Dou Po: I Didn't Mean to Put It on the Yandere Beauty

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The first part is very good, but suddenly there is a scene at the end where Xiao Yan and Nalan Yanran are together, which makes me speechless. If the protagonist's face was not intentional, how could Nalan Yanran be with Xiao Yan? Good guy, purely giving away girls, I can only say that he is talented. I'm wondering, are you sorry for Xiao Yan? Still need to send. Yihuo didn't steal it from him, and even gave it to him. Most of those female protagonists are just the protagonists on the wall because of their sexual desire. Is it the protagonist's fault? I really can't understand why Nalan was given to Xiao Yan.

Yafei, a woman who is of no use at all, doesn't need to be a heroine. She can be regarded as a maid or a maid. With her so-called business talent, anyone else can do it better than her.

Let's reply together, this must be breakable, otherwise I won't be able to write any more later. The editor asked me not to drive such a big car in my new book, so I can only try to figure it out slowly. Don't worry, my dear friends.

Unlike Shuangwen's Shuangwen, he is better than Xiao Yan, and his appearance is also full of points, but he just doesn't feel good.

If you are a daily guide, after reading the free period, make an initial subscription. In summary, the main character looks like a girl, not good-looking

Why is the main character still such a softie despite being on the market? He has no masculinity at all.

Can you please take pictures of all these women?

I do see something interesting. Let's put it this way about the characters and interactions between the male and female protagonists. Whether the relationship between the male and female protagonists is: the male and female protagonists change their gender; the world changes to a female protagonist; or the female protagonist simply becomes a male, the south is open, and the male protagonist is still weak. For all the above relationships, the emotional drama described in this article is not inconsistent. Perhaps the author thinks that a weak and accepting male protagonist is a natural match for a yandere girl. But for the limited description of sex scenes, the female protagonist is more like the male protagonist.

Not to mention being a sissy, there is still some hesitation and indecisiveness.

It is recommended that the protagonist practice Taishang Wangqing. Women will only affect the protagonist's training speed. Anyone who comes close will be killed!

The story of Little Doctor Fairy was too abrupt. Although the protagonist was flirted with by Xiao and made love with Yun Yunshen, but after meeting him later, he still looked like a slightly affected person. However, in the story of Little Doctor Fairy, he suddenly seemed to be a different person. The reason given by the protagonist himself was that he had practiced Xiao's skills and felt that he had to eat a lot of women. But in fact, I just had sex with Yun Yun alone. She was still a virgin, and I had a little love. As a result, things changed when he came to the Little Medical Fairy. And since the protagonist's pen can absorb the harm of the poisonous body, why not let the little medical fairy stay with you? The little medical fairy said that because he is a poison master, he is afraid of embarrassing the protagonist and wants to go to the Izumo Empire (but he is very reluctant to let go of the male protagonist and wants to stay with him). The male protagonist is also like a fool (he lets the little medical fairy leave even though he knows he can absorb the poisonous body of disaster). If the protagonist is afraid of causing romantic debt, then it doesn't matter, just let the little medical fairy out, and don't eat her in the future. But I feel that the author just wants to eat the little medical fairy in the future and not leave it to Xiao Yan. Otherwise, why would he go on a trial with Xiao Yan? Maybe the little medical fairy follows the protagonist, even if he is a maid. The author doesn't know how to write the future plot, so he let the little medical fairy leave.

The description is very strange. I thought the protagonist traveled to a feminist world. The woman proposes marriage, and the boy's parents tell the protagonist that this is your lifelong event. Think about it carefully. It's okay for the protagonist to be charming, but this fight has become a female-dominated world. Don't you think it's weird?

Last time I said you were a masked man and you deleted my comment. This time Zi Yan called me sister again 🤫

The male protagonist is written like a female, and the main character is written like a male. I'm speechless... And can't watch it.

Why do I feel like I'm always around Xiao Yan?

It is recommended that the author change the cover. Most people have no desire to open the book after seeing your cover. They would rather just have a white background picture and a title like the book by my son-in-law, which is better than this cover.

Alas, there are enough words in the writing. If you don't know how to use the words, don't use them. One word can be used for a long time, and typos are like a curse.

As I was doing it, I forgot about your blocked one. What's that book called? What's the main character's name? Forgot. I took a look at it today, but it was taken down. I wanted to join the group to take a look, but I forgot about it. The question of what the protagonist's name is, alas.

No one knows about the Armor Warrior fanfic, and I suddenly want to relive my childhood.

I've written Chapter 17, and I haven't even written down the names of the exercises or fighting skills yet. What's your water?

Is there anyone who likes to discuss? Marshal Lei and I discussed whether Dou Po is the Heavenly Supreme or the Supreme, but we couldn't come up with any results. The key point is that the author of Dou Po Mask Man supports the Supreme Realm and has deleted several of my comments. Is there anyone who shares my opinion that Dou Po is the Heavenly Supreme and is more leisurely? If so, you can join the discussion.