All Witches Must Die

I also started writing on a stand-alone computer

The writing is good, but it feels like "I haven't thought about what I want to write." There is too much useless information. After describing a thing, a large number of related clues will immediately follow, which seems more cumbersome than many traditional literature. I personally think it is because the author lacks writing experience and is unable to express the scenes he wants to describe and the scenes he wants to introduce in concise language, and he will write a long list without realizing it; coupled with the segmentation, useless descriptions take up too much space. Of course it can also be understood as the writing style. If this is the case, it will become extremely difficult to change. Since it is difficult to attract readers, you should be prepared to sit on the bench for a long time.

No one can see that it will be broken

No wonder the writing style of Standalone is too detailed and too "artistic", in other words, it's wordy, giving people the feeling of micromanaging everything. The plot progresses slowly and is very Riddler-like, and readers can easily feel lost😅.