Longevity Starts with Shouyuan Simplified Exercises

There are a lot of messy things, there are simplifications that do not improve the strength, there are a lot of useless improvements, the numbers are watery, and the writing is poor. Only if the writing is more enjoyable will people read the book.

All kinds of pretense, be careful of your sixth aunt, you are deceiving me about my feelings

Too lame, I can't write cool articles, I can't write anecdotes, the logic doesn't make sense, I use the wrong words, I yell for concessions before even competing, and I don't even have the slightest intention of revenge when facing the enemy who poisoned me to death.

Not great, below average. All the life-consuming plug-ins are not top-notch, the plot is cliche and boring, and the writing is not good. Overall, it's below average.

Due to the contracted editor's weekend break, the signing of this book was postponed to Monday. I also hope that all investment tycoons will wait patiently. This was my mistake, I'm sorry everyone. 🙂

The unlucky protagonist wants to kill you wherever he goes. Is that intentional?

I just want to ask if it is the kind of novel in which breathing increases cultivation level, and then there is no trace of any breakthrough in cultivation level in ten or twenty chapters.

It's not that exciting. There are several chapters for one thing.

What is this written? I can't read it.

The logic is very problematic. I visually inspected the AI ​​​​writing and the author only reviewed it without revising it. Even the review was based on one glance and ten lines. After reading two pages, there were four or five unreasonable things.

After reading ten chapters, I really can't stand it anymore.

Chapter 8 of the opening chapter is going to kill me, and it's not very strong at all. This is a bad book.

Judging from the first few chapters, this book is not good and I do not recommend continuing to read it.

In fact, I think that when writing a book, you should at least write a good outline, don't go off track, and have clear logic. In fact, many authors just mention the previous characters in one stroke, and they have forgotten the plot.

Such ridiculous proficiency, 😂