Zhe Tian: My Villain, Hua Yunfei, Slaughters All the Heavens

I think in your profile, just Bibi Dong's paragraph can persuade 10% of people to quit.

Bibi Dong should forget it, she really hates white-eyed wolves. The love brain can accept it, but the white-eyed wolf is really disgusting.

Very good, this understanding has persuaded me to give up 50%, and then these rubbish in the group have persuaded me to give up the other 50%.

You persuaded me to quit in the first chapter. I was ready to deal with Ye Hei as soon as I came. I really persuaded me to quit. You are a time traveler, not Hua Yunfei. If you hadn't traveled through time, you would be Hua Yunfei? Then don't write about time travellers. If you write about someone who foresees the future, the logic will be normal. And isn't Ye Hei bad to his friends? Is it a white-eyed wolf? I wanted to mess with Ye Hei when I first came here. How dare you mess with him before you become emperor? Even if you become emperor, you won't be able to defeat him. I'm afraid that if you move, someone from the Forbidden City will come from the Forbidden City and slap you to death. You are the only one who has traveled through time, and you are the second child in the world. Are you the third child?

The first person I hate in Douluo Continent is Hu Liena. White Eyed Wolf is the Spirit Hall that gave birth to you and raised you. He betrayed you when he said it, and let Tang San go several times. Bibi Dong doesn't care about right or wrong. After all, I have experienced the secret room incident, so I will not express my opinion. Qian Renxue's Wuhun Palace belongs to her family, and her IQ is above average. As for Yu Xiaogang, he is a waste. He has no choice but to use other people. Although I may hate him as a character, he is also a kind of self-motivated person. Where is Tang San? After all, he traveled through time in ancient times, and his outlook on life is inherently different from modern times. They say he has double standards. In fact, they all have double standards now. It depends on whose standpoint you are talking about. Only Hu Liena, I really don't know what to say about her, pure white-eyed wolf.

Why do you all hate Bibi Dong? Are you all fans of Yu Xiaoan? ? ? ? ? It would be boring to go to Douluo and not fuck Tang Sanyu's anus

What you let me see is just one... At the beginning, his understanding is unbelievable, and his cultivation depends entirely on the villain 🦹🏻‍♂️ Value... And which group members' conversations are very interesting! Author, you must be young, otherwise it wouldn't be this setting!

There are too many hooks and too complicated. Since I have been blessed by the plateau, I might as well write a pure villain story, become the next weird ancestor, sacrifice all the worlds and hold the reincarnation ceremony. It is very cool to think about it.

Some people think that having a chat group and being savvy will ruin the book. In fact, I think the quality of a book does not have much to do with the golden finger. The key lies in the author. I intend to write it to the end. It will run through the trilogy of "Shading the Sky". I just need to be able to write with my heart.

The Ji family was really disgusting in the early stage! In the later stage, I relied on Ye Fan to clear my name... If the person who became the emperor was forced by the Ji family, he would probably be exterminated! I really don't like the fact that everything belongs to them.

In the world of high-level martial arts cultivators who can easily live thousands or even thousands of years, those who have read "Shading the Sky" are probably in their late 50s and most of the younger ones are in their 30s. The opening chapter has a protagonist who is a few years old. It was so embarrassing to read.

After reading the introduction, I just thought it was very low-key and lackluster, and I had no desire to read it. The author must be a newcomer.

No? Do you dare to initiate such a book? Even a Shennong like me can't handle more than two chapters.

What kind of rubbish did you write? A bunch of rubbish were brought in at the front, and it would be better not to pull them in, and they didn't see any effect in the back. Basically, they unilaterally prostituted the protagonist for nothing. What left me even more speechless later was that the protagonist dared to talk about things related to immortals? In the original work, there was a person who did this, but was hacked to death in the blink of an eye. Even the protagonist dared to say that I was drunk too. What makes me even more speechless is that the protagonist is still dancing like that, and dares to provoke all the major forces with little strength. I can only say that I really don't know how to write the word "death". Do you really think you are Mark? In the original novel, if Ye Fan hadn't been protected by a ruthless person, he would have died long ago when he jumped like that. How could the protagonist, a person with no background, dare to dance like that?

His savvy is already very good, and he also has a chat group. You can have a chat group, but you have to suppress the chat group from playing its role.

Let's go. Pig's Foot claims to be an omniscient and omnipotent pretender.

It's really three golden chapters. I quit immediately after reading three chapters. I won't talk about how the first two chapters ruined my image. The beginning of the third chapter is inexplicable. Before becoming the group leader, Zuo Lengchan was kicked out by using the group leader's authority.

The first half of the first part is really surprising and a good book, the second half is so confusing, and the second part is such a thing? ? ? The second face is even more confused

The writing is messy, the subject matter is good, but the writing is really hard to describe in one sentence

Is there a heroine? Princess Shencan, Saint Wanchu, Purple Mansion Saint, Dao Yi Saint, Four Elephants Saint, Yaochi Saint, Yin Yang Cult Saint, Yan Ruyu, Jiang Tingting, Qingshi Fairy, Xia Jiuyou, Xia Yilin, An Miaoyi, Fairy Eye Weiwei, Ji Ziyue, Ji Biyue, Jiang Caixuan, Yi Qingwu, Yao Xi, Jue Youqing, Fenghuang, Princess Yudie, Princess Yueling. Qin Yao Qi Fu Shui Qi Qi Qi Meng Fanxian Lin Jia Li Xiaoman Wan Longnu Golden Goddess Huo Lin'er Zi Tianfeng Xin Lan Xin Yue

What the hell? Can the martial arts in martial arts be used against the fantasy world? Can you use your brain?

Wear it as long as you wear it, and even a gold finger with incredible savvy can get by, but if you set up a chat group with all the water, the word count is really unbearable.

Please write more rigorously, there are too many illogical places.

Just copy the original text and don't even change the name.

When I see something about Douluo, magic, Marvel, especially Japanese animation and comics, I don't even want to take a look at it. I haven't written about it for five thousand years in China.

Good guy, I can't even connect to the second and third chapters at the beginning. Author, are you serious about writing a book? It's really a bummer for us readers.