Conan: You Are Already Surrounded by Me

I just read the first five chapters. This system talks too much. Most of the first five chapters are just conversations with the system. They are neither funny nor advance the plot. The system's presence is too high at the starting point. A book with too much nonsense cannot survive.

The plot of the first meeting over a few bottles of wine to test each other out was too clumsy, and there was also a behind-the-scenes boss in the middle, with no key plot points and jumping around. I hope it will be better when entering the main plot.

The boss setting feels weird, and it feels a bit discouraging. The other settings are very well written. For now, just this one, would it be better if it was simpler? I feel like it's not good for A Ran and the guy who looks a lot like the boss to appear, and then it's up to the author to come on 😡

Is Lezi a popular person? Don't watch pure black 😁

The title of the book is good. You could add Chapter 1 and Chapter 2 in front of the title to sort it 😁

Invest, invest, the author will update 😄

Chapter 36 begins to directly enter the Mingke timeline. That day, that stick, that person. Where dreams begin!

There is too much talk about the system... Just use it as a tool, why do you act like an individual? This kind of system is not popular in Qidian, right?