Become a Powerful Person Through Ancient Times

After reading a few chapters, I felt that it was not smooth, the protagonist was not described enough, and the supporting characters were inexplicably written. I have no desire to see the back!

If you want to write about a family, you should be more united, and you have to get rid of a thorn in the beginning. What you wrote is fiction, not reality. If you want to talk about art, be more profound, and if you want to make money, be more relaxed. The ones that are neither trivial nor trivial are the least looked at.

The icing on the cake is when the family gets up this week. The author thinks that the Zhou family will be brought up in this way. To be honest, I don't like it. It's easy to put icing on the cake, but I prefer to provide help when it's time. But I feel like it's just a transaction with the Zhou family. If you give money, I will give you a certain return in the future, but can the author not write about emotions? I really don't feel worth it.

The waterwheel is for everyone to use. As long as it is built, everyone can see the efficiency. The composting one is probably not used by many people without seeing the actual situation. Forcing it to use will offend people, just like someone suddenly telling you that he will definitely make money by helping you trade stocks. Most people will not believe it.

I was a forty-year-old person in my previous life, but after traveling back in time, I wrote like a kid who was a teenager and didn't understand anything, which was full of contradiction.

The author wrote that the protagonist helped the family become powerful, which was wrong, because the protagonist is a side branch, and there are a lot of people in the three houses above, and there are also a lot of people in each house of the main line. According to ancient tradition, unless the main line is dead, even if you win the top prize and become the prime minister, the protagonist and the protagonist's descendants will never be the leader of the clan, and you can't be the elder of the third house. Then any achievements you make are just wedding clothes for your family, and the family relationship you write about is not very good.

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 6. Is the author a student? It feels like the protagonist is not a person who has lived for decades and lived back in time. The protagonist is written to be silly and cute.

The title of your book makes me speechless. My father has been gone since I was a child, and I don't have any real relatives. The clan didn't help me either. I'm just an orphan and a widower. You still act like a tyrant. The protagonist alone has developed a ridiculous amount of strength.

After reading ten chapters, the characters are full of nonsense and everything is messy.

How come today's kindergarten children write journals using the routine of either time travel or rebirth? Time travel and rebirth do not reflect the advantages of time travel and rebirth. Time travel and rebirth are personal P

Before becoming a powerful person, one must first become an official. Only local cowards can become powerful people.

In ancient times, landlords with no powerful background were like lambs ready to be slaughtered in the eyes of officials.

The protagonist you wrote does not look like a forty-year-old veteran who is sophisticated in worldly affairs, but rather like a young man who has just entered society and thinks he understands the world.

There is no system, there is not a space world, there is not a single magical power, and there is no magic power. They are so powerful. Don't think that the ancients were stupid and good at the same time!

After reading a few chapters, it's like an old lady's feet are bound, smelly and long

It's half written and half white, the plot is sketchy and not detailed, and the plot is a bit cliched and low-intelligence.

There are too many flaws in the farming novel. In ancient times, people would compost, and their feces and urine could be sold for money. The waterwheel is the kind of human-powered waterwheel in Ma Liang. Large water-powered waterwheels like those seen on television and tourist attractions are modern.

In the first few pictures, I thought he was just pretending to be weak. After reading the last few chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore and felt angry.

A family can only have one voice

Come on, author! I recommend the new book "Bian Xia", which is based on the history of the late Northern Song Dynasty. Zhao Zhen, a later generation, traveled to the Jingkang year of the Northern Song Dynasty, and his soul passed through Zhao Zhen, the eighteenth son of Emperor Huizong of Song Dynasty. ! !

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