The Heaven and Earth Will Fall, and Everything in My Palm Will Be in the Same Furnace

Hanging sheep's heads and selling dog meat? Aren't you talking about the crown prince? Why did he become a gangster at the beginning? The author is also a talented person.

I'm tired of working overtime 996 lately, and my thoughts are messy. I came to the book club to chat about it, record some of the shortcomings of this story from the beginning to the present, and summarize some ideas. As for the shortcomings of this book, I am not afraid of discouraging readers when I talk about them here. Readers will know if they are to their liking after reading some of the plots. If you can read it, just think of this post as my attitude and loyalty, claiming that I will write better and better. In general, the opening pace of this book is too slow, the sense of substitution and expectation, including the excitement, are not strong, the plot is very cliché, the development of Goldfinger is not enough, the sense of reward is average, and there is no emotion. I think it has improved slightly now, but these problems are relatively general. I am only aware of the problems at present, and I am still figuring out how to optimize them. I have an outline for the following plot, which I consider to be compact, as well as specific expression techniques, how to be immersive, gainful, and hopeful, and how to write with a more refreshing emotion. I will make conscious adjustments, use strengths to offset weaknesses, and finish the book. That's it, please read more! The performance of the book is not good. I kneel down for a while and rely on my intelligence to push and hang me. Please read the reading data for the new book issue. I hope that everyone who is interested in this book can follow it and support it. Thank you! There will be some complicated thoughts later due to working overtime, which can be understood as me making excuses for myself. Che Zhulun's chatter will be written wherever I think of it. It is a small composition that everyone can enjoy. There is no need to waste time reading or commenting. When this book was first tested and promoted, only 30% of the first ten chapters were retained. Even if the competition has been fierce recently, it was obviously not well written. Before I published the book, I knew that the beginning was quite satisfactory and I just wanted to make things clear. I have read many comments from friends or book friends. The pace at the beginning is very slow and not exciting, there are a lot of settings, the characters are not clear, the content is too confusing, the character background worldview upgrade system is not on point, the plot is too cliché, the conflicts are inexplicable, the golden finger does not have the effect, the upgrade is too slow, etc. I actually quite agree. I have never thought about writing a different beginning. I want to write slowly, to write deeply, not to cater to the market, but to write private goods. I have never thought about these. I want to cater to the market and write fast-paced stories, but my level and effort are not enough, and I don't know how to change it. When I wrote tens of thousands of words, I thought that I don't need to explain so much at the beginning. It would be better to make the entrance into the cave a little more miserable, write Renxinfang as an evil sect, write a life-and-death crisis opening, and then start working. When I was 100,000 words long, I thought that maybe I could get the golden finger from the protagonist's cold poison outbreak as an entry point, and it would be interesting to start with him trying to escape Dayin. A friend said that I think the chapter about group fights in your twenty-odd chapters is very smooth. After writing the first chapter, you can go directly to the plot. I feel very good about these ideas. The current beginning has no emotion, just a quick glance, and the effect will not be achieved by changing it. Rewriting is a good way. It could be that the cold poison broke out and got the golden finger, escaped from Dayin, entered the Xuan Kingdom, joined the evil sect, struggled for survival, and intrigued with the disciples to improve his status. This kind of beginning should be more interesting. Or maybe I have always been the prince, thinking about breaking things down all day long, which is quite interesting. However, my current level is just like that. Not to mention whether I can achieve the corresponding effect if I rewrite it from such a starting point, I don't have the energy. Part-time codewriting, working overtime, and then writing 4k, I spent time rewriting the beginning. I don't know if it's good or not, but the rest of the plot is probably about eunuchs. So I admit that I didn't get good grades at the beginning because my ability was limited and my energy was limited, and I was making excuses for myself. I wanted to write the rest of the plot well, and I didn't care about the beginning. Here is a little story, no offense intended, just a rant. I was chatting in a small author group before. Some friends said that my beginning was not specific and dry, and suggested that I expand and enrich each paragraph. I said I couldn't change the beginning, I couldn't write 4k words every day, and I didn't have enough time and energy He said I could just change one or two paragraphs every day, it wouldn't take much time. I said it's not that I don't want to change, it's that I can't change it well. It's useless to change one or two paragraphs, so I have to rewrite it. I don't have the energy, my level has not improved, and I can't change it well. Thank you very much for your suggestion. I can't do it. Let's move on to the next topic. He felt, "You let people find shortcomings, I pointed them out, and you said you can't change them. Then I gave you new opinions, and you still said you can't change them?" I said there are indeed difficulties. Don't have the attitude of "I pointed out the problems, and you deserve it if you don't change them." I admit this, why are you poking scars on people? He said why do I have such an attitude? If you throw dirty water on me, I think you have a glass heart. I said that I do have a soft heart, and the reason why I have a soft heart is that I am now putting aside this review. But I didn't say, "OK, OK, I'll change it later." Instead, I told you frankly, "I have difficulties with your suggestions, and I still have difficulties with your continued suggestions." This is because I agree with the problems you pointed out and appreciate the suggestions. It's sad enough to realize that I'm not capable enough. You keep denying my difficulties and repeatedly saying, "That's how I should change. It's easy. Why don't you change?". Then I can only understand that you think that I don't accept your kindness and that your kindness is not repaid. If you think that I am offending you by having difficulties everywhere, then I think you are also rather glass-hearted. Writing a novel is really difficult. Before I have the ability to save a pile of manuscripts and am sure to write an interesting beginning, I accept this beginning and the results it brings, and I will accept it as it should. If it can be changed, I think I have the ability to change it, and I will definitely make adjustments. If I don't have enough ability and energy, I will accept the consequences and put my goals aside for the time being. Concerning the end of the review at the beginning, let's talk about the character of the protagonist In this chapter, I said that my protagonist is very weak. Okay, this is the beginning question. I have nothing to say if you think the writing is weak. I am actually trying to avoid this, but if the writing is not good, I can only use the previous excuse and say that I will use my energy for future efforts. The character of the protagonist is actually not weak at all. In the beginning, his character should be "it doesn't matter" and "save trouble." He is a bit of a Buddhist type who is afraid of trouble. In the subsequent plot, his "strong will to accomplish one thing" will become stronger and stronger. What is powerless is actually the pen in my hand. Upgrading the character design is very important now. If I don't write well, my grades will naturally be bad, so I can only endure it and write the characters clearly while writing the subsequent plot. These things are all excuses. There are always ways to improve things that can't be done or lack of ability. Where there is a will, there is a way. But I don't have the time and energy to try. I can't immediately improve the back-end and come up with a particularly good story. I have nothing to say. I can only tell myself and the readers that I will write better and better in the future. In fact, it is much smoother than when I first started writing, which is good. I should hope more than any reader to write this story well. So I will use my meager efforts to improve my level little by little in the number of words in the future. Finally, please read it! Also, working overtime is so annoying! This post is one chapter long! ! ! (I use fragmented time in the office to code and I can't write any words. I have to write the text with peace of mind. However, I can write wherever I think of it and write it pretty fast. I hope I can use the fragmented time in the future to speed up the coding.) Working overtime is so annoying! Working overtime is so annoying!

If you are interested, you can leave the name of the character you want + simple appearance characteristics, etc. When there is a shortage of characters, I will pick a supporting role and adjust it as appropriate. I do not guarantee the use, the order of appearance, or the position of the character. I will reply when the character is written. Thank you.

The first is to ask for follow-up reading. Currently, the recommendations for new books are based on the follow-up reading data. I hope that all readers of books can turn to the last chapter, or comment on this chapter to encourage the author. Thank you. The new book issue has two chapters every day with a total of 4k words. It has been updated at midnight recently and will be adjusted as needed in the future. As for the plot, because the chapters for tomorrow's update have been written, the first female character finally appeared in Chapter 40, which is gratifying. What I want to say is that there will be no female protagonist in this book for a short period of time. I will write some female supporting characters, but I won't write about ambiguity (I can't write well), so I'll upgrade with peace of mind first. When I reach 50 or even 1 million words, and I feel that my writing is strong enough, I may write a single female protagonist, but that is a story for another day.

The pace is too slow...

It's almost time to get off work, rush!

Come on, go, go, go, go 😆

It's said to be an upgraded article. I read it for a long time, but I didn't find any upgraded version. I have no desire to read any more.

It's quite smooth and eloquent.

There are too many new books recently, and I finally found one that suits my taste. Please update it soon and make it longer.

Author, please update. You are so slow in updating.

From Chapter 20 to Chapter 27, three people were forced by the same realm and worked as thugs. This is so stupid. You can't be like this!