Across Realms: Rise from Resident Evil

😭😭😭Why is it the movie Biochemistry? The movie version has a pure clown plot. I want to see the game version 5555

The world of Alita is outrageous. The heart of an infantry unit is an antimatter furnace, the kind that can power an entire city. But a combat unit with such a powerful heart used low-level assault tactics to climb a pipe with a rifle, and then was wiped out by a large gear. Logically speaking, with such a powerful energy source installed on the body, building a single-soldier aircraft is not much better than climbing a pipe.

This is the only time in my life that I saw a zombie being chopped with a hatchet. I don't know why, but I feel that as a reader, I have been insulted? Weird🙂

The three forces in the main world must not engage in that old-fashioned plot. The first force is a bad guy, the second force is a good guy, the second one wants to join the first force, and the female force is all good people and then joins the protagonist. I hope the author can write a normal world. The three forces all hope that the dungeon they are in can develop and prosper. They just have some different ideas.

I still don't understand recruiting people from other worlds to mine, it's outrageous, it's like playing house. When recruiting people, you have to take care of food, housing, and housing, and you have to give them money. With this money, you might as well buy oil, natural gas, and ore. Why not use t800 for mining cycle? And you can definitely write more about the main world and increase the combat power of the enemies in the main world. Wouldn't it be better for the protagonist to go through time travel? It feels good to watch the protagonist directing. What you wrote is completely beyond normal people's thinking. Even if the companies created in other worlds have money and nowhere to spend it, can't they buy other things? Gold, silver, copper, coal, and other chemical substances, and maybe if you have enough money, you can buy a lot of secret black technology, so you don't have to go to the trouble of robbing them. There are so many useful things, so to spend this money to recruit people to mine, it is true that it is a small knife, and it opens your eyes.

Author, are you sure you have read what you wrote? Your words are not fluent. Readers can read novels without using their brains. Your sentences are not fluent. Too many sick sentences are too much. I hope you will take it seriously!

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After waiting for a long time, it's finally free for a limited time

It is quite difficult to accept the orcs and ask them to become cannon fodder. Since they are allowed to be cannon fodder, let them be better equipped. Give them some half-body armor and cold weapons to protect their vital points, and then the protagonist's troops will shoot in full-coverage power armor. If they encounter opponents with the same hot weapons, will it make any difference whether they have these cannon fodders or not? No matter how you think about it, it would be useful to have them wear thicker armor in front, right? Are you afraid that if the thing you give is too good, they will rebel? They all took the initiative to install controllers on their bodies. What do they think? Also, having people come to mine is full of advantages. The protagonist's technology and any mining equipment can be more efficient than manpower! They actually asked people to mine, and then used the dug-out mining robots as supervisors. What kind of cyber plot is this? Isn't that too anti-intellectual?

Damn it, the poisonous articles in the system will hit the streets as soon as possible

Before Transformers, I thought the writing was pretty good. The protagonist has a certain amount of survival pressure and develops carefully. The world gradually increases in difficulty. The protagonist gradually unlocks new arms and technologies, and the new arms have a strong sense of existence. The overall feeling is like playing a game, with monsters, upgrades and equipment step by step. Although there are some minor problems, the flaws are outweighed. The plot of Transformers is like, the game has been updated. Previously, I played it for five days to level up to level 10, and got the level 10 Qinglong Yanyue Sword. After the update, I was directly upgraded to level 1w after a slash, and was given a level 100 standard long sword. Then I went to the dungeon and told me that the dungeon was level 50, and I needed to be sealed to level 50 to fight. I felt bad instantly. You may not pay attention to the expression. At first, it was gradually improving, but then it suddenly rose sharply and then dropped again. I feel a bit pity. I just watched it today, and I watched it all day long. I don't know if some readers said it was uncomfortable to watch without women, but before and after Biochemical 2, the protagonist was deliberately written to have a one-night stand. It seems to be deliberately telling readers that the protagonist is not a eunuch. It seems very abrupt. The protagonist's character seems to have been forcibly set.

The biggest shortcoming of this book is that the various spaceships in StarCraft are really ugly and ugly.

I've read too much of Zhu Tianwen, so I wanted to change my taste. The early writing was good, but it's a mess in the later stages. Now that I've seen Alita, I can't stand it anymore. The story is too poor, just change the world and crush it, and it's not readable. Author, you can completely change the skin of each world and write something with your own characteristics and create the same plot conflict. Otherwise, everyone can guess the outcome and won't watch it. The desire to go on has gone; and the main world can actually write different things. For example, the protagonist has traveled through so many different worlds, contacted various different civilizations, and abducted so many talents. There can be a great integration of technology and a cyber world or something similar. The protagonist is always searching for talents, but it has not been reflected at all.

The stars are not fragrant? Regardless of the technology tree or world view

I also play StarCraft, but the power system of StarCraft is not high. There is a game that seems to have something like King Kong, Earth, Asura, etc. I have never played it, but I watched the video and it seems that the power system is quite high.

In the mutated world, ordinary lizards can be directly strengthened to be more powerful than tanks, but humans have 0 enhancements, so how come humans have not become extinct after decades?

The protagonist is still too weak and frustrated. Should he max out his defense technology? Is it just a heavy defense unit such as siege tanks, electromagnetic guns, large-caliber heavy artillery, heavy defense laser towers, repair towers, deflection shields, etc. The protagonist can't make any defensive technology. No matter what weapon it is, it is a good weapon as long as it can destroy the enemy. The world of (Command and Conquer) has good technology. The protagonist finally has a money-grabbing world and is targeted by hell. Moreover, there are many high-value minerals in (Starship Troopers). You can't use the resources stored in the system for everything. The protagonist should not leave until he has earned hundreds of times the system funds and various high-value minerals. The transfer of the protagonist at the last moment is equivalent to a population transfer of about 100 million. Of course, the protagonist must be careful not to overturn even if he is not greedy and powerful. I feel like the author is trying to suppress the protagonist. Why did hell meet him for the second time? The protagonist is so weak that he can't even defeat a lord of hell. Moreover, others are not at full strength and there is still a world to fight. The protagonist should stop suppressing the protagonist. Readers will not buy it. The above are my personal suggestions and opinions

The plot is too blunt. . . And unreasonable

The word "existence" makes my brain hurt, and I can even ask: What kind of existence are you? Really headache. It's totally okay to ask you if you are human. There are many places where there is, there is. Headache.

Every world is crushed. Gradually you will get tired of aesthetics😪

This should be considered a quick time travel. In each world, you quickly cross the main line, fight the BOSS quickly, and then leave quickly. If you encounter a demon, you run faster. If you don't look at it with your brain, you will feel white and watery.

It is better for the author to have fewer typos

Everyone, help me catch up on the reading. The seedling of the new book needs the protection of readers so that it can thrive!

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It's really well written and very beautiful. It's just that the catchphrase in the early stage is a flaw, and it's all about existence. The most existence words in a chapter are 10, which is extremely unfriendly to listening to books, so it is recommended not to listen to it in the early stage. In fact, there are many words that can replace "existence" or there is no need to add "existence" at all. I suggest that the author can quickly read it by himself after writing. I have never encountered anything like this 😠 in any of the Yellow Tomato books. Finally: the author works hard and works hard! ! Come on, come on, come on! ! You still have some ability to get into the starting point. Tomato people have to submit several times before they can get in.

There are a lot of typos in one chapter. . . Why don't you check the author after he's finished writing?

It's been a long time since I've raised 300,000 words to now, but I can't do enough to update it with 1.3 Million words.

I read it wrong, the author wrote it very well. Give a reward once to express encouragement