Hogwarts: The Hacker Wizard
霍格沃茨之骇客巫师
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 176k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
79Chapters
0Votes
170Recs
14Fans
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Reader comments 5
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Too many elements
It feels like there are too many buffs for the protagonist. A hacker chip has a lot of content that can be mined, and there are also buffs such as Obscurus and Staff. There are too many elements and it's too complicated. If you want to fill the story with various buffs: take the buff story line outside the school, and then copy the original story line inside the school, this is a sign of insufficient writing skills. Moreover, the original work said that there has been no Obscurus for a long time, but the author changed it to appear two at once.
Many places are quite interesting and attractive. Small suggestions from readers: 1. Maybe the author focused on the plot and fun, and directly "younger" the protagonist, lowered the protagonist to "Malfoy's level", and defeated Malfoy. As a time traveler, the way of thinking and doing things must be fundamentally different from that of children, instead of getting stuck in the plot and playing tricks and playing pranks all day long. 2. Later, I saw that the "hacking ability" used many times is only a tool for the protagonist to equip 13, rather than a strong support on the road to powerful magic. The focus of this description seems to be equivalent to raising people's expectations, and the result is "This is it?" For example, in front of a group of little kids, using a method similar to "cheating" (Polaroid) to make Malfoy, Rozier and other children shut up and admit defeat, emmm, I don't know what the author is thinking, but it looks quite embarrassing to me. What's the difference between this and a person making a prank by drawing your photo into a pig's head? Some immature suggestions.
Ziz is not right. Most of the most popular books nowadays are Zzi, so if you search for your book with a prefix, you have to choose the prefix according to the popular books, otherwise it will affect the search volume and exposure.
The author can search for Hogwarts: The Hacker Wizard to see if your book can be found. You have to follow the rankings, otherwise you won't be able to find the ones that have exposure.
Please give me some advice, including bug fixing advice