
I Am a Second-Tier Hero in American Comics
我在美漫当二线英雄
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- Completed
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- 1.8M Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
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- 1y ago
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Fishing Private List, Fun Is Justice
This book list has no theme, only what I think is good. More inclined to the big-brained type. In particular, there will never be a book in which the female character has a lot of bad scenes. In particular, I want to say that pure love and harem are absolutely mutually exclusive terms. I don't know how anyone dares to combine these two words. It's outrageous. I don't want to play Battlefield VI anymore 😩 (Click to open Battlefield VI) PS. I will read fandoms that don't smell like home. My atti
Reading Kaleidoscope
Interesting high-quality novels in various categories Personal orientation I try my best to explore the niche products in my eyes and recommend some works that I personally like very much. Hope you all like it! ! !
Find a Sense of Identity in the Virtual World
Mainly recommending fan fiction, the author's imagination is astonishing. On the premise of ensuring the prototype of the character, the author recreates it, giving people a refreshing feeling. I generally do not recommend books that are already at the top of the rankings. After all, those books generally have a deep fan base, and I prefer to look for hidden masters. All the following books were added after I tested them.
Mainly American Comics and Longevity Novels, a Hodgepodge.
Superpower battles, otherworldly adventures, and occasional history. Full Stars: Ten stars, you can watch it from one star to the next.
A Perfect Score of 100 Points and a Passing Transcript of 60 Points
I'm randomly posting some of the things I've seen, good ones, bad ones, logical ones, illogical ones, good characters, bad characters... Mainly, my homepage is too messy and I want to sort it out... Set full score: 30 Full score for writing: 30 (15 points for fluency + 15 points for emotional rendering) Full score for character design: 20 Logic full score: 10 Number of updates: 5 Is it a mess: 5
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The story of a little kid who has never experienced social beatings and his system daddy
Male protagonist: Dad, I want to be a superhero System: Yes, do whatever you want, I will take care of anything, you just have fun Male protagonist: Dad, I am exhausted, some bad guys hit me System: This is the hook I gave you Male protagonist: Dad Dad, I want to cause trouble, and I want to be a fun person System: Don't worry, kid, I'll help you carry anything Male protagonist: Dad, I'll beat you to death (pick up the book given by the evil cultivator) System: Don't fight, don't fight, dad is wrong Other books make boring content interesting and explain the provinces that need to be explained. This book has deleted all the content, and written a little bit in the east and a little in the west. There is no difference between the detailed and sketchy parts. Reading guide: Don't worry about the settings, don't worry about the settings, just have fun and be done with it. The male protagonist goes around killing without thinking, and when in danger, he relies on the system to cheat the deus ex machina - Don't worry, it's cool to be the male protagonist and it's done. For example, the big incident of Neptune was mentioned earlier, but was skipped later - Don't worry, this is not foreshadowing, don't use your brain and continue reading. For example, if you just bring your teammates and go to fight the boss, the fight will be over in the next second - Don't think too much, this is not a special method, it has indeed entered the next story. This is just because the author is simply too lazy to write this story. For example, while watching it, an unrelated extra story suddenly appeared - Don't think too much, just skip it if you don't want to read it, it's just for the author's pleasure. Correct reading method: Imagine that you are the second generation of power and the second generation of rich people. Your father is the mayor of the system. If you have no money, you can ask your father for it. You are going to fry fish with your golden finger. Okay, you can start reading. If you find other poisonous points, it is recommended to delete the book and leave. The negative reviews may be deleted. Bless 🙏🏻
Advantages: It has the flavor of American comics, Disadvantages: It has the flavor of American comics 🙂 And the protagonist will skip his own life, and he will have no memory of the years he skipped. He is keen on playing the third way and being a Bakugan boy, but he often suffers from failure. However, the comically insane protagonist is invincible. Although the process is very frustrating, he will definitely be saved by the gods in the end, so it is okay to read it as an invincible novel. In short, it is a novel that is close to the current American comics.
Complaining about the previous few pictures
Ah? No, buddy, huh? Who was this stream of consciousness you wrote earlier for? You are a bit harsh in screening readers. The system and the protagonist have more conversations and mutual complaints than there is to write about the plot. I am the only one who has watched Flash Point. If I had never watched Flash Point, I would not know what you are writing about? , I can't stand it any longer. Good ideas are good ideas, but you don't have the ability to grasp them. The system narration makes stereotyped jokes and hellish fun with the protagonist, and almost doesn't talk about the plot. There are many and complicated things to talk about. It can only be said to have some relationship with the upcoming plot, but not much The protagonist is not depicted in a few pictures. The character is not three-dimensional and the character is not clear. The sentence "Hero, you can't back down at this time" suddenly pops up. It's not just a few days after my buddy came here. You have become a hero. What were you doing before time travel? The system chatted with Dr. Manhattan there, and gave Manhattan a pair of pants. When he left at the end, he also said "じゃね" (Ghana), plus what the protagonist said before, a special one-shot. You're not writing a special photoshoot for American comics, so why do you add these messy things? My private goods are numerous and miscellaneous, and my writing skills are not enough to control them. Let's talk about the other characters first: the old Batman and the Flash. Because they copied the plot of Flashpoint, they still look a bit three-dimensional. The protagonist, just (don't know how to describe it). I saw the previous few plots, which almost copied Flashpoint, except for adding a protagonist. The original plot looks for the main character's memory, but it's not well connected and a bit fragmented. I've read all the reviews in book circles and there are good reviews. Maybe it's because the plot in the back is okay, but I can't hold on to the front. Someone in the comment area said that this book ranks among the top three DC American comics. I disagree. Let me start with the three books: What are Batman's bad intentions? The end of the multiverse and another one seems to be called Gotham without Batman. Although it is a bit stretched at the end and has shortcomings, their original plot is good, the characters are clear, the characters are three-dimensional, and the story line is clear. Can't the first few chapters be polished and polished? This is something that can withstand screening. First find out the readers' bottom line, and then improve your own bottom line before writing. If this idea is still very clever
I'm waiting to see the bat regret it for the rest of his life
I was very angry and anxious. At the end of the Death Volume, my grandpa didn't have time to say an apology and the protagonist died. The previous volume made me really angry. The protagonist was turned into a villain by an inexplicable questioner and was chased for the whole volume. Robin was still angry that he didn't tell them. No, you almost cut the person into pieces. Can the protagonist say that?
Dude, he's pretty good-looking, don't look like him anymore
I really like this kind of protagonist who seems to fit the world view, rather than the kind of novel that just randomly inserts the "killing and decisive" man from a third-rate fantasy novel into an American comic. To be honest, if you insist on reading that kind of male protagonist, why not just search for a fantasy novel and read it? So come on buddy, don't be like this, it looks good and I love watching it
Good
This book has the flavor of a decent hero. I look forward to the unfolding of the return to the main universe.
Hahahahahahaha I can't stand it anymore hahahahahahahaha
The origin of Justice League Dark? Is there any Morpheus in the synopsis?
I really like dreams. Are you interested in writing about them?
Second-line heroes are really not that good. Generally speaking, if you want to highlight the villain's ferocity or stimulate the protagonist's fighting spirit, you will kill a second-line hero to add to the fun. If the first-line hero is exhausted or the villain is too strong, you will end up with a second-line hero with unique skills.
Stereotypes of second-tier heroes in American comics
Killed by fan vote (Second Generation Robin) Changed into an address book (Third Generation Robin) Hided away due to poor box office performance of the movie (Black Adam) Stepping in for the villain in the main magazine of A-line Heroes (Ghost) Coming in the countdown nature of a big event In the painting, he investigates the truth of the matter alone and is shot dead by the mastermind behind the scenes (Blue Beetle) In a big event, the same front-line heroes are killed instantly by the villain's sudden attack (Firestorm) Due to the changes of the times, his character is changed and his parents die at the same time (Barry who just returned from the Speed Force) Note: Wally was the first-line hero at that time) Suddenly strengthened during a major event and offline at the speed of light (Swamp Thing)
Reshape the protagonist's origins
If you still have the Encyclopedia, you should erase it and turn it into an ordinary Goldfinger. His existence is a poisonous point. Make an origin as simple as possible. The simpler the better, a simple thing. Don't complicate it. Or make the Encyclopedia a special ability from beginning to end and define it as a narration. It is similar to breaking the false fourth wall and connecting to the Origin Earth. The protagonist is an alternative who traveled from the branch timeline of the Origin Earth. There are more than a dozen of Aboriginal time travellers in total, and they can be modified in a few hours. I will tell you if you have any problems. This way you can avoid the problem of the wall of origin that I mentioned before, and the impact of restarting. Superboy is a lesson learned from the past. Writing this way can avoid many worldview problems, but the one that stole the reward must disappear, or be modified so that it does not exist in the first place. Anyway, I can't tolerate it I'm done. But to be honest, there is a high chance that this book will be X. The Dc is so big that you will feel that you can't control it. Problems will arise just after the beginning. If it doesn't work, you will turn to the anime flashpoint and delete the plot of Manhattan. Let's just say this is the anime Flashpoint universe of a parallel universe. Take advantage of the trend and enter the animated DC universe, Teen Titans, 86 Beanie-Eyed Superman, Brave and Brave Batman, and other animated universes to shrink the world view. After all, tomorrow's universe will also have Infinite Crisis,
I have to say that the author complained very well in the book. Many of the works are titled as Taoist priests, but they don't even understand the core skills of Taoist priests (the ancestors are in the sky and the earth). They are not responsible for one thing and the other is not responsible for their duties. They don't worship the ancestors or the emperor. They have no soldiers and horses, no magical weapons, and no tribute table and altar at home. They live a stereotyped professional image.
I declare that Jack Lee is also a pretty standard DC hero in recent years!
1. It looks like a special training system, but it is actually a superpower reskin 2. The character is non-white 3. The first linkage requires the defeat of other well-known characters 4. Relatively reliable in major events 5. Combat power that fluctuates up and down 6. There is no exclusive female CP, only male CP 7. The hero recently had an unknown screenwriter in his personal comics
You must have come directly to the comment section, jojo!
Don't underestimate my intelligence network! My evaluation is that it is full of American comics Readers who are familiar with American comics will enjoy reading it on the airwaves It is recommended to skip the chapter [The Wicker Man], and you can read the others
A gift from the future: Robin Squad invades Flashpoint
In memory of the author Robin's first update failure! ! ! "I don't know what's going on," The Flash rushed into the Batcave as fast as he could as soon as he broke away from the turbulence of time and space. His anxiety was like a flickering shadow, which was the visual residue formed by the excessive speed. "It stands to reason that the Flashpoint world should have disappeared, but&shudj" Even Batman had difficulty understanding what he was saying from the garbled words that were spoken too fast. "Calm down," Batman said calmly, "otherwise I can't hear what you are saying." So Barry took a few deep breaths and returned from the shadow that was flashing around to a down-to-earth human being, "I just had a fight with the reverse flash, and was forced to enter the time and space tunnel during the entanglement, and then I saw the last Flashpoint world." "But according to what you said last time, the Flashpoint world should be corrected into a normal world after you leave," Batman's expression remained unchanged, but the darkness around him seemed to be thicker, "That world should have disappeared." "Yes, this is theoretically the case, and when I left, I looked back and the Flashpoint world had indeed collapsed." Barry had the tendency to start flashing again, but this time he immediately controlled his speed. "I didn't get too close, but I saw the ruins left by the war, and that Batman." "I will investigate the reason why the Flashpoint world still exists," Batman thought for a moment, "But, Barry, don't try to go to that world again, at least not until everything is investigated." How tempting is a still-living mother to Barry? What are the consequences of trying to cross the timeline again? Batman is certainly willing to believe in the willpower of his teammates, but he must be prepared for this. And Jack Lee, who had planned to seize the qualification for tonight's night patrol in advance, stood in a dark corner and listened to the whole process. You are not planning to go back to visit relatives, are you? Batman, who is obsessed with work, may not be able to detect the eavesdropping Robin who is not qualified for stealth, but is this development too third-rate horror movie? 'Didn't you say that the Flashpoint world is over? I thought I would only see Thomas in photos from now on. ' Jack Lee was puzzled. [ It is just part of the daily reading of the editorial department, resurrecting popular characters to complete their lives is also a feature of American comics, and the same is true for the popular world. But this big event will take some time, so don't rush. And all the saviors have sacrificed themselves for the world. If the world eventually disappears, who do you think it is as a savior? Don't think about this, hurry up, Barry is leaving, go up and have a chat with him, and get a spot for the next big event! 'I thought the last part was the settlement screen. ' Jack quickly followed Barry out of the Batcave, and finally stopped Barry before he left. "I have something I hope you can bring with you," Jack said to Barry sincerely, holding a small black box. "I heard what you and Bruce were talking about." "Um," Barry hesitated, "There are no locator bugs or anything like that, right?" "Absolutely not," Jack Lee defended, "I'm a serious Robin!" [Have you ever thought that you are worried about this just because you are a serious Robin? "This is for Thomas," Jack explained, "I know you can't take the initiative to go to that world, but I have a hunch that maybe an accident will make you accidentally enter that world again, and then you can give this to Thomas." That's it! The nagging prophecy can make Batman think of you immediately! In the comics, this is the preview before the big event is coming. "Okay, but this thing may be worn down in my battle, are you sure?" Barry finally agreed. "It's okay, I have a lot of backups, I can always replace them if they break!" Jack grinned. In the following period, Barry had to be replaced by Jack twice due to battle damage. When Barry finally stumbled into Thomas' Batcave with the gift, he had to admit in his heart that Jack Lee was really good at prophecy. Thomas only met once with Barry, who hurriedly rushed into the time and space tunnel again. He neither had time to ask why his world still existed, nor received an answer about his son's current situation. Confused, he walked to the computer with the video that said "TO Thomas AND Martha". The moment before pressing the play button, he suddenly had the urge to take out the video and slam it to the ground, so that he would never have to see the final result, only worry and fantasy. I'm like a madman who stepped on the flashlight light. Thomas cursed himself in his heart and pressed the play button firmly with his finger. That turned out to be———— "Super Sentai: Robin Linker"! ! When he saw Batman posing with his cape in the opening song, Thomas finally laughed heartily. He thought that he should ask Martha to watch this together. Maybe he could tell her that Bruce had a family. He did not become a doctor but became an actor, responsible for playing Batman and filming children's special dramas with the children. 24.5.10 Fixed typo
Movie viewing report
Okay, so today we will evaluate the work of director mugen Of course, her nickname in the fan community is the author Robin ... As a new director, the author Robin's first work is "Flashpoint: Debut" This film is adapted from the famous Flashpoint incident , a new character has been added, Jack Lee As a director's original superhero, he has a dark and evil past, as well as a new and bright present What a very touching character. The evil man who once killed people without calculation has now lost his memory and turned into a superhero who saves the world I am looking forward to the follow-up br>According to an interview with the director, the original intention of this character was to be a second-tier character However, in "Flashpoint: Debut" where he appeared, he still had a first-tier position At the end of the story, the Flashpoint world was naturally saved, and the story ended successfully It was nothing more than an Easter egg at the end of the movie. , We saw the appearance of Dr. Manhattan With the foreshadowing, let us look forward to the new work of the author Robin ... Before the official release of the second movie of the author Robin, there is also a short comic "Year One" It tells the story of the new world after the restart of Flashpoint, high school Jack Lee's experience of fighting magical monsters with Zha Kang in the era Oh, hey, he is related to Zha Kang, let us pray for him ... The author Robin's second movie "The Night of the Owls" Returns to the Gotham we are familiar with This time, our Jack ·Lee graduated from high school and was admitted to Gotham University Fast forward to joining Arkham. JPG Ahem This time, he joined the Bat Family From the old man's Kung Fu Robin to Batman's Handsome Robin The inheritance that spans time and possibility is really touching The villains of this movie are the Court of Owls, who have extended their claws against Gotham in the night Unfortunately, they are ultimately vulnerable to our Bat-Team Robin Company (Although to this day, we still have not heard the theme song sung by Bruce himself) In addition, the good news is that we Jack Lee seems to be about to blossom (Although the emotional scene is not foreshadowed at all and the turning point is abrupt) But let us congratulate And, in the post-credits scene, Zha Kang, who has been away from Jack Lee for three years, appears again, disturbing Jack Lee's date What kind of story will there be? Stay tuned ... Now, the preview of author Robin's new movie has been released We know that Jack Lee and Zha Kang have come to a new area and face new enemies And through Zha Kang's words, they know that the enemy is difficult How will the story develop? And please stay tuned ... Okay everyone, after a few days of waiting, I will update again (what American comic commentary blogger) Anyway, let us taste the movie that has been released a few days ago, "The Wicker Man" from the author Robin It's interesting to say, I thought it was a live-action movie, but I didn't expect that the preview turned out to be a specially shot live-action clip It's actually an animated movie The author Robin knows how to play However, the rhythm of this animation is not good, mainly because the plot is not good, the rhythm is chaotic, and in the end it is deus ex machina. I heard that there was originally a gold medal screenwriter, but he was pushed out, I don't know whether it is true or not Anyway, the original script (referring to the book friend's self-written plot) circulated on the Internet (referring to the book review section) is indeed quite good The movie is adapted from the classic movie "The Wicker" "People", although I have not watched it But the suspense in the front is well created, although basically I have not watched Yuanju and can't understand the plot But it is still on the standard, and our handsome Robin's strength positioning is finally in line with the second line But the second half is bad First of all, the acceleration of the plot, and the sudden turns and revelations What's worse is the machinery in the final ending God descended, forcing the invincible Wayne Gogo from the previous film to appear, and the style changed to be funny Although I personally like this part, it just doesn't work, even if there are good scenes, he still can't do it So he is still a new director We can only look forward to his next movie And, don't touch animated movies, author Robin, you are cursed by DCEU (Although the Warner curse is also...) ... Okay Mina-san, I am back After the last short experience of the author Robin in DCEU, she finally returned to her loyal live-action movie Similarly, we can also see from the movie "The Mystery of the Tomb Devil" directed by her this time The author Robin is true and has nothing to do with suspense Ahem, back to the book. "The Tomb Raider" returns to the author Robin's comfort zone. The overall style is funny, but also serious Especially in the post-credits scene, the conversation between Kung Fu Robin and Batman enriches the image of the two men Although the Justice League is added to the movie, the main body is still the story of Kung Fu Robin (a perfunctory reference to the episode where the Justice League is annihilated) Apart from these, the scene where Laughing Jack attacks the Tomb Demon must have been the climax for many fans Me too It can only be said that it was taught by the old man and Aunt Martha 🤓 After the author Robin experienced the setback of "The Wicker Man", he finally made persistent efforts After the last failed attempt to change the style, this time he returned to the main business and returned to his due. Level However, although the quality of this film is good, the plot is indeed smooth. The ups and downs are all expected, but Laughing Jack is unexpected So let us look forward to the next movie of the author Robin Nothing else, the pit of sw love must be filled See you next time (Play the end of the video) ... I'm back! The animated film "The Daily Life of the Wayne Family" can only be said to not be up to the standard of DCEU Our author Robin resisted the curse of DCEU This work is closer to the nature of a spin-off, and the overall atmosphere is relaxed, which can only be said to not be in line with Gotham But there are many scenes that are really funny And now Kung Fu Robin has been recognized by all Robin Linkers Let us look forward to the day when he becomes the Robin King And, among the Easter eggs, our dear Zhou Keer finally appeared There can only be one laugher in Gotham, and Kung Fu Robin, you are the challenger😎 In short, look forward to the follow-up See you next time. (play the end of the film) ... After a few days of cooing Your pigeon area up, I am back 😎 "Flash" I quite like the article "Emperor" The author Robin's style further highlights and introduces a new villain: the Flash Emperor People in Midtown will always remember the Flash, because of the Emperor's tyranny And, poor Jack Lee's body lay all over the publication I'm looking forward to the Emperor's return, after all, such a useful villain cannot be used only once As for the two short short films used to warm up, it's nothing So easy to say Above See you next time (Play the ending) …… (Play the opening) Hey, everyone. Your favorite blogger is back again This time, Jack Lee's publication, how should I say, gave me a lot of surprises As a superhero who has turned from movies to a full-time superhero, Jack Lee's treatment is really good He became the leader of JLA from the beginning However, the first Tokyo chapter was a bit abstract I still remember the negative comments on the forum at that time The subsequent Green Lantern chapter was not very good at the beginning The characters were flamboyant, and the plot was very focused on where to go When it came to the final battle, Jack Lee was even able to make soy sauce in his own publication By the way, the artist of this comic was changed midway, and Jack Lee was drawn as Mimi The eyes are so ugly Fortunately, the original artist is back Continue the plot In these two chapters, we have seen the growth of Jack Lee In the past plots, Jack Lee has been a central figure But we all have to calm down He is just a second-tier person In this incident, Jack Lee played a full role from the beginning to a war reporter Not only was he angry, but I was too But so was it. , Jack Lee will grow up, and will not always be a handsome Robin And the ending part Relying on the plot bonus, Jack Lee defeated the bad guy with Hal and Sinestro In the follow-up, he chased the door and completely killed the bad guy with his amazing wisdom The discussion on the forum was crazy, and there was a cheerful atmosphere everywhere But that alone was not enough to be so popular In the short story attached to the comic, because Willie Mi The copyright of the mouse expired and Firong returned And Jack Lee gave up the power to reshape the world and helped Firong rebuild his hometown The novel is not long, but it is well written At this point, Jack is no longer the funny and handsome Robin He is a Taoist (Taoist) He is a hero (Play the end of the credits) (Suddenly appears) But the comic screenwriter should give some snacks, except for the ending, the plot is really abstract! Then, goodbye for real See you next time. (Play the ending)
Regarding the age involved, 32 years old is too old. It is better to set it to 25 years old. After all, people in their 30s should be mature and should not do such risky things. Mentally, you should be younger.
I want to complain about the author's behavior in updating the extras. I wanted to say this when the author first wrote the extras. They write extras to supplement the main story, add additional perspectives, and broaden the breadth and depth of the story. It's good for you, the author, because the extra story is about a different world that has nothing to do with the main story. The only thing used is the protagonist's image and character. The question is, has the extra story made the protagonist more three-dimensional and in-depth? No! The plot has nothing to do with the main plot, the background is not the background of the main world, and the characters are not standing up. Isn't this extra story just for pure self-pleasure? The key is that the two times I have written extras so far have been interrupted at critical moments in the main storyline, so I spent the time and energy I had on updating the main storyline to write extras. American Manga is a multi-line development. Different series are handled by different creators. If we open additional chapters, the main line of creation will not be interrupted, and it will not affect readers' pursuit of the main line. Author, can you learn from others' good points and see what they are doing by opening a messy parallel branch line in another world?
Jack from the Parallel World——Succubus Jack
My name is Jack Lee I am different from the Jack Lee that many people have in mind I am not a Taoist priest, nor do I know Taoism, let alone talismans I am just an ordinary planeswalker I can Enough to travel in the multiverse and see all kinds of scenery I have witnessed the brilliance of the light multiverse I have also seen the decline of the dark multiverse And I am also honored to have met many Myself There are many versions of me with different possibilities I prayed for the power of God to save my life, but in the end I did something wrong I was parasitized by the dark symbiote, inspiring the darkness in my heart, and ruled the city with violence I slaughtered the entire universe in an accident It has always been like this, always so evil, pretending to be kind All kinds of things, not to mention I have met many versions of me >I thought that I could treat anyone calmly Until... "What the fuck is this?!" Jack stepped in the void, pointed at the person below, and cursed [You know, there are countless possibilities in the multiverse...] Jack didn't even care about Daquan who hadn't finished speaking, and cursed again: "So why the fuck am I like this!?" But I saw below It was the Wayne Mansion In its garden, a person was lying on a deck chair, sunbathing Um, let's call this person, He had a long heart-shaped tail on his hip, and a pair of small wings on his back. But when this male succubus had his face and was indeed him Jack found it difficult to accept [Look at the best, there is a parallel world where you are selling ditches, so you don't have to] "You Isn't it very Kongtong? Why are you looking so gloating now?" Jack gritted his teeth and said In the past, he didn't mind meeting other people As long as they weren't those extremely evil people But, next Facing this person, Jack really felt an unprecedented fear It wasn't death or something It was just because he felt some pain in his butt for no reason [He has already appeared, so just obey] [In addition, I searched for Jack's publications] "This thing has a publication!" Jack's eyes suddenly widened He is a planeswalker who can only hang out everywhere, and he doesn't have his own publication yet! [Wheat bran looks like this] [So do you want to watch it? "No!" Jack refused so firmly He never wanted to know what kind of lewd stories this Succubus Jack had [Oh, by the way, the author of this publication is still new] [There is even an inside version] "..." "Show me." ... It was an ordinary day Jack didn't know where to go to get high The kid Robin Damian had to deal with this... Ex Seniors, don't have much respect After all, you can't have any affection for someone who has been flirting next to your father Damian also had several conflicts with Wayne about this But in the end he was pushed back by Wayne After several times, Damian doubted whether Wayne had changed his sexual orientation With the help of the tracker that had been installed on Jack Damian found Jack's location—a public place "?" Damian couldn't understand what Jack wanted to do here It couldn't be to blow up the whole toilet Damian walked into the toilet, thinking so He quickly found the compartment where Jack was and pushed it away Then He saw Jack Jack was also surprised by Damian's appearance But then, he smiled evilly and opened his shirt "Hey, kid Robin, do you want to help?" "Just like your father... " Under the shirt, some obscene words were written on the tempting flesh Damian's mind suddenly shut down But the aphrodisiac in Jack did not stop... ... Finally, Jack left. He left this world and never met Jack the Succubus Even he only read a little bit of the publications "This is simply the Waterloo of my travels!" Jack said End of "The Travels of the Planeswalker - The Succubus"
About The Wicker Man Copy & I Write The Wicker Man Copy
The biggest problem with the Wicker Man copy is the perspective problem. The perspective described is either the old-fashioned movie perspective or Constantine's perspective. When the perspective really falls on the protagonist, the nonsensical and invincible Wayne Gundam appears. In the end, the entire script completely collapses and becomes a crazy third-rate. The protagonist cannot take the initiative, and the storyline has no sense of urgency. In other words, the biggest problem is that the protagonist does not, or cannot, take the initiative to promote the development of the story. Constantine wants to destroy the monster to take revenge, and the police officer wants to find out the truth about the girl's disappearance. What does Jack want? The protagonist was first called by Constantine for help, then he followed the police officer to collect clues, and finally started fighting with Constantine directly. The whole process was in a soy sauce thug position that he could do or not do. In other words, the protagonist was the god in Deus Ex Machina when the screenwriter couldn't write it down. Nothing could be written from Jack's perspective. He followed Constantine's command, followed Daquan's command, followed the Sheriff's suggestion, and acted like a puppet on strings. He didn't even have his own core purpose! For horror story copies, revenge, finding someone, the truth, and survival are the most common first driving forces to promote the development of the story. However, Jack does not have this first driving force. In the story, he is a fish monster with a high panel but full of water. His appearance is inexplicable. If you remove him, the structure of the story is still intact, which means that his appearance is abrupt and problematic. What is the core of Chaoying? A certain villain destroyed the good life, and a hero stepped forward and single-handedly destroyed the villain's conspiracy and put everything back on track. If you want Jack to take on the role of the protagonist, you must first give him a reasonable first driving force. This driving force can be changed. For example, the first half is to find people, the second half is to survive. In the end, if you get angry, you have to kill the opponent, but it cannot be absent or too weak. Just like the main plot in the game can be divided into stages, but the player must know what to do. For example, if you don't let Jack and Constantine set off together, you stagger their time, and if you let Jack receive an inexplicable request for help and be teleported directly to the vicinity of the island, he will start to look for who teleported me here? What's wrong with this beautiful but weird island? Where is the helper? Then let him find the clues left by Constantine the day before, and deduce what happened based on common routines. When he was asked to use Taoism, he was penetrated by a red wicker (I get angry when I talk about this. What a good plot whip, it will disappear after one use?). His strength gradually weakened, making him feel that there are always eyes on the island ready to eat him. His driving force became: Where is Constantine? What does he want me to do for him? How do I get off this island? Then the villain can start to threaten Jack, make Jack mistakenly think that Constantine is dead, or make Jack feel that he may die at any time, or even ask the police officer to help Jack answer his doubts and ease his mental health and then receive a lunch (you can even insert a complete collection of hell jokes here). In short, let the reader (note, let the reader) feel that Jack must kill the villain, and there is no room for maneuver. Then when the fight started, the whole work of Constantine's resurrection from the dead was airborne with a clue on how to kill the villain that only Constantine had to hide. By the way, what happened to Constantine was inserted to reveal the truth, and Jack dragged the boss to death together. Constantine sold another friend (insert classic hell joke) to end it. Then Constantine asked Jack to break out of the ground during his customary speech at the grave (insert classic Robin joke). I think his walking is quite suitable. He can absorb the energy of the boss through the walking charm, gain some new abilities, and successfully settle the dungeon rewards without being too hung up and unable to complete the later stage. There is also a carrot hanging on the dungeon. I think this dungeon is quite meaningful. What's the point of staring at Constantine's shabby love story every day?
Fight against DC and serialize it! (Trailer)
[The origin you are familiar with, the classic hell joke] In the dark crime alley, pearl necklaces were scattered on the ground, and two corpses were lying on the floor The sound of sobbing was faint [New story, new beginning] "Young man , do you want power?" Jack Lee is condescending, his half-real and half-solid body is quite ghostly in the night sky "Intelligent life has been locked, Bruce Wayne from the earth in sector 2814..." The green man he lives in The lust ring is making a sound [Huge conspiracy, new pattern] "My daughter, I hope that you go to the Wayne family." Falcone looked at his daughter with a solemn expression, "For the family!" She is still very young. Selina nodded and welcomed Falcone's smile ... In the dark Owl Court, the owl priest brought the oracles of the gods they believed in to the believers Gathering five metals into Bruce Wayne's body! All the believers reveled, chanting the name of God feverishly ... In the League of Assassins Leixiao Gu looked at his daughter in the Lazarus Pool, with only indifference on his face ... In the corner of Gotham at night, Zatanna was following her father, practicing irony magic ... [A big job you can't imagine! "FUCK!" Batman drove the Invincible Wayne Gogo and fell from the sky Jack floated beside him, laughing: "Just think it's for me! Bruce! Use your ultimate move on him!" ... In the Lazarus Pool, Bruce and Thalia's figures intertwined "What a disgusting couple, and... They are my apprentice and his wife, they are ruined like this." Jack turned away and covered his face ... "Thirty years in Hedong, thirty years in Hexi, don't bully young people into poverty!" Young Bruce looked angrily at Zatanna who came to break off the engagement, and wrote the next letter of divorce with blood as ink ... [Everything, please stay tuned for "Fight Breaking DC"! In the dim room, only the clown's maniacal laughter remained Gradually, another similar but completely different laughter joined The two complemented each other [Announcement time: February 30, 25:61]
Does Shen Nong exist? What does this book look like?
Don't read this if you are not a very experienced DC fan.
My understanding of DC mainly comes from movies. With this level of understanding, after reading the first few chapters, I felt that it was a mess, inexplicable, and I had no idea what I was talking about. The author seemed to assume that readers have a very thorough understanding of the DC universe.
Skip, skip... Skip the wicker man and the lamp group, which sound boring, skip the other world, and find that you have finished reading it, waiting for the next chapter Different from traditional online novels, or fan fiction, there is no such thing as upgrade. After the Flashpoint chapter, the protagonist is complete and will not grow. Everything is a deus ex machina, and only nonsense and nonsense are enough ( The protagonist is a mentally retarded psychopath, everything is covered by the system, and he has no charisma) When he encounters a problem, he will use a deus ex machina, or temporarily strengthen it, and then in order not to change the original plot or even come up with other popular settings, etc., He is forced to kill or defeat him at first sight, and he skips the foot wrap in some miscellaneous fish chapters... Then why should I read your novel? I can only say that it's a good thing that I don't have the habit of ordering everything. After skipping it, I found that it was really boring and had no sense of substitution. Who can take on the role of a mentally retarded and mentally ill protagonist who is chaotic and illogical? After skipping the calm part, I couldn't watch it anymore.
Flavor Tasting
Ranked third among the American comics I have read, it has an old-school English core, contains stereotypes and hell jokes, and has a pure flavor. The level is about the same as DC's single-person novels twenty years ago.
Let me tell you what you think after reading it. It feels very similar to Marvel IF. The early stage is full of surprises, with slight flaws but the flaws are not concealed. People look forward to the plot that the author will polish. There were constant flaws in the mid-term, and I was so disappointed that I couldn't help but want to fast forward. I didn't bother to complain in the later stage, and I couldn't mobilize my emotions at all, so I just abandoned it.
Criticize the author's mistakes in this book
First, because it is a character who has broken through the dimensional wall, the whole writing is quite confusing. I know this is a common problem with all characters who have broken through the dimensional wall, but as an author, you must first tell a story well. However, the author is still very experienced in handling this aspect. Except for the beginning, which is a bit confusing, the rest is great. Second, due to unknown reasons, the protagonist Goldfinger collided with the god-level figure in the original work. As a fan novel, this is the most taboo thing. It reduces the mystery of the protagonist Goldfinger and forces the protagonist to choose a path. As a fan, you are looking at the author's protagonist, breaking away from the original story framework, and using your imagination to write a more novel story. The protagonist can take the initiative to choose, but he must not become someone else's puppet, or a doll in the hands of someone, even if that person is the God in the story.
Jake Lee on ball three (1.5)
[When Night Owl is transported by Batman from the parallel world into the old world that he is trying to destroy, will little Thomas Wayne remember that 25 years ago in that fateful crime alley, where he personally killed his criminal parents and innocent brother Bruce Wayne, and by the way picked up a strange little boy named Jack Lee who was the same age as his brother and called himself uncle Robin] At this time, after decades of getting along with each other, Jack Lee has become very skilled in ignoring all kinds of bad jokes that pop up in the book. He just skillfully slapped a few more talismans on his body and continued to hit the world barrier, trying to laugh at his "big boy" face to face before he died from the quantum bomb he made. [Let me see... This seems to be a very good scene to insert a memory kill - let the audience take a look at the poor little boy Jack Lee, maybe it can make everyone's Richard spin together] In a large double page, Jack Lee, who relied on the command of AI Robin to smash an important weak point with one punch, raised his head in dissatisfaction, before he could say anything against the whole story. In a small corner of the screen, the scarred Night Owl seemed to see Jack Lee through the barrier of the world, and was struggling to reach out to him. In the comic on the next page, a 7-year-old boy wearing a little yellow chicken hooded sweater suddenly appears in a dark and run-down alley, becoming the only bright color in the picture. Jack Li raised his head in confusion, and after a random study of the current five-short figure, swear words that were inconsistent with his childish appearance came out of his mouth. "[Beep-][Beep--], is it true? I dressed as a boy and appeared in the alleys of Gotham? Will I [Beep--] take a screwdriver to pry some noble Bat tires in the next second?" [Will win...] [You know, the reboot of the DC universe has extended to countless versions...] The seven-year-old boy Jack didn't even want to hear Daquan finish what he said, so he interrupted him very irritably, and cursed again: "So why did I suddenly change from a thirty- or forty-year-old zombie to this fucking seven-year-old??? Who gave me drug A???" [Yes, as the audience expected, this Jack Lee had just participated in the Flashpoint World War, and was thrown into a parallel world by the handsome, handsome and invincible me, thus starting his life as a legendary second-tier hero from Seven] "Wait a minute," Jack Lee, who has astonishing wisdom, discovered something was wrong: "Why do I feel that your attitude toward me seems to have improved a lot after I became /little/? Brother Daquan, don't you like practicing..." [However, the handsome, handsome and invincible Daquan obviously has no intention of paying attention to the child Jack Lee's baseless speculation] "You deny it so quickly, you must have a guilty conscience!" Jack Lee muttered complaints, but his body observed the surroundings very honestly. After all, this is a gloomy Gotham where I don't know whether it's day or night. Even Jack Lee, the legendary Taoist priest who saved the world, is still smart in mind when his body becomes smaller, but his strength value will be slightly reduced. "Puff puff puff--" Several gunshots, obviously silenced, broke the rare silence in this corner. [All possibilities in the dark multiverse are running in the direction of getting worse...] Jack Lee ignored the encyclopedia that was still letting out useless sighs, and cautiously looked at it. In another ordinary Gotham alley that was dark, dirty and damp, a young man with black hair and blue eyes was standing holding a still smoking wooden warehouse. Standing next to him was Alfred, who was as quiet as a shadow and looked younger. Dead on the ground at the same time were a couple who looked luxuriously dressed but with ferocious faces, and a poor little boy with a surprised expression. There is also a must-have in alleys, a pearl necklace lying on the floor. But what attracted his attention the most was the exaggerated and elegant laughter on the faces of the only two standing men and boys, whose arcs were almost exactly the same. Daquan exclaimed in a way that Jack Lee didn't quite understand at the time: [I'll go, ball three! What happened next was something that required detailed drawing of large and small grids for several volumes in comics, but could be solved by writing a few lines of text. For example, the seven-year-old boy Jack Lee accidentally kicked a drunk man on the side of the road when he wanted to run away. After some trials, the two successfully cohabited (?), And unknowingly developed an important relationship as a conjugated father and son amidst the ridicule of Daquan. Later, they also picked up a little clawed Grayson together, and naturally built a harmonious family in the dark universe. It was a small heart-warming story in which the four of them died by a million inches. Yes, "almost As Daquan said, this is actually a dark multiverse. On an ordinary day when the happy friends Handsome Robin and the Joker were doing comedian activities, the new screenwriter's cute little brain had an idea, and a new African-American hero was added to the scene, planning to make this Night Owl's cluster The supporter stopped on the ground. Luckily and unfortunately, this reckless guy actually succeeded. Night Owl, who was secretly teaching Little Talon how to better use the hook lock wooden warehouse, discovered something was wrong under the reminder of the outsider in the earphone, and used his fastest speed to come to Arkham Amusement Park, where some people often come to team building. He saw Jack Lee-chan everywhere. I'm too lazy to write it down. Anyway, under the leadership of Daquan, the next step is to get some influence points from a neighboring publication and come back to life again. Jack Lee accidentally turned into a seven-year-old boy. He found that the good boy he had raised for decades had suddenly turned into a big villain who planned to destroy the world and was about to be beaten violently. So Jack Lee had to forgive him with a smile, while grabbing the copper-head belt and planning to revive the big boy, planning a family adventure comedy story that would spin Thomas like a top (It suddenly occurred to me that the "My Uncle Robin" joke by Brother Claw Grayson was not included at all). (The explanation that is even more overwhelming in the text is that what Daquan brought JL into was a 12+ comic produced by a well-known person. In order to make it more shonen comic, it was published/revised by Jack Lee) "In the end, I still want to pour my passion for physics in the shonen comic, right? " The young man who complained like this in the resurrection advertisement area was secretly set by the fan writer Robin (I will write a maid costume for you next time).
Jack Lee! Control the speed of Li Xiudao! The Council of High Li has added another member!
This is another possibility that an editor had an idea pop up in his little mind when Jack Lee slipped out of the Flashpoint universe and rolled into the main universe. In the dark multiverse, everything is going bad, while the light is the opposite. So, what about those corner-to-corner universes in the infinite diversity after the restart? Although they are a little bit in the corner, they are still complete after all. It is okay to occasionally develop plots that are similar to those in the main world, but they are different after all. For example - this Jack Lee has retained some of the talents of the evil cultivator Jack Lee, so that you can know that he is still the original Taoist priest. Although he often uses batarangs, bat grappling guns, bat belts, bats... And hundreds of millions of points of speed, he is still the good Taoist priest who throws away printed talismans, wears strange Western-style Tang costumes, and wields the money sword of all nations. The magical early stage plot will be omitted. You only need to know that it is consistent here. It is just that when he was forced to take over the position of The Flash and help him work, he flashed back to the special features that are different from other Jack Lee, such as using the company that produces the little blue pill. Si Li used his funds to purchase some Taoist books. In order to ensure adequate data and information and eliminate the stereotypes of Westerners, there are also many Buddhist scriptures. He analyzed the meanings of different talismans and discussed with Xinhun Xiexiu the further development of the human skin talisman that inspired him - everything is paper. There is no need for such a nice name, just be concise and concise. It is to further develop experiments and use various things as talisman paper, including but not limited to toilet chips, wall coverings, floor tiles, tables, pencil boxes and batarangs. Now it's just one step further, Jack Lee comforted himself, and at the same time cursed some bastard Jack in his mind who made up a Flash Emperor. He had to clean up the mess. After all, there were as many of these ghost things as the editor wanted until he no longer wanted to write the relevant plot. Now, in addition to being the Flash, he needed to harvest these guys who claimed to be the Emperor—— After all, he couldn't let some innocent and kind-hearted Little Flash drop the pearl when he came back. If he was replaced by Superman and Batman, he would just throw the blame away. Anyway, a strong one always has a backup plan, but Little Flash is a simple unlucky kid. He is not irresponsible enough to let Little Flash sacrifice to heaven for this inexplicable reason - and by the way, he has added several more generations of mental age in his heart. Uncle Jack will solve everything. Due to the inertia of the plot, there is no difference between the Emperor's initial actions and the plan, that is, the source of power is not the talisman but the Speed Force. Jack Lee, an outstanding high-IQ talent, feels the Speed Force and everything about this so-called "Emperor" in his heart, and then reaches full speed at the moment when the Emperor takes a breath and rests - the world stops. "Now I finally have a chance to say a few lines of my own, you charcoal ball wandering in the Speed Force." "No! How can you control the Speed Force! I am the Emperor!" "Hee! But in my body, you are the one here!" "Use thunder as a talisman, refine evil existence as ink!" The golden thunder shines, and the broad lightning is like a beautiful talisman paper. The raw material of the ink on the talisman paper is the so-called "Emperor" "Wait, hey, can we reconcile? Can you? Do you really want to be a hero? "Isn't this a joke? It has nothing to do with being a hero. I just can't bear to see you idiots lowering the limit of super villains and being ashamed to be ranked on the same level as you weaklings." Countless lightnings surrounded him. Different from the appearance of the Flash, next to Jack Lee, these bright Speed Force lightnings are wide and large, filled with countless esoteric and obscure runes. Ordinary paper is already so powerful. As a carrier of power, how powerful should the Speed Force be? Jack Lee himself changed into regular clothes, but through the broken "mirror" formed by the thunder, it seemed that he could see his cool body wearing a uniform similar to that of The Flash. "Now", he has complete control over one second. In this small flashpoint universe with a radius of one light second with him as the center, he can use the power of the Speed Force to run wildly, bring memories back to the past, rehearse repeatedly, and keep trying until he is willing to let this second lead to the next. It was obvious that a certain old evil cultivator was hollowed out, and in this infinite second, Jack Lee, who was fully prepared, grinned a ferocious smile - "Now it's my turn to hunt you - all of you." He stepped into the Speed Force. At the same time as entering the Speed Force, another figure came out of the Speed Force, and the "future" had arrived. As long as he agrees with everything in the present, past and future, as long as he doesn't overly modify the established history, going back to the past is as easy as following him. "Now...? No wonder I came back after a few days before I could control my power. This big city was still managed obediently, and I had an intuition that everything was normal. I was originally helping "myself"!" The traveler who came against the clock smiled and said, All emperors have been sealed in his own past by him. He kindly gave each fragment an infinite Planck time, an exclusive Flashpoint universe, allowing them to dominate as they pleased until they were bored to the point of complete collapse, disillusionment and complete surrender. After enduring countless momentary eternities, and even taking the time to beat up the blue quantum God, here and now, in this universe, from a secondary level perspective, he is undoubtedly the supreme, omniscient and omnipotent existence, as evidenced by the fact that he has spent centuries of hard work iteratively updating tens of thousands of versions of the talisman system every second. And this is just the tip of the iceberg of his strength. After all, he has been able to cultivate many small hobbies for such a long time, and he becomes awesome as he does them. "Then, for the next story, I should just write "finished" and treat it as a high-level talisman. Bye!"
What I want to say is that although the fighting is fun and looks good, the free chapter attracted me to come in and pay to watch the follow-up. It is not the fighting fun, and there is no way to fight in that world. What attracts me is that Li Mingming does not have enough power but still stands up to protect others. Maybe a large part of the reason is that he dares to do it because he has a system to protect others, but the point is that Li really does it to help others rather than having fun or fighting. He really has a heart of gold like a hero, whether he is the Wicker Man, the Bat Family, or even the seemingly unreliable Lightning Emperor. (Does the Lightning Emperor really exist? Not sure... It seems that there are too many hell jokes and I forgot about it_(:з∠)_) But in the past two chapters, I didn't see it at all, and he changed from a hero to a "hero". His epilepsy is normal. He traveled across the world and changed from being protected by others to protecting the world. He hung out with the Bat family in Gotham and skipped all the plots that could be skipped. His epilepsy is normal, and his mental age is only less than twenty years old. But what is the original intention of choosing to become a hero? From protecting others to the last chapter, like politicians, they are intrigues. But to be honest, things started to get confusing from the moment Amanda appeared. What is the significance of introducing this American-Chinese alliance? Wasn't it Harley Quinn in the beginning? What about Harley Quinn? I don't know much about it, but I feel like the author is starting to get crazy while writing. When he gets high, he only cares about fighting. Although he has applied a patch to give the protagonist a little more brains, it still feels very twisted.