From Immortality to Flow

The ruffian protagonist is really retro. The cheap old man has not been around for a long time. He can call and drink the people who have traveled through time. He also lures the water ghosts away when they come. He "feels that there is a chance to fight back and survive". In the end, it is not Goldfinger, but the neighbor who takes action, so the previous description of the protagonist becomes confusing. Here comes the key point... The water ghost is very strong and may not be dead. This matter has been reminded by the helper. The ruffian protagonist wants to find a stone to hit his head... As a result, the water ghost opens his eyes and wants to kill the protagonist. He also said something bad in his heart and wants to explain it here... Then he was rescued with a bow and arrow, and then fainted... End of reading Chapter 2. I don't know who saved him, maybe it was an old man who had a good impression of the protagonist under the eldest young master who appeared before, but it doesn't matter anymore. Goldfinger "is the halo" and "lucky Qitian Gu" are still too retro. I'd better follow the trend and look at the protagonist's IQ and whether it's moral or whatever, at least update it and know how to fit the protagonist's actions and the plot direction in a more reasonable way to show the protagonist's IQ or ability to establish the character. Rather than "seemingly confident and possessing the pearls of wisdom", it is all about other people's actions, warning of dangers, showing a wave of ruffian characters, and then showing a wave of halo gold fingers, so that everyone can be saved, and everyone likes them. Again review... It's too retro... In the early days of the ruffian's character, once the aura was turned on, everyone loved him. The ruffian acted stupidly. When the aura changed and his eyes flashed, it was all a plan.

It's a bit cloudy and foggy. It doesn't matter whether the reader can understand the meaning of opening a pit first and going around a few times.

No precautions, no foreshadowing

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It's a spicy novel. I only read the comments. It's so exciting. The comments section is all negative.

I'm still wondering why there was no update yesterday. Today I saw that it was completed. Please let me know.

It is lengthy and cumbersome, and out of 120 chapters, at least 60 chapters can be streamlined.

There was so much nonsense that I wrote dozens of chapters in one day. Dozens of chapters and I don't know what to say.

The steward only dared to write about swords like that because of his reputation.