Hogwarts: Harry Potter Returns from Naruto

Let me tell you my opinion on Harry. It's purely my personal opinion. Please don't comment. I feel that as a ten-year-old boy, he had no father or mother at the beginning until he was told at the age of 11 that he would fight against the most terrifying Dark Lord in the world. Until the sixth grade, the most trusted professor died and the godfather was gone. At the age of sixteen, he began to organize Dumbledore's Army. In fact, it can be seen from Rowling's description that basically everyone else has given up hope. Only Mr. Ha attacked Voldemort head-on. Snape was so powerful, he didn't dare to take action against Voldemort. Such a person is not weak no matter how he says it.

The protagonist doesn't know any ninjutsu anyway? Changing the background makes no difference.

This isn't Harry from Naruto Returns, this should be Harry from Naruto Returns. What matters is recklessness.

The poor results may be due to the lack of overlap in the audiences of Naruto and Harry Potter, but the writing is still good, keep up the good work.

If Harry's soul that traveled back from the ninja world is the same as his original soul, and the soul from the ninja world returns to HP's body, then Harry must be able to use chakra. The basic setting of Naruto is that any living creature must have chakra, including souls, but if the so-called Naruto game is just an illusion or a dream, then there should be no chakra until the end!

It was really good before it was released, and it really had potential. Although the plot was not good at writing, but after it was released, only a dozen chapters later, an inexplicable plot unfolded and the protagonist was wanted all over the world. Then, the protagonist went on the run with Dumbledore. It was quite outrageous, saying that he would farm in Mexico for half a year. ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Friend, do you really not have a ghostwriter? Not to mention that the protagonist has been running rampant in the ninja world for many years, but he was so easily plotted by an unknown sidekick. The big devil, Dumbledore, who easily controlled the chessboard and killed Voldemort with three teenage children, was actually also plotted by that sidekick? ? Even if you remove the premise again and again, let's not talk about these. You write a novel that crushes the wizarding world and the protagonist becomes the third generation Dark Lord. You write that the protagonist is always being plotted and tricked? Are you sure that the teacher XX you mentioned told you to write like this? And the protagonist was trapped in a conspiracy and couldn't get out, and he still wrote dozens of chapters in a row. Is there no problem with this proportion? Instead of writing about the domineering nature of the protagonist, write about straightforwardness? Then when you were cheated, did you immediately start farming and develop your territory? Don't worry about Voldemort's resurrection or anything? No need to worry about the protagonist being convicted and sentenced to death? Really, If the ghostwriter is listed on the website, I suggest the author fix it. If not, you should really ask yourself if there is anything wrong with your thinking

You are neither Harry Potter nor Naruto, you are just the protagonist of an ancient urban supernatural novel.

As one of the leaders of Akatsuki, the protagonist wouldn't be all about strategy, right? After reading chapter 70, I personally felt that the protagonist was a real talent and did not use any moves similar to those of the ninja world.

Really, this kind of writing needs to be clear, usually the protagonist is arranged to have calculated everything and has it under control, or a protagonist has endless back-ups, the former needs to write a plot loop that finally makes the reader suddenly realize, just like the protagonist deceived everyone in the end and The benefits are all in the pocket, and the surprises here are not easy to write. The latter can just keep using the set backhand, just like the protagonist has unlimited cards and can make unlimited king bombs. It is a little test to dig into the background of the story. After all, if the foreshadowing can be used, it must at least be supported by the original work. Yes, Writing about the protagonist being casually calculated and manipulated is really useless, Because everyone comes to see the protagonist conquer everything, We are not here for the suspense area to see the protagonist being played all the time, how desperate it is, From the plot introduction to the characters, the protagonists are all strong and will conquer the world in the future. No matter how wonderful your writing is about a plot like defeat, it is impossible to arouse the interest of this kind of readers. This is why it is only 500 monthly tickets now

The flaws are not hidden, there are indeed some areas that cannot withstand scrutiny, and there are some issues with the characters, but the plot is very smooth and the dialogue is not embarrassing. It is considered a high-quality fanfic.

It feels like Rollin has already written Ron's character. . . Just like Peter Pettigrew

... It has nothing to do with Naruto...

I think the writing is quite good, hundreds of chapters are finally on the shelves But the connection with Naruto became weaker and weaker later It's still quite interesting, but it's a pity that the setting

The only regret now is that ninjutsu has not appeared in this world. I look forward to seeing the scene where Harry spits out a huge fireball and shocks the wizarding world.

In this conversation in Chapter 32, Harry, when did you take the shape of Danzo? 🤓

So cool! Damn it, this is the most enjoyable HP fanfic I have ever read! Don't be shy, just do it! Glory belongs to Gryffindor!

It feels like returning to other worlds is fine. The combat power of the Hokage system is not reflected, or it is just a brainwashing return.

Voldemort: I am the greatest devil! Harry: Then you must be very powerful, right? Voldemort: I killed four to five hundred people just to achieve my name as the Demon King! Harry: Pretty good. How many are you going to kill tomorrow? Voldemort:? ! Innately evil Hogwarts brat, you are too extreme. I will...,, Flying Thunder God Slash,, Sorry, I went to the wrong place, it should be, Avada gnaws the big melon!

It's very interesting. When I first chose Lion House, I thought it was a step-by-step drama, but the author is very thoughtful. The most important thing is to describe the ruthless calmness of Naruto after his wandering, and then start all kinds of sexy operations, which is very enjoyable. The shortcoming is that some of the settings of Harry Potter are not in line with the original work. The press conference where the heads are taken should be the climax, but it is a pity that it is written too little. The climax content is written too little, which is a shortcoming.

I rely on my buddy to write a book for charity 😰

Good and classic models, I feel like I'm at home after seeing them.

If you were really a high school student, you would be 100,000 times more awesome than Han Han.

The total number of cells of the ninjas in Naruto is different from that of civilians and even people on Earth. Naruto can climb Hokage Rock at the age of six. Which of you can? If there is no sacred tree or Kaguya in HP, where will the chakra come from for you to extract? Even if you are not a ninja, you are an alien whose cells are different from those of earthlings. You can't extract it, right?

This Harry Potter used to travel through the ninja world through clothing/soul travel/other ways. If it was through clothing, why not use chakra?

Seeing Chapter 25, isn't this pure selling of dog meat?🙂

"I have played with guns on the throne of Khorne, drank soup at the cauldron of Nurgle, shared spoils in the house of Tzeentch, and sold songs in front of Slaanesh's bed! This is me, the founder of the empire! The slayer of orcs! The resister of demons, the emperor of mankind, Sigmar!" Sigmar introduced himself to the banquet with his warhammer, and by the way told all the guests how bad he was. "Fellow prophets, who can tell me the future destiny of the human empire! Can it suppress all races and be glorious forever?" The muscular man asked arrogantly. The prophet of Ulric the White Wolf came out first and said: "I see that the future of the empire will be filled with bald priests. They have scriptures in one hand and hammers in the other. They chant the name of Sigmar and brutally surround and suppress Ulric believers. After the civil war, the empire was destroyed." "Heresy! As a devout believer in Ulric, I don't believe your sowing discord!" Sigma was furious and smashed the White Wolf Prophet's head with a hammer. The Great Necromancer stood up again and said: "I saw countless warriors fighting with muskets and giant swords. Soldiers were cut down, priests were bewitched, and the empire was destroyed. Only the world of undead and bones will last forever." "Bastard! Humans will never accept a dead world!" Sigma smashed the bones of the Necromancer with another hammer. The rat prophet took a step forward, and the green crystal ball in his hand projected a picture of the bliss of the world: humans and rats coexist harmoniously, and the future will be prosperous; they provoke wars and sell military disasters, but criticize normal trade; they eat chicken and shoot each other in American style, but they are called They love life; their hands are full of blood, but they claim that they are the victims; they party together on the island, but claim to be human role models who take care of Luo Li... "This future seems pretty good. How can we realize it?" The big golden man asked humbly. "We lie, we cheat, we steal, and we have a course to teach these. With such continuous exploration and progress, the glory of the human empire will surely be realized." "What a wonderful future, I really want to see it with my own eyes." Sigma sighed happily. "Yes, when the empire is about to be destroyed and the last emperor, Karl Franz, dies in battle, you can be resurrected in his body and experience it all for yourself."

Finished reading the first chapter. I didn't even finish the first chapter, I only read half of it. A strong second-level wind is coming.

The settings added in Chapter 95 were eaten as soon as the first chapter was released.