Douluo Dalu: The Unrivaled Tang Sect: The Eye of Truth

I hope I can avoid some bad luck, especially Ma Xiaotao. It feels like a part of Tang San's dog training. He was almost killed when he was good, but he was so heartbroken later. I can't understand it.

Douluo fanfics are all shit now

I really like the image of the author's protagonist who is decisive in killing and imaginative, but I personally am very disgusted with the protagonist's later development. The protagonist of the previous book, Huo Yuhao, is labeled as Dark Flow. His character is not broken, but he is disgusting. The protagonist of the previous book was so oppressed that he plotted all the way, and finally became in a state of mind where he was neither a human nor a ghost. Indifference to life, taking pleasure in toying with all living beings, and breaking away from the human group. Of course there is nothing wrong with writing this way, and I have read even crazier ones, but why should I say that I didn't like the previous book? Because the protagonists are so different from before and after, although the protagonist in the early stage was just too rational to be a human being and seek opportunities, although he deliberately alienated Wang Donger, whom he had been attracted to many times. But it was just for the sake of tolerance. What I thought in my heart was that I would make changes when I have the strength in the future. The protagonist in the middle and later stages has gone completely crazy. He was just born and massacred the city as a matter of course. He ignored life and started a meaningless war. Even some of the things I did in the later stages were purely for fun. This huge contrast made me jump to reading it after reading dozens of chapters. The more I read, the more depressed and bored I became. I didn't read the finale because I abandoned the book. Where is this book? The protagonist is also Huo Yuhao. Before the protagonist entered the Noumenon Sect, I watched it with great interest. After entering Noumenon Sect, I found that the author was somewhat trying to change the soup without changing the medicine. The more I read, the more I feel like the last book, where the protagonist has to be written as a person who cares about nothing but the pursuit of the unknown, and even plays with the births of others in order to feel the meaning of life. To be honest, I'm a little disappointed. At the beginning, I thought the author wanted to write something different in this book. After all, the first 80 or so chapters of this book are quite positive. But the more you write, the darker the style becomes, so why not the last book? At least the dark text was mentioned at the beginning of the last book. I think there is no shortage of imagination in what the author writes, but what is missing is the brilliance of human nature! ! ! Life is more than rationality and selfish desires. The protagonist of the author's novel is too rational to think about the scope of normal people. For such a person, the ending will end with this madman. Although Einstein can still play the violin, the protagonist has nothing but selfish desires and exploration of the unknown. Not quite like a normal person. It is suggested that the author could add some warm elements into it, for example, Wang Dong'er and the three-eyed golden eagle, which is Huo Yuhao's unavoidable marriage. No matter what the ending is, at least it can make the protagonist look like a human being, right? The least recommended thing is to switch to a harem stallion in the middle. I don't think you have the writing power to write about a harem. Of course, if there is a big brother who also rewards you with a huge sum of money so that you can kneel down and change your style in the midfield for him and start a harem, then just pretend that I didn't tell you, after all, it is the big brother who gives the money.

The soul skills of each person's soul ring are the template for the operation of soul power. Can be transformed into self-created soul skills

Two of the three golden chapters have no substantive content. In the third chapter, you'd better write down your future goals, otherwise the three golden chapters will be wasted.

I watched Midnight in one go and couldn't stand the main chapter anymore. It cannot be said that there are no new ideas in the novel, but it obviously does not completely break out of the plot framework of the original work. Of course, this is also an old problem of most fans. Is it wrong to say that this is not good? The real problem lies in the characterization. I haven't read the author's previous works, so I don't know what the previous book was like, but in my opinion, the protagonist of this book is really poorly portrayed. Many Dou Er fans will write about Huo Gua, the time traveler. The advantage is that you don't have to worry about OOC, and you can put more private goods. It is indeed a good idea. It's a pity that the Huo Gua character in this book was not successfully created, or in my opinion, it was a complete failure. If I had to use one word to describe it, the only thing I can think of is "pale". In a good book, the protagonist is the protagonist because the author gives him unique characteristics. Looking at this book from this perspective, is Huo Gua okay? But the character development was such a failure. I saw some book friends say that the protagonist is too rational - not only too rational, but simply lacking in humanity, with no emotions, no empathy for other NPCs, no bonds and no emotions, and only considers gains and losses in everything (I still don't understand the pattern of gains and losses). In a word, the protagonist is not very human. I know how to observe this and that every day, basically just observing without participating in the plot. Finally, I saw the protagonist meddling in the plot... Huo, you'd better stop meddling. You have been holding in your aggrievedness for a year just to be imprisoned, and you will continue to hold it in when you are done? Yes, it's fun to pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger, but I didn't see a tiger either. Don't talk about tigers, just eat them. Eat whatever you want and let the protagonist pretend. A running account is a running account that follows the plot from the beginning to the end, and skips most of the more enjoyable running accounts in the original work. What do you think this book is about? The original work is better than what you wrote. There is also that outrageous broken paragraph. You don't even read it to see if it is smooth. You have to divide one sentence into two paragraphs and cut it in the middle. It's disgusting ... No, I'm getting more and more confused. I was unhappy in the middle of the night and wrote a bunch of words that I don't know how to vent. It doesn't matter who cares. I don't change the mountains, everyone takes care of them.

I wanted to laugh when I saw the hydrogen man in the introduction. The man who originally made the world of Douluo a hydrogen world changed the Trilogy of Shrouding the Sky and Devouring the Starry Sky into a hydrogen world.

I'm speechless. It's suddenly become popular recently to travel through time and become Huo Yuhao. But you've already written one book, and writing another one will easily make readers tired.

Without the patch, Ma Xiaotao would not have appeared. Without Huo Gua's help to suppress her, and Poseidon Lakeside killed someone this time, it was impossible to let her out to participate in the competition. If the problem could not be solved, the academy would even imprison Ma Xiaotao. In the original novel, Ma Xiaotao herself also mentioned that she would not participate in the competition without the ultimate ice suppression.

Did the author have any misunderstanding about the setting of the second martial spirit? It also hinders the cultivation of soul power. Where did the author see the second design? Having the second martial soul can basically be said to be a gift of heaven and earth plug-in. It is obviously a weapon that can be upgraded quickly, so don't just use the second design.