A Thousand Insights in One Night, Starting as a Menial Disciple

The first is that the name of the martial arts is really confusing and clumsy, and it's amazing The second is that the author must not bring his or her bad character into the protagonist. Really, think about how mentally tough a ruthless person who practices martial arts for 18 hours a day is, and the protagonist you write is acting like a street kid every day.

Chapter 5 of Golden Finger only explained a little bit about time travel among the things that should be completed in Chapter 3 of Golden Finger. Chapter 5 of Golden Finger didn't mention it specifically. It just kept it secret in a few sentences. Without the power of writing, I wanted to reveal it bit by bit. I didn't want to fall into the cliche, but I didn't write anything new. I mean, missing a few sentences makes people feel confused. The main reason is that what should be explained is not explained, and the order of the plot is out of order. The reader is not you. You may understand everything, but the reader needs to read your words to understand what you are talking about, so the order is very important!

Liang Cao, a common golden finger novel, has some bad points at the beginning, some of the emotional scenes are unsightly, but the portrayal gradually becomes better later, and some character plots are slightly poisonous, but it will not affect it if you skip it. The plot level is stable, with some urine points, and it is refreshing enough. It is considered wonderful among many novice novels. I don't know how the plot will unfold later. I hope the author can write more story-telling and more exciting. I wish the author will write better and better and update more😍😍😍

To be honest, the front part is quite interesting, but the process of obtaining the Soul Technique is too frustrating. There is obviously a golden finger, and it is obviously a great pleasure to use the golden finger to obtain things that others can't get despite all their efforts. However, the setting of the Divine Soul Technique in the book abolishes the golden finger, and suddenly people's desire to read is gone. After working on the golden finger for a long time, it can only play a small role. Once the core resource is involved, the golden finger will be invalid, which is not fun at all. . .

Why do people always vomit after killing people? Do you guys have any real cases? I wonder if there wasn't vomit everywhere on the battlefield during the war?

Chapter 1: They are all handymen and disciples who do dirty work, but the protagonist has something about him that makes other people disgusted. Don't you think it's funny? I have a smell myself, so why would I dislike the smell in others? The description is too deliberate and sickly. The author probably has not gone deep into this class and does not understand it at all. It's very stupid to deliberately highlight this rhythm.

I watched level 357 and couldn't stand it anymore. Generally speaking, it was good. However, I wanted to kill my childhood friend and was poisoned by others. Later, I helped Shen Mirizhi. Shen Mirizhi was not a good person and didn't trust the protagonist, but she licked her face to help. It made people speechless. In the end, it was better not to write the emotional scene. It was not interesting at all and only poisoned people.

After reading the beginning, the protagonist is indeed mentally retarded. With more experience, he looks down on others and keeps talking about selling insurance all his life. Are you proud of having more experience? If I can't see time travel, I'll just sell life insurance. A handyman looks down on others just because he has a cheat, what strength does he have? I thought you were the strongest in the world. People who are not the protagonist can live for at most two chapters.

It's such a good book to read in one sitting! The first few dozen chapters are so toxic that it's easy to abandon the book, but the more you write in the later chapters, the better! The author should revise the front part, what a pity for such a good book! !

Just stick to the plot and don't show off your crotchless protagonist's emotional intelligence. You said you can either just show off your cards and be a novice with a golden finger, or you can be too arrogant and unsophisticated. You have to have a high emotional intelligence person with ten years of insurance experience. Not to mention his underwear, it's disgusting to watch.