Immortality Starts from Breathing

How should I put it? The author has his own ideas and does not follow the crowd, which is already good. However, it could be better if it could be polished a little more. First, some arrangements are too deliberate and do not follow common logic. For example, when I bought the Spirit Gathering Array, the seller was not a fool. He knew that the competition was about to begin, so how could he lower the price. In addition, the person who bought the Spirit Gathering Array later must have come by coincidence. Since the competition is about to begin, rich people would not prepare in advance. If it were a poor guy who just scraped together enough money, I think it would be more reasonable. Secondly, since the competition is about to begin, the protagonist is running around, doing this and that, which will give people a feeling that they can't understand the importance. There is something unreasonable in this plot setting. If the spirit gathering array is broken, the pig's feet will exhaust the spiritual energy gathered at one time, and the spirit gathering array will take time to recover. Then, going out to earn spiritual stones will become more acceptable. Third, the selling point is gastronomy, but Pig's Knuckle seems not to have put much effort into gastronomy. Since taking medicine can break through, then why can't those second-generation immortals break through? This cannot stand up to logical reasoning. So, we must work hard on breathlessness, which can also explain why pig's feet can break through, but others cannot. Fourth, the cheat finger on the panel is only a recording function, not an acceleration function. It cannot change the qualifications of pig's feet. If pig's feet want to make progress, they must rely on their own efforts. So the courage that comes from a pig's trotter can be relied on to reach a higher level of cultivation and even surpass genius by relying on a golden finger that can only record functions? The author exaggerated the golden finger too much. This may be because I am afraid that some readers will give up! Nowadays, some people read books, not for the plot, but for the upgrade, and they wish they could move up a level every day. As a result, many authors have been led into the trap. Novels are not games, they rely on storylines to make money. Upgrading is just an appetizer. It is great with him, but it will be the same without him. Don't lose watermelon for sesame seeds! Finally, the author should consider his outline comprehensively, absorb reasonable suggestions, and ensure that the plot is reasonable and the logic is smooth. You can't just listen to the wind and rain, and you can't make blind changes again and again.

I thought it was something like the immortal gods of breath-eaters, or something like the Seventy-two Earthly Evil Techniques or the Thirty-Six Techniques of Tiangang. Returned disappointed

You're simply sick. You don't have any shares in the elixir shop. You go around beating people to death.

The waste in the waste stream has lower qualifications than the ninth grade. If the ninth grade is low enough, it can come out as a whole lower grade. The waste stream is no longer popular.

You are a loser again, and you have a cousin who is a great genius. I don't know if you know this. This was a routine many years ago. I am 6

During the new book period, the most important thing is follow-up reading, that is, the number of people who read the last page, which directly determines how far the book will go. So, if you, the readers, feel that this book is not enough, please read it more and take care of the little seedlings. Thank you.

The current content of this book is actually pretty good. Just click on the author's profile picture and you'll see, good guy, he has a lot of criminal records. None of the previous two books has more than 500,000 words. They were both on the shelves and disappeared within a month of perfect attendance.

Am I the first to see it? It's rare, grab a sofa first

The start is so vicious. It was a routine from many years ago and I still use it to write about it.

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Don't you feel embarrassed that I was the author of Spider-Woman?

What I wrote before is okay, but after the big competition, it became very weak.

I think it's very good. The author shouldn't listen to other people, just write according to his own words carefully. There are no big poisonous points. This book is worthy of a second reading.

He's such a loser, isn't it tiring to look at him? Even if he's given an average or lower qualification,

It's early. The donkeys in the production team don't dare to be so lazy and hungry.

Personally I think it's well written, keep up the good work

Leave a Claw, read it for the first time today, author 🌹