Ink-Wash Panel: Starting with Archery, I Hunt the Sun and Patrol the Heavens

The author's setup has some issues. First, the leaders of small settlements are elected, either because they are physically strong or fair in their dealings. How dare the son of a small settlement leader of about thirty households act so arrogantly? Where does he get his confidence? If you dare to bully your neighbors today, there will be no one left in your neighborhood tomorrow.

The author may not understand that hunters primarily use traps; no hunter carries a bow and arrows everywhere all day. Secondly, hunters need to observe animal tracks, such as droppings, to facilitate setting traps and recognizing common medicinal herbs.

I initially came in with the attitude of "let's try it out" (a Chinese idiom meaning to test something out of something). Panel, hunter, time travel, village—it has all the old tropes of a template novel. I read it with a "let's see what happens" attitude, but I didn't expect the author to have such a good grasp of the plot and pacing. It seems that you've broken free from the pitfalls of excessive distress and forced contradictions. Keep it up, and you'll definitely achieve great results.

I don't know when it started, but whenever I write about rural areas, it always seems to be about infighting among villagers. That's simply impossible. In ancient times, villages were very united, and people usually shared the same surname. You can call them wicked or bad, but you can't treat them like fools.

The protagonist's personality is, well, too extreme, and he even goes so far as to kidnap all the hunters in the village and turn them into professional bandits. (In name only, we're still hunters, just with different prey.) If you think the government's taxes are too high, you don't have to pay them; you can beat up the officials, kill them, and run away with your sister.

The author portrayed this small mountain village as far-fetched. With only thirty-odd households, honestly, it would be more normal for them to be more united. And are only the Chen family and the protagonist the ones who dare to kill? Are the other hunters cowards? They lack common sense; they're used to death.

Before you became an official, you were as tired as a patrol dog; after you became an official, you're even more tired than a patrol dog. Wasn't your official position a waste? Other officials strategize and plan, but you... My god! 😅

Why do so many book summaries invariably end with a line like "Looking back suddenly, wow, wow, wow!"? Doesn't it feel awkward?

A poorly written story; did the author cash out and run away?

This imperial court treats all martial arts instructors like pigs and dogs. The government can force martial arts schools to their deaths, and the court can force all martial arts instructors to participate in some kind of "pacification of rebellion"—it takes killing 100 out of 1000 to end the conflict.