Douluo: the Legend of the Dragon King: the Voice of the Purple Emperor

Let Tang Wulin, Gu Yue, and Na'er have a love-hate relationship. Na'er was obviously in Tang Wulin's shape when he first met her, but you are sick of sticking it up, right? Moreover, your two spirits are still hostile to each other. Why, in the future, they will turn into friendship and end up living happily together. Isn't it disgusting?

Do you belong to the soul beast camp? Do you like the soul beast camp? Destroy Shrek Spirit Pagoda, Tang 50, Tang Mouse

The work has been signed, and I am very surprised. After all, the article written by a 14-year-old student can be liked by the editor, but it mainly relies on the popularity of fan fiction. This article has many poisonous points. Everyone can reflect in this comment. For example, if you feel you can't read it, point it out and I will change it. If there is any sentence that is not fluent, I will change it. At the same time, because this article was written on my whim, I read some I will draw lessons from Dragon King fans later. There are many main plots that I am not familiar with. If you know some of the rare stories about Dragon King characters, you can also post them in this comment. I will read them and then bring them into the plot. At the same time, during this period, I may re-watch Legend of Dragon King. My brain is really failing, and it is disgusting to have to go to school. I will definitely not be able to get perfect attendance this month. Next month, I will have 4,000 words per day.

The author in the book review section said that Gu Yuena is the heroine. Those who didn't know from the article thought that Gu Yuena would be hunted for a soul ring later. Gu Yue's current performance shows that her heart is towards Tang 50, while Na'er only cares about my brother. Are you prepared to create a contrast between the two women's hatred of the protagonist and her love for it? To be honest, the plot in the early stage is not as good as the other Dousan novels I read (I won't mention the title of the book here). In one book, Gu Yuena was picked up by Yun Ming in the beginning, which has nothing to do with you Tang 50. Ling Yiyi pulled Gu Yue up when she was about to fall in, making Gu Yue conscious. The transformation was well written, and Gu Yue's independent personality charm was also written. If it doesn't work, you can write the simplest opening scene with Hu Naer. This plot is not about the protagonist saying that there is something wrong with Gu Yue's Double-Faced Turtle, but that after you talked about the Two-Faced Turtle, you told me that the Two-Faced Turtle is the heroine. So why did you describe it like this?

It's a bit poisonous. After accepting Yali as his godmother, he immediately pretended to be powerful, eating and drinking Shrek's food, finding him a master, and getting him resources, but in the end he even became resentful of Shrek. It's really amazing. You think Shrek belongs to your own family. Shrek's pavilion master is not in the inheritance system. You recognize a godmother and you become Shrek's master? The protagonist is either White Eyed Wolf or Long Aotian

The writing is poor, the plot is incomprehensible, and I have no desire to continue reading.

I haven't seen much of it, but it's a bit toxic and I can't stand it. The number one soul of a person who is favored by the Federation is actually a 10-year soul. How should I put it? It's a bit outrageous. When I saw the title, I lost the desire to read it. No matter how bad you are after being recruited by the Federation, you will never use such a thing. It's like you were adopted by that rich man. No matter how bad you are, you can't say you have to pick up garbage and eat it. Even if you are an unyielding soul, I can only say that the private setting is still a bit outrageous. 10 Years, unyielding? It takes more than 10 years for a top soul beast to be cultivated for less than two days after it is born.

Cutting into this timeline, what does it look like to me? I'm afraid it won't be a perfect match for Ban Bai and Gu Yuena later.

I have a suggestion for the author. It's my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. If you finish this Dragon King legend, are you interested in writing a Peerless Tang Sect fanfiction? If the heroine is, I hope it will be a double heroine. Because there are no Peerless fanfictions on the Internet that write about these two characters. I think it is very interesting. Most of them write about either the harem or the single female protagonist, which is too boring. Also, don't write about Orange and Wang Qiuer. These two women are too disgusting. As for the first heroine, she is the rebellious and handsome Wang Donger, not the suture monster Tang Wutong. The second heroine, I hope it is the transgendered Huo Yuhao. After recently watching Huo Yutong in Douluo: Peerless Light, I feel that the female Huo Gua is so cute and gentle. She is simply a good wife and mother. Think about it, how interesting it would be if the male protagonist married these two. Their martial soul fusion skills. How beautiful the goddess of light is. Not only do they have two experiences, but there is also a third experience. So I hope to write this two female protagonists. They are the male protagonist and female protagonist of the original novel. It's just that Huo Yuhao has become a woman. As for the beginning of the story, if the author has no inspiration, just refer to my ideas. It took me a lot of effort to come up with the inspiration for the story. First of all, the male protagonist is called Long Xuanyu or Long Haoyu. The male protagonist is the second generation rich man from Blue Star. He is gentle and kind-hearted, but his family is ruined and his property is taken away by his fiancée and his good brother. These two adulterers and adulterers want to get rid of the male protagonist, but they are killed by the male protagonist who prepared a detonator along with the two scumbags. The male protagonist's good brother is named Ji Boda and his fiancée is named Liu Ruyan. I have no choice but to get inspiration after watching too much of Emperor Ruyan recently. Emperor Ruyan's catchphrase is that if Liu Ruyan was not born in heaven, the scum will be as long as the night. The soul of the male protagonist traveled to the universe of the Divine Seal Throne. He was selected by the soul of the God of Creation and became the son of destiny to save Haoyue, the god of punishment. The male protagonist was reincarnated successfully. He is Long Haochen's brother. After the rebirth, the male protagonist became cold and indifferent. The heart is sealed with cement. He does not believe in love and friendship. He only believes in family affection. The male protagonist is very good at pretending. It is difficult for people to leave the male protagonist's heart. Only his weak brother, mother and his teacher Yi Lao can have a place in his heart. It is difficult for others to enter. The male protagonist received the second ancestral throne given by the Creator God. It is the God of Chaos and Eternity Seal Throne that the Creator God merged with the power of chaos and creation. The super artifacts Sword of Chaos and Armor of Eternity are specially designed to seal the Divine Seal Throne that controls the power of divine punishment. The male protagonist is Electrolux's eldest disciple and also Electrolux's favorite disciple. Electrolux sacrificed himself to save Long Haochen who was killed by the Demon God Emperor and passed on the pseudo-super artifact of the Tower of Eternity. The protagonist is either called Long Xuanyu or Long Haoyu. It's up to the author because of the Holy Law God of the Dead. I saw in the male protagonist that his past self was betrayed by his lover and his family was killed. However, the male protagonist will meet Yi Lao again. You should say, why did the male protagonist not save Long Haochen? Because the male protagonist is accepting the test of the Divine Seal Throne of Chaos and Eternity at this time. The test is more difficult than the creation and eternity of the Divine Seal Throne, so it takes a longer time. The male protagonist passes the test and gets the truth told by the Creation Soul. Knowing that Haoyue's purpose is to destroy the plane, in the final battle, he, Long Haochen and the Demon God Emperor stopped Haoyue. However, the three of them worked together to defeat Haoyue, who had the strength of the God of Creation. They could only let Long Haochen play the emotional card to contain Haoyue. In order to retain his strength without killing Haoyue, the hero could only use the Sword of Chaos to peel off his second godhead, the God of Punishment. Originally, Haoyue was the brother of the God of Creation and the God of Heavenly Guard who protected the universe. However, due to some reasons, including experiencing some tragic things in the Creation Continent, he was forced to have evil thoughts of destruction and formed a second God of Divine Punishment. As a result, he degenerated from the God of Heavenly Guardian into the God of Heavenly Punishment. He became a demon who destroyed the world. However, Haoyue also became a contradictory person. He had dual personalities. One was kind and was Haoyue's Godhead. The other was the Godhead of Divine Punishment. The two gods fought with each other, causing Haoyue to lose consciousness. One moment he destroyed the world, and the other moment he told the demons to build the Demon God Pillar and kill himself completely. In order to protect the universe, it was like the Dragon God of Douluo. The Dragon God's Creation Godhead and Destruction Godhead. The inability to coexist and integrate caused the Dragon God to go crazy and trigger a war in the divine world. He was eventually divided into two halves by the Shura God and turned into the kind and wise Silver Dragon King and the violent and destructive Golden Dragon King. This is also the case for Haoyue. However, Haoyue does not have a strong person like Shura God who can split his own into two halves. But this time there is such a person, it is the male protagonist. The male protagonist uses the super artifact Chaos Sword specially to deal with Haoyue. Haoyue's Divine Punishment was cut off. Haoyue regained the God of Heavenly Defence, but her strength dropped to that of a God King. However, Haoyue no longer had to destroy the world. But before she disappeared, the evil thoughts of Divine Punishment used her last strength to activate the black hole and destroy all the worlds. The male protagonist saw that the black hole was directed at the Divine Punishment in his hand. He quickly made a decision to sacrifice himself and save all the worlds in order to protect his family and absorb the Divine Punishment. His strength skyrocketed, reaching the level of a half-step creation god. Although he counteracted the black hole, the skyrocketing power made the hero's soul and body unable to bear it. He suffered backlash and fell into the black hole. The hero's body was shattered by the black hole. The body quickly disappeared. The God of Chaos and Eternity Seal Throne activated its power to protect the hero's body for rapid regeneration. During the process of decomposition and regeneration, the power of the black hole finally disappeared. The hero's body recovered and maintained the appearance of the hero when he was ten years old. However, the Divine Seal Throne tried its best, but luckily it was a blessing in disguise. The black hole drew out the power of chaos, which was absorbed by the Chaos and Eternity Divine Seal Throne and the Tower of Eternity. The Eternity Tower evolved into a super artifact. This idea refers to Tang San in The Legend of Tang Sect Heroes absorbing the power of chaos to advance. However, the male protagonist and the others arrived in a dimensional space with no end in sight. The Divine Seal Throne wrapped the acquired chaos power around the male protagonist to form a shield. It is used to protect the male protagonist and then continue to travel through the dimensional space. Some people want to ask me why I didn't use the power of chaos to protect the male protagonist at the beginning. It's not because I don't want to because I have no power anymore. The male protagonist has just neutralized the black hole and consumed too much divine power and is no longer able to fight. Some people say that there is a space world in the Divine Seal Throne. Why don't you go in and avoid it? The male protagonist cannot enter while wearing the Divine Seal Armor. And even if you go in, it will be in vain. The Divine Seal Throne will also be damaged. There was a situation where the Demon God Emperor broke and damaged Long Haochen's Divine Seal Armor. The Divine Seal Throne was unable to be used during the damage repair process. Not to mention the power of the black hole. I don't know how long it took. He flew through the dimensional space and finally arrived in a universe. It is also the Douluo Universe. The Divine Seal Throne flew to a planet under the guidance. This is Douluo Planet, which is also what we know about Douluo Continent. Huo Yuhao has changed his gender because this is a fanfiction. It was even more of a surprise given to Tang San by the Lord of the Plane before his death. In order to express his feeling of being killed, he turned his father into the Lord of the Plane for his own selfish purposes. He actually murdered him, a Douluo Continent native Plane Will. He hid the gender of the Son of Destiny so that Tang San could see that he was a boy. He sent his daughter down to seduce the Son of Destiny and become his own. But if he found out that his son-in-law was actually a woman, would he be able to accept it? Still talking about turning the female Huo Yuhao into a man, Tang San, the double-standard king, is also capable. No matter you are a boy or a girl, as long as you are the son of luck, just be my Tang San's dog. I can't get it and no one else can get it. It's just pitiful for Tang San's daughter. The female Huo Yuhao who just came out of the White Tiger Duke's Palace came out and set up a tent in a forest to practice. Her soul power has reached level nine in a few months. You can break through the tenth level and hunt the first soul ring. You can avenge your mother by becoming a soul master. At this moment, there was a loud noise in the sky and something fell near Huo Yuhao's tent. Huo Yuhao went out to check the things that fell from the sky and opened a huge pit. There was a person in the pit. Seeing that the person was still alive, Xiao Yuhao carried him into his tent to recover from his injuries. This was the first time she was alone with a boy. Her mother said that there were differences between men and women, but it was a special situation. In order to save people, it was impossible for her to take out a second tent. She bought this one with the remaining money left by her mother. She really answered the sentence, "A penny can't help a hero." The male protagonist Long Haoyu woke up. Where is this place? Xiao Yuhao said this is my tent. But I saved you. Otherwise, you will be eaten by wild beasts. The male protagonist said, Thank you. Hello, my name is Long Haoyu. Hello, my name is Huo Yuhao. In this way, they met Wang Donger in Shrek. The male protagonist joined the Tang Clan because he had not read the Douluo Dalu novel, so he did not know that the most priority problem in front of the male protagonist was to solve the problem of food and clothing. The conditions of the Tang Clan were not bad, and he joined Shrek Academy. There were no extra rooms in the dormitory. He shared a room with Wang Dong and Huo Yuhao, and it was all about the stories, bonds and feelings between them. My suggestion is the author. The early stories are usually bland and funny. The mid-term game is full of blood. In the later stage, the three-view rift valley becomes stronger and upgraded to resist Tang San. It also prevents Wang Dong from turning into Tang Wutong, and also prevents Tang San from having to make the female Huo Yuhao become a man and fall in love with Tang Wutong. Anyway, in the later stage, the main theme is a kind father and a filial daughter. The hero's martial spirit setting is that the first martial spirit is the Nine-Headed Demonic Dragon of Divine Punishment, the second martial spirit is the Divine Seal Throne, and the third martial spirit is the Tower of Eternity. And why give such a strong setting to the male protagonist? It's not good if it's not strong. Otherwise, there is no way to defeat Tang San at this time. There is no plug-in system. Otherwise, he will join the God of Destruction faction. Otherwise, he will join the dragon soul beast faction. Otherwise, he will be a dog for Tang San. Tang San in this period is too strong. My inspiration ends here. Some of the settings of the Divine Seal Throne are written by San Shao. For example, the Demon God Pillar was built by Haoyue after telling the demons. This is really written by San Shao. Some of the settings behind are added by me. Anyway, it is written by a fan. It is normal to add some settings. San Shao always likes to change his own settings. He recently wrote a new book called The Divine Seal Throne: The Bright Moon in the Sky. I did this for the needs of the plot. After all, I am not writing about the Divine Seal Throne, but about Peerless Tang Sect. The Divine Seal Throne This is the beginning of the early story. The author must want to say that you are so inspired, why don't you write a book yourself? But I really don't know if I can read novels in the future, let alone write novels. The comments the author saw I wrote are all my own suggestions and inspirations. If this comment makes the author feel bad, I will delete this comment. Here are some women's clothing Huo Yuhao

Come on, I feel like it's not working. Let's talk about the bad point first, that is, the reader's visual perception is a bit green. The second one is that I am eager to recognize my father. Is it good to be someone else's son? This is the first time I have seen so much

Just awakened and had a 10-year soul (even if it could be improved). The teacher of the Titled Douluo did not stop him. The protagonist still used the essence of the Golden Dragon King to cultivate his own 10-year soul evolution, as well as a 2000-year-old soul bone.

Friendly advice, don't write novels without thinking about harems. If you don't have the ability to write multiple emotional lines, just write less or no heroines.

The timeline is when Gu Yue joins the Spirit Pagoda, Na'er and Tang Wulin separate and become apprentices to Yun Ming, You know, the protagonist is a cuckold Gu'er,

The cold wind blows in the lonely valley, and the cicadas chirp in the spring and autumn. The young man returns. The stone man in Danghun Mountain sheds tears, and the fixed immortal wanders the demon to the north. Thousands of immortals on the upstream river have retreated, but love cannot match the persistence of tears. Destiny means success or failure. The immortal regrets but I don't. I knew at an early age that the world would be difficult, but I was still able to fly like a hero in the clouds. The cold wind blows all the way, causing the sea to rise and fall, and the traveler walks alone. Thousands of times of hard work and painstaking efforts cast iron, and exhaustive efforts are devoted to forging a sword. Now the sword is pointing at the clouds, refining Gu, refining people, and refining heaven.

The writing style is relatively immature, and there are many logical problems and typos in the book. Some parts of the writing are a bit unclear, so I hope the author can read it and revise it before publishing it. The subject matter is acceptable, and there are not too many bad points. The main reason is that the logic and plot advancement are too slow.

Author, I have a question that has been bothering me. Are fan fiction and original novels the same or different stories? Is fan fiction an independent parallel world, or is it the same world? Do you think the original heroine in the fan fiction and the heroine in the original novel are the same soul? They have the same name, the same ability, and the same personality. The only difference is that the ending of the story is different and the person she married is also different. You said that if one day he knows that he is a character in the novel, will he still like the male protagonist who is a time traveler? Or should he follow the original novel route to pursue the male protagonist in the original novel? This is the question that I have always been confused about. For example, for example, we traveled through the world of the novel and relied on the ability of foresight to know the content of the novel. The original heroine married the original heroine, but if the original heroine knew that I was a time traveler, she knew that she was a character in the novel. Knowing that I am a time traveler, I separated him from the male protagonist of Destiny. It is not considered to be a separation. It is just to strike first. I should hurry up the male protagonist and let the female protagonist like me first. Then if the female protagonist knows that I am a time traveler, will she still like me? Will she hate me? Or will she think that I am a despicable and shameless person? I caught up with her by knowing the story of the novel, because I know the future in the story and give her as the female protagonist. I made her fall in love with me first. Is it right or wrong? I always feel guilty. I feel sorry for the original male protagonist. I feel that I have robbed everything that should belong to him. This is just a question I came up with accidentally. I hope all readers will be kind and don't scold me. If readers have different thoughts and opinions, I hope you can share your opinions with me. I also need your insights and opinions to solve the troubles in my heart. Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it

It's really poisonous. A top martial soul can absorb a ten-year soul.

When I entered Shrek, I was stopped by someone. He asked the shark man what Shrek is from my family. After being caught by the evil soul master, it was clear that his adoptive father's positioning device only needed to be activated to save everyone. But he just said that this is my trial, not my brother? 😅😅The mother of the last mother and daughter went crazy and stopped the protagonist. The protagonist wanted sharks and even sharked the mother and daughter😅😅👍The more they were born, the more they were born, and they still mocked Shrek and mocked Tang San😅😅

Can you newcomers go to Dou Yi to practice? A copy as simple as Dou Yi should not be used to practice. Is Dou San accessible to newcomers? He has been playing in the original game, and there is no main line at all. The opportunities are all controlled by Tang Sect Shrek. Can you newcomers grasp this? Honestly write Dou San. First, it is both practice and building a reputation. If you feel you are awesome, you can write Dou 2. Although the copy of Dou 2 is more difficult than Dou 1, the main thread of various opportunities is clear, like the sun, moon and light, and the glory of angels. Have you ever seen that new author who writes Douluo and still writes Dou 3 well from the beginning?

The author is too evil. Stop messing with the two heroines, Gu Yue and Na'er. There are too many novels like this and I feel sick. Can you change the heroines? Are there no women in Dou San? I really don't understand why these two heroines are fighting each other. I'm really speechless.

I feel like the writing is a bit messy and I can't figure it out

The garbage soul bones from 2000 are also required, and they are not said to be externally attached soul bones. They are just like SB, and they become apprentices to everyone they meet.

Or maybe I think your book is okay, but when I read the last paragraph of your book, it was really slowing down the pace and wasting up the plot. It was deliberately grinding. I didn't understand it. It just felt like it ended hastily and was unfinished. With this feeling, I really can't understand your book. The book obviously could go on, but it just ended. I also read the author's Dou San book. It's really not as good as this one. It's even worse than this one. What I want to say in the end is that I can't understand it. If the author reads it, I hope he can reply.

What is this author writing about? Everything is covered in one stroke.

This book is very well written, but there is another book that I can still read - Douluo Peerless: Life Simulator

This is the most rubbish Douluo fanfic I have ever read. The configuration of the soul ring is unclear, the climax is passed by in one stroke, the beginning is awesome and the later is too slow. You can tell the level of writing at a glance. Author, please just go to sleep 😳😳😳😳😳

The main character doesn't have a good name. I really can't stand it.