The World of Naruto Under Sharingan's Eyes

As a rebel ninja, he also started to engage in humanitarianism, and the dragon vein does not belong to some queen, whoever can control the dragon vein belongs to whomever.

If you follow the plot, do you want to take advantage of Nagato's reincarnation? After all, when Pain bulldozed Konoha, the area of ​​​​this technique was directly selected and even the toads were resurrected.

The protagonist is written to be as powerless as the Joker, dangling around. After the genocide, entering and exiting Konoha is the same as your home. The writing is too taken for granted. It's not like Jiraiya or Lao Zi left the village. You've been exterminated and you're still there beeping...

After being exterminated, you still have to be a dog to Konoha. You don't need Naruto's mouth escape and Shisui's other gods to brainwash you. The time traveler does not pull out the chaos anyway.

I wonder if these people in the comment area have any serious illness? Ichibo feels that writing about dragon veins cannot write time, Ichibo can't leave Konoha because the fire-breathing shadow group can't leave Konoha, and he has to be a dog for them to survive Ichibo can't kill the third generation of Danzo without starting the game. Ichijou didn't start the game to save Uchiha because his character is not good? ?? ?? Are there so many lunatics in the Naruto fandom?

The good things written by Naruto fans about Konoha are all self-pleasure articles

Funny? Just leave Konoha if you want? What kind of strength does the protagonist have at the beginning? Is he even Kage level? Can he be compared to the Third Generation and others? Even if it is to prevent the Uchiha bloodline from leaking out, the Third Generation will not let people go, and the pursuers will stop chasing after killing a few people? That's the root! An emotionless robot basically doesn't care about life or death. When Obito and Itachi learned the news later, they wouldn't let him go at all. At first, they didn't want to find a way to escape, so they tried to make a fool of themselves? Is Konoha's defense just paper? I wish the whole ninja world knew you defected.

Uchiha Sumire: I can surpass my ancestors without a system Long Yang: Without that sword, I can still annihilate the enemy army Langui: Stop bragging, brother

The writing is good, and there is no charge for writing it until the finale of Naruto. It's so conscientious.

Good news, brothers, I will be able to get Jiraiya (Sage Mode) together tomorrow.

Why do you look so unhappy?

Why return to Konoha? The third generation is the darkest one. He can't get ahead until he dies! Only by exterminating F4 and their family can the rot in Konoha be eliminated.

I really like Miss Sara, the heroine?

It is recommended to watch the first 100 episodes of Naruto to regain the initial vitality of Naruto, the feeling of youthful and passionate comics, and it does not have to be too dark and cruel at the beginning First find your own ninja way, then do some interesting tasks and practice training, and finally contact the twelve little heroes and take the chunin exam There is a novel "Red Sand" that was well written in the early stage. Writing about Uchiha can also be about civilian ninjas with Uchiha blood. Wait until the third generation is sent before opening your eyes (just like Izumi, who was also a civilian ninja at the beginning). In the early stage, the main line will be more important, and in the middle stage, it depends on imagination.

If you copy Chen Zhan's words, you will be whipped to death if your writing is too low.

It's really not that good. The author probably has some ideas, but his writing skills need to be improved. After reading Chapter 7, let me complain about the bad points: 1. The protagonist appeared at the scene of the night of genocide at the beginning. He made Danzo take the blame and ran away. The reason why the protagonist appears in such a dangerous place is not explained clearly. 2. Go to Loulan to get Dragon Vein. To put it bluntly, there are two reasons: to obtain Dragon Vein Chakra and the base (Loulan). Inexplicably, he became involved in an emotional connection with Queen Loulan, and the appearance of the base was rather far-fetched. 3. Here comes the most arrogant one. He actually ran back to Konoha, negotiated with the Third Generation, and wanted to hand over Danzo. I am speechless, you are so shameless. With this approach, the Third Generation did not deal with Danzo at first, but planned to let it go lightly. Now if I deal with Danzo because of your words, then I will slap myself in the face. If he were a normal person, he would not agree, but Sandai agreed. Other authors try their best to round out the plot, but it's better for me to destroy the characters first.