Saving the World Begins with the Manifestation of a Bad Woman

The 20-year-old Shen Nong is here Let's talk about the shortcomings first: the information in the first few chapters is too dense, one message after another, and you will be confused if you read it a little faster Let's talk about the advantages: it is a traditional upgrade and monster killing article. It is obvious that the author wants to rationalize everything Including why the first base lost control and was explained after more than ten chapters There are some chapters after that that are really scary. In general, this article is to my liking. The protagonist is a good person. At the same time, the second volume is a bit like the three-scumbag teacher Jue's sexy actions. I couldn't help but give it a cute look. Please update it soon!

There is indeed a lot of information, but it actually doesn't affect the reading too much. After all, even if I don't know about some things at all, it won't affect my understanding of the plot development. If the content of this book is put into other books, it may have more content in it. I am very curious about how many words the author's current outline and concept will take to complete the book.

A lot of effort was put into this book. A quick glance at a lot of the content makes it seem incoherent when you read it. The book is a good book, so leave a name. This book is probably going to be popular. I hope the author can stabilize his rhythm. Don't be too eager to achieve results. Polish what needs to be polished, and don't make a mess in the middle and later stages.

From the second chapter to the twelfth chapter, it is simply a bombardment of information. After skipping a few paragraphs, I can't understand it 😅

The writing is good, and I can see that I want to write good things, but I also want to select readers.

Brothers and sisters can write down the supporting roles they want below this building, and the author will add them to the main text according to the situation Format: Name Gender Ability and Specialties Past Experience

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Please comment more, the author is refreshing comments 24 hours a day... Please read it, especially on Tuesday. Just pull to the last chapter and wait a minute to turn to the last page. Now in the second round of recommendations, the recommendation is to read and follow the reading After that, I would like to thank you for enduring my sparse narrative in the first two volumes and being able to read the third volume Obviously, my writing has become much smoother in the third volume, akimbo The author is working hard to make progress and tell you the stories in his mind This book is not a traditional monster-fighting and upgrading article, nor is it a world-by-world task-upgrading article You should be able to see how ambitious I am after reading the third volume Refill! Finally, please comment again, thank you! !

I hope it will cost 50 cents a piece.

I read the comments first, so I quickly read the first 6 chapters It was quite easy to understand. After all, I have seen these settings before. I have been a bookworm for ten years.

This writing is too dense, and generally speaking, there is no foreshadowing. Suddenly a paragraph jumps, and the head looks huge!

. . . . It feels great, so I'll take a break and say goodbye.

I think it will be very good to listen to the book. I will mark it first and the author will take his time.

This book by the author reminds me of another author, whose name I forgot. It seems to be the author of Xiling Empire. However, this book is not similar to Xiling Empire but another book by this author.

I listened to this book. I am used to doing other things while listening to books. When listening to books, it is destined to be impossible to focus 100% on the book. As a result, my mind was confused after listening to it, but even a lot of the content is not a mess. But the quality and novelty of the story itself still supported me to listen to this story. You, the author, are talented and gifted. The first is that the information is so dense that even audiobooks cannot be opened. If the information is so dense, it is no longer screening readers. I hope the author can face up to this situation. If the author writes the book purely for self-pleasure, treat me as saying nothing. But if the author hopes to write a good story and attract a certain number of readers, so as to accumulate enough reading volume to support the author to continue on the path of online writing, then he must pay attention to lowering the reading threshold. I personally feel that the author of this book thought too much and wrote too hastily. I can feel the author's enthusiasm, no, I should say passion. But the passion is too great to tell a story well. The second person who can keep reading is the person who is on your radio wave. The author also said this in the book. But the radio waves I understand should be the background of each world, the value orientation of the protagonist, various character creations, and all the behavioral logic of the entire book, and should not include writing techniques and prose structure. The author's thoughts and imagination are enough to make things happen, but there are other aspects. . . Good food must be well plated. When reading this book, I felt like the author filled me with a big bucket of delicacies from the mountains and seas, and then poured it directly on the ground, making me unable to eat it. For all the above, maybe it's because I've read too much, so the wild boars can't eat fine chaff? But I want to make it clear that if the author wants to make some achievements in online writing, he should not make this his main career. At least as a side job, you won't get nothing, and the land will grow and hit the street again. It's better not to think about things like radio waves. This is too arrogant and conceited. If you pursue highbrow and low-key, you, the author, will not come to Qidian. As a bookworm for more than ten years, all those who thought about radio waves, except for a few who changed their minds and chose to live first, have repeatedly fallen into the street and lost their enthusiasm for writing. All those who are stubborn will eventually be slapped in the face. Let the author think for himself

I didn't understand it at the beginning, I felt like I was confused when walking through the maze.

It's finished with 45 photos. How did you recommend it?

It's too dense and I can't understand it. I can't understand the logic line at all. The world watched several chapters and still couldn't figure it out. I don't even know about the main quest

I understand something, but I don't understand anything.

Guys, I really didn't expect to be able to get through rounds 1-4... I have recommended four rounds again It shows that everyone likes this theme, so let's read the new book "Who taught you to speed through the terrifying reincarnation" The new book has no rhythm problems, and the whole process is enjoyable I posted it on this account, please support me.

After reading Chapter 15, it is not a question of information explosion at all, but a question of missing information, and there is no effective information. For example, in other books, the answer is a covered box. The author reveals small parts of the box little by little, so that readers can determine the material, texture, inscriptions, etc. Of the box, allowing readers to have room for imagination. The golden box also has the words "Treasure Box of God" written on it. It will definitely be awesome after opening it. As for your book, it is also a covered box. The piece of cloth you cover is much larger than the box. When you open it, there is still air. I can't see the box. So what am I reading? Can the author answer my question? Is this writing method okay? Yes, for example, if the author is a master, his identity is the reason for me to read, the box will not be rotten wood, or the gaudy piece of cloth, that is, your plot, characters, and rhythm are all very good, The same sentence, the author If the author can answer what I'm reading, that's fine. It's very tiring to read in a daze all the time. My brain is always strained to find some clues but there is no clue. Then I will naturally delete the book. I hope the author can understand that even if you don't think deeply about the book, you will still be tired.