Starting from an Agricultural Powerhouse

With the "Super Agricultural Power" in front of me, I couldn't even copy the homework😨, and my writing was messy.

The writing is a bit stiff. After reading more than 30 chapters, I can't see anything interesting. It's better than a running account. Readers were looking at agriculture, but they were stunned by what you wrote and didn't expand on it. Sometimes the rhythm of the plot is too slow, which will only cause thunder. No one likes a protracted plot. Look at it for me, it's just too slow and not fun. It is tasteless to eat and it is a pity to throw it away. If you write a batch of chapters like this and put them on the shelves, no one will be willing to pay for them, or even more than a dozen chapters.

As far as the current content is concerned, I think it is the novel that best deals with Goldfinger and the relationship between men and women.

Vegetables, sweet and spicy.

. . . . I only wrote a few science and technology chapters, but the rest is all about love, love, love and the like. Forget it, wait until I write the science and technology chapter. Let's take care of it first.

After reading the introduction, I thought it was a science and technology article, but it was actually a country romance article... It would be a pity not to go to female channels.

Just to remind you, the author's time in the evening belongs to us to update and update... The following is some advice for the young street guys at Qidian: How long has a certain agricultural power been dominating the rankings, including this Dr. Shit article? I wonder how many millions of words can be read? The experience of asset-heavy high-tech industry, agriculture, rural areas and farmers is really difficult. Can we write about the provenance series and care about animals and plants? Why is no one writing about the rising sun and the road to building an agricultural power? !

It's a bit confusing and the AI ​​is too strong. A production machine. AI does not use the emotion module at all.

It's a mess. How should I put it? Part of the writing is okay, but the big agricultural scene? There are still many places that are difficult to say.

A good book was ruined by an emotional scene

When following up on previous projects, there should be feedback from the public, which could be the findings from roles such as the main coordinator.

Even if the author's protagonist is successful, it is impossible to do everything. Even if the protagonist is very good and a country grows rapidly, no problems can be seen in a short time. If problems occur over a long time, it will collapse instantly. Although I don't understand science, I think the protagonist keeps coming up with various technologies. Before the previous one is digested, the next one will continue to appear, just like the Calabash Baby. If you do that, it is easy to have a technological gap. The building will collapse sooner or later.

The author's three views are very upright, the intention is great, and the direction is correct. When I was a child, I read a book called "The Future of PHS". That is the real future, and the future is beautiful. People like the author need to occupy the ideological position. Support the author, come on⛽

Come on & add more Congratulations on the new book being released, I hope there will be more more! ! !

Author, your writing is very good to my taste. Keep up the good work.

Chapter 120 and Chapter 121 are not connected at all. The product launch happened suddenly

How can I put it this way? The details of this book are quite good, but there is nothing exciting about it. It feels like drinking boiled water all night, it's bland, without sand or the sweetness of sugar.