
The Girl Who Controls the Spirit: My Contracted Spirit and Skills Evolve Infinitely
御灵少女:我契灵和技能无限进化
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- Completed
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- 186k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Urban Superpowers
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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What can I say, it feels like the loophole is a bit big, and there may be something wrong with the settings. Let's talk about the protagonist's awakened talent. On the surface, he is a B-level craftsman. According to the teacher, it is just a small rarity. He helps an A evolve to S at the beginning, and then evolves an F or E every two or three days. According to the author, this is not an exaggeration. The subsequent team formation further confirmed that the B-level craftsman shown by the protagonist is not that strong. This involves the issue of setting. A B-level craftsman can do this. The author clearly wrote that there are SSS-level craftsmen. Doesn't that mean that it can batch S or SS or even SSS? But the author also said that SSS-level craftsmen cannot easily evolve weapons. Maybe it's not easy to go from SS to SSS? Even so, the protagonist later evolved from SS to SSS (one city didn't have one in a year), which only showed that he was popular among students in the school. The school just suspected that the protagonist's skills had mutated, and then left it alone. Then the question arises. The background is a catastrophic apocalypse, and human production space is retreating steadily. The protagonist's current expressiveness, coupled with the death of both parents, should not be directly sent to the front line for special training, and at the same time evolved for bosses or mainstays. After all, the protagonist only consumes mana for evolution and has a high evolution probability, instead of being ridiculed by a small SS villain like now. Or should I say that S, SS, and SSS are actually not that unusual. For a peerless strongman or a mainstay, should they be regarded as AB in the eyes of S? Then there are classic villains, classic brothers, and classic wooden male protagonists. Of course, these are minor issues compared to the above.
It is a "beast-controlling" novel in which men and women are naturally weak, and they are either "double cleansers" or harems. But everyone will make a contract at the beginning, and this contract is equivalent to marriage. It is equivalent to saying that other women around the male protagonist are "married women". This is not even good for worship, let alone a harem. So there is only "double purity", which has very high requirements for the heroine, but the description of the heroine in this article is very weak. The heroine's personal setting is okay, but the male protagonist's attitude towards the female protagonist is too shabby. It feels like the male protagonist has no feelings for the female protagonist, how can this be "double clean". One more thing, other female friends are all in love with each other, and they cannot have a good relationship with the male protagonist, so those who have a good relationship with the male protagonist can only be men. This is a bit of a beauty tendency. This is determined by the setting and is an inherent shortcoming. So, the author is a setting fanatic and has a big problem with emotional description. Try to establish the female protagonist, and then focus on describing the interaction between the male and female protagonists, building up the relationship between them, and maybe saving them. If you don't write about the relationship between the male and female protagonists, it will conflict with the basic setting, and it will be wrong. In fact, it is difficult to write the setting of this kind of contract between men and women, because it only says "double purity". It is not as good as the beast-controlling type where you can make contracts one by one. The beast-controlling type is also good 😁
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The setting is a male and female team, there is no description or content about women at all, and the female character in it says one or two sentences and then goes offline.
Eunuch, the author changed his name and wrote Naruto