Crossing the Trees, I Carry the Road

A first-level author writes this? 200,000 Words don't supervise me to boil water to wash my hair

Writing so well at the beginning is a great test for the author's writing skills. Don't write so well at the beginning, okay? Can't you slowly start writing about small characters?

I originally wanted to read the system article, but I stopped reading and left.

The protagonist is always obsessed with small things

After reading most of it, I found that I didn't use much imagination to write this. The monk with the knife really couldn't kill the protagonist directly!

This novel is speechless. It's just random writing. In the first chapter, it is said that the protagonist only has Changchun Gong. In the second chapter, it becomes a dream spell, l. You can only draw one hundred emotions once, and then a skill suddenly appeared in the second chapter. It was so full of loopholes that I was also drunk. This is the first time I have encountered such a strange book after reading it for so long.

Chapter 21 is starting to feel a bit unbearable.

This new book is pretty well written, please give it a try, author

I liked it a lot at first, but once I transformed, I felt like it wasn't an alien beast anymore. A bit conflicted

Don't think specifically about the word water, otherwise you won't want to read it and it will be scary↗

It is simply that the pure capitalists have withdrawn!

But the type of protagonist is not to my taste, so I canceled it first.

It was good at first, but I'll make a clone later. . . Well

Systematic text. . . . Slipping away. . . .

Fits my taste! Come on, author! Full subscription support

Go back and see what you are writing, author. I really can't stand it anymore when the black tiger demon sets fire to the forest. It's so abstract. Just kill a bunch of people with lightning and say it's because others killed them too hard? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Ah? ? ? ? ? ? ? Coupled with the newly born intelligent monsters in the front, the protagonist can make a final conclusion. Do they kill a lot? ? ? ? ? ? Meat is not worthy of becoming a spirit. And that bird of the protagonist, provoking and instigating, directly turning negotiable matters into war? (I haven't watched this since, I can't stand it anymore.) The protagonist's obsession is also very abstract. The protagonist concludes that the tree cannot ascend. What is the basis? Why is the protagonist so sure? ? ? ? ? ? As long as the author finds a more normal reason. (For example, the cat was mentally traumatizing, and the memory is a bit fuzzy) It can still be explained in the past. You simply have no reason. The protagonist just wants to get into trouble for no reason. (The latter emotional amplification does not constitute a reason for the protagonist to get into trouble for no reason.) ……………………………………………………………… The author's writing is good, and the general direction of the plot is okay. But the writing was too far-fetched. The step is too big, such as the information given by the owner of the doll cat. It broadens readers' world view of this book. This is too urgent. There are some places where you just can't stand it anymore. Don't overdo it if you can't write it clearly. You might as well write it vaguely and patch it later. Come on, author.

A story about two male protagonists, "The Last One" The first male protagonist is ugly and lecherous. He was supposed to be the devil in the world of demons. But by some mistake, he was recognized as the holy son of the fairy world. From then on, he embarked on the path of the prodigal son's return... The second male protagonist, his personality, is upright and handsome. He was supposed to be the holy son of the fairy world. But by mistake, he was destined to be the holy son of the fairy world. Next, he was identified as the Demon Son of the Demon Realm, and has since embarked on the path of becoming a villain... The story unfolds between these two half-brothers... This is the theme of this novel, if you are interested in reading it, read it, at least the logic is online, the plot is reasonable, and there are laughs and tears. Welcome to complain

Come on!