
Douluo Dalu's Melee Archer with Maxed-Out Luck
斗罗之气运点满的近战弓兵
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- Completed
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- 1.2M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
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- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
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- Qidian
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I really don't understand a magical operation that many Douluo authors have. Most of the protagonists will find a backer for themselves so that they are not afraid of being bullied. Then the protagonist's own growth path will be invincible. As a result, an inexplicable martial soul fusion skill will be found in the middle. And this thing is completely useless except for the number of words when it comes out. Because he has a connection with a certain female character, and then starts to work hard for more than ten or even dozens of chapters, and then never uses it again. This is the current situation of martial soul fusion skills in Douluo fanfics that I see. The whole book is of no use except to increase the number of words for the author. Deleting the chapters related to it has no impact on the plot at all.
The soul bone attached to the protagonist's tentacles is so ugly. What kind of aesthetic? Aren't the butterfly wings better? Also provides the ability to fly. Tentacles? You cockroach!
It would be really weird and poisonous if his own woman's younger sister became his mistress. In the original novel, no matter how nymphomaniac Shui Yue'er is, she is not a nymphomaniac across generations 😅. I really don't know what the author wanted to do when he wrote that plot 😥
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Don't let people talk about the water you write? I can't write well enough, and I can't even speak well as a subscriber.
The emotional line is really easy to draw, and it is easy to draw after it is released. In the eyes of Binghuo Liangyi, he upgraded his martial soul, gave the teacher fairy grass, and upgraded Dugubo's martial soul. These three things took a small thirty chapters. From knowing the news of the third soul skill to obtaining the third soul skill, it is another twenty chapters. Even if the article is too dry, it is not good, but you are too weak. Forget about water, but the problem is that there are a lot of embarrassing emotional lines in this water. You can use water from daily life or development and research on martial arts to lubricate the article, but use feelings. What's the situation with the love line? Even if you have some wonderful idea, it will be unbearable because it is intertwined with the embarrassing love line, so you can skip it and miss it. Otherwise, don't write the love line. If there is a love line, we can just let the heroine post it without thinking. Although it is still embarrassing, at least it takes up less content. I have to say that this time has really taught me a lesson. Don't book all the books in the future 😓
Is it possible to merge the incomplete godhead of the Ice and Fire Dragon King and skip the process of collecting faith to become the God King in one step? It still feels a bit hot. Need to add a core. For example, the Dark Demon Evil God Bead or something. Or the Legacy of Dragon Valley or Zihuang Tianshou Long.
. The author has always been very good. The previous upgrades were okay. I read it from 100,000 words to now. Now I have come to Tang 3 and have been describing Tang 3. The protagonist does not play games and the strength of the protagonist has been hidden. It is not fun at all. Now no one in Douluo Continent can threaten the protagonist. If it is not fun, it will be boring.
I have one thing to say: I think Qian Renxue is not as attractive as her mother. I like crazy beauties like Bibi Dong the most. It will definitely be energetic when exposed. Am I a pervert?😏
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