China Entertainment: My Time

Poetry

Dear readers, because there are some problems with what I wrote earlier, I revised it in the past two days and re-uploaded it. I hope everyone can give me your opinions and I will actively correct it. Thank you readers, and the author pays my respects.

It's pretty good. Apart from the songwriting and the Machiavellian aspects, which makes me feel a little embarrassed, I think the rest of the writing is pretty good.

It's true that a Chinese entertainment theme can be a bit toxic... Of the two women I liked in the previous life, one was married by Long Liqi and the other was cheated by Gao Yunxiang. Do you want it to be so miserable? This is the story of Huayu Wen's story of such bitterness and hatred among literary youths. How do we, the readers, need to take the role of a cuckold? Besides, if one of them dares not pursue her and the other one is defeated, it is no longer a matter of bad luck, but a matter of character. I am afraid that even if the protagonist's character is developed, his woman will still cheat on him.

Girls' Poems

A mess. A bit of a literary disease.

It's too long. Compressing three chapters into one is enough. This is a Huayu novel, but the first three chapters only export hatred for Japan. The key point is that the Japanese and Huayu are not related. Chengtian Entertainment itself is not very good at it. It doesn't need the protagonist to target it, and it will be over by itself.

It's poisonous. It's better to get to know brothers Chengtian and Huayi. If you don't know how to write, don't write about entertainment. Chengtian has always been a loser, even if Wang Jinghua brought a bunch of people there.

I don't think you should date someone short and tight. After his accident, he usually doesn't stick to the wheat field when writing books. At that time, when Warner and Haidie saw your songwriting ability, no fool would not refuse to sign you.