
I Have an Eight-Array Diagram Under One Person
一人之下我有一个八阵图
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 166k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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I saw Chapter 19 and it seems to be pretty good. Personally, I think the clarinet and Xiao Zizai can be killed or crippled. After all, the other party broke the contract and killed it first. If the protagonist was not strong enough, he would have died. Don't talk about the other party's background. He knows everything. The so-called temporary workers are those who do illegal work, and the company is not responsible for this.
The protagonist's mind is a bit like an online novel from more than ten years ago... Generally speaking, there are no major shortcomings, but there are no bright spots. It gives me the feeling that he does not have the heart of an adult.
Why was Ma Xianhong still stunned by Feng Qi, and he almost let Qu Tong succeed again. The writing here is too blunt. Feng Qi could say it was for safety reasons, but knocking him out was too blunt. In order to draw out the plot of Zhuge Yuan coming to save him, and then force Zhuge Yuan to participate? ? ?
I felt really uncomfortable after looking at the front. The author's writing is not bad, but the way the plot is advanced is too old. Your writing method is not suitable for most fanfics, especially under one person. That's not to say that you can't have conflicts between the protagonist and the temporary workers, but you have to have a life-and-death feud right from the start? ? These characters in the original work have their own shining points, and many people like them. You have to make them more one-sided and then oppose the protagonist to increase the conflicts in the plot. Zhang Chulan's smoothness was written as cunning, and Brother Xiao was also portrayed as losing his self-control, which in turn set off the protagonist's promise and strength. You clearly want to promote the protagonist and deliberately trample the original character. This is a taboo in fan fiction. Writing like this will only make it uncomfortable for you to write and for the readers to read.
The writing was okay, but the main character had no energy.
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Zhuge Yuan, Brother Huozi is on his way here
It's mediocre, nothing exciting.
Why not Hetu Luoshu. . .
Why can't I comment in the chapter😥
The protagonist has an awkward personality
Although he has traveled to a world of one person, there is no need to always be limited by Mi Er's world view. If you haven't traveled through time, it's limited to 2 meters. If you've traveled through time, you're still limited to 2 meters. You didn't travel in vain. Temporary workers are not a good thing in the first place. To put it bluntly, they are shady people who do shady things. If you give someone a break and they try to trick you, how can you guarantee that they won't trick others again in the future? If you want to be stubborn, be serious about it; if you want to be perverted, be perverted enough. I'm already very annoyed and annoyed at work, and now I'm still annoyed while reading a novel. Isn't this novel just a waste of time?
Eight array diagram? The one from the TV series? The one who turns the stars in a random motion?