A World Journey Starting from Super Seminary

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The dialogue is stiff, the characters are blank, and the plot progression is unnatural. All in all, there is a lot of room for improvement

After reading seven or eight chapters, I lost motivation. The protagonist is so empty, with no thoughts and characters, and descriptions like a running list. The woman is psychically synchronized and psychically enhanced for no reason. The communication between the characters is not as deep as the friendship I had on the road "Hey, big brother, how to get to the supermarket?"

So is this the stars? What about the protagonist's civilization, the protagonist's forces, the protagonist's scientific research ships, engineering ships, giant structures, and the 99999k fleet? Why am I alone? Shouldn't the protagonist be the will of civilization? The stars we want to look at are building civilizations with crazy tech trees, integrating tech trees, possessing new technologies, and then crazily building colossi and cosmic wonders.

It's a pity that the first and second worlds are too big. The first world is obviously serious + hard science fiction. The second world is relaxed + daily. There is no problem with the plot of the first and second worlds, the writing is no problem, and the style is also no problem. The problem is that the styles between the two worlds have a sense of separation and incoherence. Think about it, in the first twenty chapters, only readers who like science fiction can read it, and readers of other types will be eliminated. The last thirty chapters are relaxed and daily. Normally, readers will like it among the broad audience. Unfortunately, the only readers who can insist on seeing the second world are science fiction and other types of books.

You obviously know everything, but pretending to be a novice makes your head hurt and a little disgusting.

If the protagonist doesn't want to manage internal affairs, but also wants to concentrate his efforts on big things, there is a way, and that is the enfeoffment system. 1. For these followers, adopt the enfeoffment system. For example, choose the strongest ship girl as the lord to manage the ship girl. Choose the strongest insect girl as the lord to manage the Zerg clan. Choose Gray Wind as the lord to manage omnic life forms. 2. As long as the protagonist controls these few lords and ensures the loyalty of a small number of individuals through ideological stamps and modifying the underlying code, he can control all the forces under his command.

After I finish writing, I will listen to it myself and correct some typos and awkward sentences. If it's still not smooth, then my level is not good enough. I hope you understand and I will correct it later. I am also a reader, so if a certain chapter is too boring, I will be sleepy and have opinions. If I post it, it means that I am rushing to work. If a certain paragraph is boring for several dozen chapters, then I have a big problem. I hope that I can get follow-up reading from everyone, that is, if someone reads the new chapter 24, it will be counted as a follow-up reading. This is very important data, and at least it can prove that some people still read the book I wrote. Also, I would like to ask for comments. Let's discuss the issue of the world view of Super Theological Seminary. There is no problem with this world view in anime, but if we write about the humanities of Zhutiantong, it feels like something will happen if we ignore this issue. If you have any good suggestions, you can also mention them. I will refer to them as appropriate (copy the comments). Thank you very much!

After finishing talking about the Omnic Crisis, I couldn't understand what the author wrote. It felt like it was off topic. The story of super gods and the stars had nothing to do with it. The stars were more suitable for science and technology themes. Now it feels like he was a character who pioneered civilization in the early stage, and now he is a character with a daily Japanese style.

Where is this thing going on, ship girl? Self-pleasure, right?

I just like the stars, it looks very comfortable

How should I put it? One moment the time traveler understands the plot, and the next moment he knows nothing (?). It feels a bit disgusting.

It's weird at first. He's not a time traveler, but an aborigine of the empire? However, he didn't know anything except who he was, as if he was forced to be a pioneer. All knowledge must be learned now

With Qunxing's technology and the author's decision to make his hometown blue, the protagonist will definitely unify this shipgirl civilization and build it into an interstellar civilization that boasts the universe. Then the future tone of this civilization must be set, the sooner the better! (Hurry up and copy it!)

Justice and order restrict the strong and support the weak. In fact, there are still many imperfections. Restrict the force of powerful civilizations and support weak civilizations. In addition to this, assimilation policies of economic control and cultural invasion must be added. It doesn't matter that the angel population is small. The civilization under the righteous order under my command, due to assimilation, will be a potential population for my use in the future.

From the first few pictures, you can see that there will be an army of the living dead, a clone army, and other militarized armies, but the location you choose is on the earth. You must know that for a formed social system, there are a series of influences such as morality and humanities, plus the bullshit intervention of the Birdman, these are difficult to carry out. Why choose this place?

Chapter 45 feels like it could be deleted directly. It's a long, useless plot, long and boring. The content to be explained in it can be simplified and simplified, and interspersed in Chapter 6. Such a long content is really discouraging, especially in the first five chapters.

I've read a few chapters and it's quite interesting so far, but there are too many poisonous points, and there are problems with the verbal, mental and behavioral logic of each character Maybe it's because the author is too young and has seen too few people and experiences.

Angels place all their hopes for the future of the known universe on themselves, and integrate most of the resources of the entire universe into their own civilization. This leaves other weak civilizations with no resources to develop, and they have to provide resources to the angel civilization. A weak civilization is equivalent to being tied to the fate of the angel civilization. If the tall Celestial Master Civilization cannot withstand the pressure of the void, then those weak civilizations below will also be destroyed! Although it is good to have no war, if we put it on a large scale, technology is locked in another sense and it is difficult to develop. If it were a cosmic environment like a dark forest, a weak civilization could achieve a technological explosion in a short time. Another point is that the development of civilization in the known universe of Supergods is too monotonous. They all stick to god-making technology without having their own unique technologies or diversified technological development, which creates a stagnant pool of water. Some civilizations are not suitable for the development of god-making technology, and they have to stick to this path, which leads to high failure and low success, and everyone is lost. It is better to develop in a situation that is suitable for the technology tree of your own civilization. This is in line with the actual situation. Triangle body, animal body, and Kamigawa body are the only three types of life forms in the known universe. They are too few! The diversity of life is the key to the diverse development of the universe.

This novel is well written, but when I read it, I always felt like I was watching a TV series without sound. The content of the TV series is very exciting, but there is no sound. I'd like to ask if other readers have this thought, or if I'm just not in a good state of mind when I'm reading it right now. That's why I feel this way

I feel pretty good, but the number is small. I will give you a monthly vote.

I want to ask you guys, if the empire behind the protagonist was in its heyday, who would lose and win against the angel civilization?

The heroine turns out to be the system (●.●)🤖

It feels so weird, an indescribable sense of dissonance

How can I put it this way? The protagonist's arrogance and curiosity killed the cat. You tell him to lick it, he is indifferent to everyone. Let's just say he doesn't lick, and he is generous to everyone. Always ask the system when chatting with others. The more I look at it, the more contradictory it becomes

It's a bit confusing to watch. The main plot is roughly there, but there are too many twists and turns, and the narrative expression is not clear.

How should I put it, maybe my two-dimensional concentration is not enough? 😥 The world of Ship Girl is a super world because I can still watch it if I know the plot, but I can't understand the last few at all 😅 And the problem of perspective jumping is indeed very serious, which gives me a strong sense of dissonance and separation, and I can't even understand it 😭😭 The comment section is honest with me.

Azur Lane's worldview itself can be considered as hard-core as Super God, and in terms of combat power, it currently excludes those who play with concepts and is at least a supercontinent. The black hole created by the hacker company can blow up half of the Northern Alliance. The Siren's Arbitration Agency also has AOE with similar performance (such as evaporating the mass of an ocean to build a fort). The Pope who was hacked by You ask why you only see ship girls in this world besides commanders. The answer is that in the early events, when Emperor Peter the Great took the throne, he mapped out all the human leadership in his country. Silly Bai, the Soviets, and Steel Plate also fully control the real power of their own countries, so all the people who come into contact with you, the commander, are ship girls. Every one of the ship girls, especially the leaders of the forces, is not black. The blackest thing is the steel plate. Then Shabai and META Shabai cooperated. The leaders of Chongying themselves can play Hai Ruochun and bully them to eat and drink. They don't know that the world is scientific. People like Italy can use an Expo to go directly from the edge of the world to the core. Furthermore, there is a serious aerospace fleet in the Azure worldview, and then it is equivalent to the continuation of the original world power until the council personally admitted that the technological level is three generations behind the arbitration agency. It's not that the ship girl is not good, it's that you didn't even understand that the blue ship girl is not a living thing, but a collection of concepts of the ship. The reason why it behaves like a living thing is all because Anjie and Silver Fox used Rubik's Cube technology to fix the concept for others. The Siren does not lock the Rubik's Cube for you, and the ship girl directly metabolizes the dimension in a matter of minutes.