Gain a Skill Every Day

After reading more than 30 chapters, I felt at the beginning that the protagonist's cheats and ideas were quite good, but the plot was

What do you mean? This writing is too mysterious, basically written along the lines of Lobotomy Company. But the content is too obscure. If the writing wasn't better, it would be just the author's ramblings. It's not as good as I imagined, and it doesn't have the exciting feeling of having my brain opened up. Moreover, the lottery and random acquisition inside still feel a bit deliberate.

After reading about ten chapters, I felt that the author was suddenly writing more and more chaotically. His writing was not smooth and smooth at all. He just wrote whatever came to his mind, as if he was tying up a stick here and there with noodles.

Hopscotch is actually a lattice hop, but it's called a house. But when the protagonist wakes up, he can jump on a house? Then I draw a grid on the ground and make up a game and name it Space Jump. Can the protagonist awaken and become a space traveler? What if we call him the Great Dancer?

The concentration is too high. As I write, I suddenly say some inexplicable and embarrassing words.

With so many skills, can one still be poor? Deliberate waste or real waste?

Warm up the floor first. Looking at the introduction, I think it's okay, at least the direction of skill evolution is correct. I have seen a similar one before. The protagonist has maxed out the "Pour Vinegar" skill, and then the quality of the vinegar will be inexplicably improved, turning it into an extraordinary item. Then the protagonist will drink vinegar every day. That's fucking outrageous. This is obviously the evolutionary direction of "vinegar making". I suspect that the author was eating noodles when he wrote about this skill.

I can't understand many of the author's jokes 😰 It makes my head hurt to read it

The author can know what he is writing about, but can he realize that the character is not from God's perspective when writing? There are a lot of meaningless words in order to be fashionable. Learn how to write cool articles before writing about wits. The logic is completely broken and it all depends on the author to put God's perspective into the character's development. A few strangers can't communicate effectively and start literary youth.

It's good to read, this book has the qualities of a great emperor () The pace is lively, the ideas are interesting, and the dialogues and relationships between the characters develop naturally The female characters have distinct images, and the male protagonist is not too smart. Reviews are the starting point for a good book.

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The setting itself and the plot from what I have seen so far are okay, but whether it is chaos or stream of consciousness that others say, it is essentially a reflection of the author's poor writing style. The writing is not smooth, round and connected. This is a very big demerit, enough to deduct all the bonus points, because it is close to dyslexia. Maybe the author has a perfect picture in his mind, but as a reader, when I read it, it is almost like eating raw meat. This is basically a lack of writing skills. I still hope that the author can improve, otherwise he will be unable to control novels of any subject.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I felt that it was very confusing and not very logical. I obviously felt that the subject matter was good, but it gave people a sense of stagnation.

It's a good book, but the fandom is too serious and the concentration needs to be very high. I am an omnivorous reader who reads everything, but I still can't understand some of the things written.

A skill every day. From the time the protagonist entered the dungeon to the time the protagonist explored the military base, at least 5 days passed. In the end, the protagonist drew a skill. Didn't he plan to write it well when he tricked people into it at the beginning?

Is it a single heroine? Or multiple heroines? Personally, I prefer multiple female protagonists (crazy hint)

The front part is fine, but the back part feels like I made a plate of dumplings specifically for those female characters.

There are a lot of series of conversations, but I don't know who is saying what in a group of people. There is no name or anything, just a simple conversation The Chinese teacher will cry because he doesn't indicate who is saying what.

I feel that the biggest problem is that death in the dungeon is not really fatal, and there is no sense of oppression immediately. However, the author does not write a casual style, but wants to write an atmosphere of oppression and survival, which is very awkward 🙂

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