From the Age of Mythology

The rhythm is a bit strange. On one side is the long step to ascend to the gods, and on the other side is the heroic holy sword. I originally thought that there would be a big collision when the blood god attacks, but it goes directly to the climax and witnesses the epic moment. Regardless of winning or losing, there is an explanation, and emotions can be released in waves. But what about the actual plot? After so long of preparation, the Holy Sword withered and the brewing emotions were simply suppressed. I'm really speechless. After writing for so long, I still haven't mentioned the use of the holy sword. Although the writing is good, the rhythm of the plot is very poor. It's always been bland

The author wrote about how God was created, but did not write about how humans were created. He just mentioned that it was the protagonist's choice. This is too outrageous.

The first five chapters are well written. The dialogue between the characters is very natural, unlike other newbie authors who are too murderous. Mythology should be innocent, romantic and childlike. Only after the creation era is over can we write some cold and cruel stories. Then the explanation of the godhead is also good. Fortunately, the author chose Western mythology or self-created mythology (it is required that it cannot be similar to the East. Western mythology must be 70% similar. You can combine unpopular mythology, such as American mythology and Egyptian mythology, and change the name, which is also considered a self-created myth. After all, self-created mythology is very important for online writing. The author's requirements were too high, so I lowered my standards. In addition, no one can truly create unique myths. People are influenced by society. Only unique societies can create unique myths. ) Oriental myths are difficult to write, and almost all creation stories involving Eastern myths have failed. There is another one who has written a better one, "Thirty Thousand Years After Death", I hope it won't collapse.

At first glance, it seems that the pace is too fast, and then after more than a dozen pictures, the pace starts to slow down, especially the part after the sky god said that he fell into sleep. In one sentence, thousands of years have passed directly, and important things happened in the middle, including the establishment of the divine court, the birth of gods and the descendants of gods. There are places where you can write a lot of words, and there are places where you can write a few words or a dozen, instead of writing dozens, overall it is okay, and I look forward to subsequent updates. As long as they continue to be updated, there will be no shortcomings.

I hope the author won't be like the author of the book I Am God, who is so disgusting that he can't write such a good book. . .

It would be better for the God of Creation not to interfere too much in the development personally.

If the protagonist is the God of Creation, he will be reduced to a lower level (forced level) after his death. It is best to write about what the protagonist created or did, and then what impact it had on the world and what happened.

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There is no heroine in the tag, but the first character when I click on it is the heroine 😥

I really feel that Hela has a tendency to be a heroine, and the protagonist is a bit too insignificant and not interesting, so not many people watch it.

Well, this book has more than 100 chapters, but the results don't seem to be as good as the seedling next door with 50 chapters. It's really strange. I feel that the writing of this book is not bad, and it has creativity, but it is weird and boring to read. I have read dozens of chapters now, and I can hardly stand the story of the Holy Sword Hero anymore. I don't know if it will get better in the future, but I still hope that the author will write better and better.

It feels like a pieced together myth

The protagonist appears too few times, and the appearance of the earth mother is also pitiful. Although I don't like the protagonist to intervene directly, but at least show his face to shock other characters. It's good to pretend a little bit. The prophet who is like a doppelganger in the early stage only has a guiding role, which is too bland.

I hope to increase the role of the protagonist. In addition, although the God of Creation has Eastern elements such as pinching people, I feel that the cultivation system and the divinity system are too Western. I hope to add more Western elements.

The beginning is well written, and upon reading it you can tell that the author has read a lot of creation texts.

Starting from mythology, you should at least write stories about gods and gods, then stories about gods and humans, and then stories about humans and humans. Just start with stories about gods and humans, but you just follow the main stories between gods and gods in Northern Europe. Even Greek mythology, which places the greatest emphasis on the story of gods and humans, also tells the story of gods and gods first.

Looking forward to updates🙂

The dragon clan is looking for their ancestor, and Lao Hei expresses deep feelings for him. There are all kinds of elves, dwarves, and goblins. There are also many kinds of dragons.

Just change it to female

There should be dragons in the future, right? Lao Hei expressed his boredom