need to write about the beginning of the Xiao family, and it would be terrible for us

It's really hard to see. Speaking of breaking through without obstacles, one must refine the obstacle-breaking elixir. The writing style is completely imitating Doupo. Won't I go directly to see Dou Po?

Dou Po is either thunder or fire, are they both so limited? The Soul Emperor can use formations to devour the emperors of ancient tribes. Why is there no protagonist who is a master of formations, creates new formations, and connects to the starry sky to absorb source power? Or the protagonist is an alchemy master who creates a new elixir and uses that dragon and phoenix fruit as the main medicine. In addition, those with high bloodlines from the ancient tribe are used as auxiliary medicine (such as Gu Xun'er, Gu Long, Gu Feng, Medusa, etc.), Plus other strange medicines, to create a new variety of Emperor Dan. Is it true that only the Emperor Grade Zou Dan is a Dan? Can he only follow the path of his predecessors? Don't know how to create your own path?

Will you write or not? It takes more than ten days to write a chapter, and I can stop updating for several months at a time. If you don't want to write, just get out.

What is the top talent of Dou Po? The Dou Qi talent is at the divine bloodline level, the soul talent is at the medicine spirit level, and the physique is comparable to that of the Supreme Dragon and Phoenix. I don't know if the protagonist has reached it 🙂

In the original work, Xiao Yan also broke through Dou Di at level 30. The author said that he was 30 years old, but he felt that Xiao Yun's plug-in was of no use. Although he may not be more than 30 years old before he broke through the Dou Emperor, but now he was in his 20s and over before he broke through the two-star Dou Saint, and he still felt uncomfortable. Moreover, Xiao Yun's personality is similar to that of Xiao Yan, and it's just a matter of luck. So what's the point of reading fan fiction? What's the difference from the original work? It is recommended that the author not generalize the age to close to 30 😥😥

I'm going to change my profile, but the current one looks so embarrassing🤡

To be honest, the writing is really bad. . . And there are several hehes in each chapter. I don't know what you are saying.

Aren't you writing a harem fic or did the Xiao family not accept Xiao Xun'er at the beginning? Do you think leaking girls are more attractive to readers?

The writing and plot are very good and non-toxic, better than those written by 80% of Dou Po fans, but it's a pity that the author cut it 😅

I must have come relatively late. I read this book and thought it was quite good, but it was just too hasty and everything was over before the explanation was completed.

For the sake of a sixth-grade elixir, I agreed to help others practice five sixth-grade elixirs.

I didn't watch it. I came here to comment on Douyin. What the hell is this plot? There is a golden finger that can directly skip the level. What you should do is not to collect a bunch of alchemist wives and worship some alchemist masters (you can consider becoming a rebel disciple and cheating to get the medicine). The medicine is still a fucking drug, go straight to the development of the Alchemist Guild and the Alchemy Pagoda, and then directly become the Parallel Dou Emperor and destroy the Soul Clan. If you have nothing to do, just practice fighting skills and chop people. Don't say it's not possible. If you can't do it, doesn't it mean that you are a cheat? 🥵 Others take drugs to overdraw their potential, but you are equivalent to ignoring the negative effects of taking drugs, and then do the Fallen Heart Flame to calcine the fighting spirit to accelerate the development of quality. I will ask for a dose. Why is Xiao Yan? It is enough to do something to enhance the soul later.

Is there a possibility that in ancient times, Wu Yao and Su Youwei once visited Dou Qi Continent and left some source energy to Dou Qi Continent to improve the foundation of the plane, so these powerful Dou Emperor warriors were born in different eras. After all the source energy is used up, Dou Emperor will no longer be able to emerge. After all, Dou Qi Continent doesn't even have plane embryos, but there are more powerful people at the first level of Dou Emperor Ancestral Realm than Tianxuan Continent. If it was done by two quasi-god-level people, Wu Yao and Su Youwei, then everything would make sense.

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Seriously, why do I always have to have a harem when reading this fanfic?

In Canaan Academy, if you don't practice Fen Jue with four kinds of strange fires, now you can directly advance to the earth level by practicing Fen Jue. The plot is okay, but the writing is too bad.

If nothing else, there are just a lot of typos and some sentences are not very smooth.

This book is exactly the same as the one that touches your life system, but there is no system.