Mystery: the Witch Emerging from the Wilderness of Knowledge

Alice is so cute! ! ! In general, the plot is very suitable for the two-dimensional preferences. There is no grand and fast-paced advancement. It writes a leisurely and slow-paced beautiful girl Tie Tie in a mysterious world 😍 Looking forward to the long story, I want to see it For the posts in the middle and later stages, I hope I won't only write 300 chapters like the author's previous book 😡 After tasting many brain-burning and shocking second creations, wouldn't it be nice to have a glass of Alice's special blend that is refreshing and slightly sweet in the summer?

If you want to watch the plot, you can leave. There is almost no description of the plot. The whole story is a meaningless interaction between the protagonist, Melissa and her doppelgänger. The protagonist doesn't care about improving his strength at all. All he thinks about is the relationship between himself and others. It's completely written like a light novel romance novel.

After seeing your comments, I thought about it and came up with a plan overnight. In combination with the developing plot, a direction has been determined. This is the direction and it will not change back. Baihewen, it remains the same and will not change. However, after using this design, I modified it later, and it may lead to the appearance of the clone of the Immortal Lord, which is the emergence of the Mad Hatter. This is a male. It cannot be repaired or removed, otherwise the outline will be changed. It can be regarded as feeding the male body directly to the immortal. The next time, the direction was determined, and I began to focus on the plot.

The plot is protracted, and most chapters are still the popular science author's own personal invention. At the same time, it is useless in itself, and there are too many roles in the protagonist's split personality, making the protagonist himself very powerless.           ，， Daily writing is not like daily writing. After all, there are so many ability settings. But it happened to be updated to now, either the interaction between the protagonist and his personality clone, or the daily life of Klein and Melissa. There are many riddles, and some abilities just give you a very bluffing name, and then there is no more.

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Alice in blacksouls is the incarnation of Nyarlathotep, the true ruler of the outer gods.

It has no other use than to fill up the word count. It might as well be set as an incarnation evolved from out-of-control power. The incarnation disappears every time a part of the power is recovered.

So far, it's all boring. It can be said that there is no plot. It has been dragging on for a long time. It's like a light novel, but it's watery. It has a bunch of inexplicable interactions and a lot of descriptions and settings. It doesn't seem to have a sense of substitution at all. It's obviously a huge world view, but it's written in a very petty style.

There are too many inner scenes and the plot is too slow. In one sentence, it's like the sea, the sea, you are all water. I hope it gets better.

There is a bug. The main countries are all in the northern continent, and the southern continent is a colony...

First of all, it is obvious that this book is a light novel with a mysterious world view. Then the problem is, most of the mystery audience does not read light novels, and readers who read light novels also have better choices. After all, the mystery worldview is not suitable for writing light novels. As far as this book is concerned, the plot progress is too slow, and most of the space is filled with meaningless posts and long paragraphs of popular science about the author's settings, which to a certain extent even affects the logic and coherence of the plot. I read in the book review section that the author said that the follow-up would focus on the plot, but the problem is that this book already has hundreds of thousands of words, and most people will definitely not be able to read the follow-up. Currently, I hope that the author can reduce the large-scale interaction between posts, and give priority to the plot. Add posts after the main line is written, and don't eat the seasonings as a meal. Ah Hun Dan (beat the table) If the author wrote this book purely for his own pleasure, then treat it as if I didn't say it

It's really too watery It's mainly about your protagonist doing things and talking. It must be accompanied by an explanation of what happened😥

The promotion of the protagonist to Sequence Six is ​​too outrageous. Sequence Six is ​​related to Sequence Zero and above, and it is generally impossible to go beyond one or two Sequences. It's really forcibly bound to Klein.

The story is quite interesting, but the protagonist's performance compared to other personalities feels quite stupid.

For the sake of the plot, the Sequence Six promotion ceremony and Klein are tied together 😰. Seeing this, I don't even care whether it will change back in the future.

As Shen Nong, I would like to remind Bai Dandang that this book has a male protagonist who transforms into a male protagonist, and it almost makes Bai Dan come in and kill him.

Uh... It has been emphasized that the protagonist is a man~is a man~is a man. If you can't stand it, just change it properly. It seems that everyone is forcing you to change. You act and stand up.

It's hard to describe the clone flow. I've seen more than 120 chapters. It's almost as if the protagonist doesn't exist. It's all about fairy tales fighting wits and setting up, or Little Alice's daily life. It's better to give the protagonist to fairy tales or little Alice. Looking at this posture, fairy tales may do some operations that only she can understand. The whole person is in a state between 25 and 25. It's really outrageous.

Suspected LGBTQ warning ⚠️, Chapter 19 directly stated that the protagonist can freely switch between genders through his own creation, and the protagonist directly stated in front of the Tarot Club that he is a character with a female body and a male mind. Sort of screening readers in advance. I won't read any further for now, I hope the author can at least give me a clear direction before putting it on the shelves.

What should I say? Your novel gave me a feeling that the main character takes over the main role. The protagonist's presence is really not high, or is it a bit useless? After reading so many pictures, I really don't know what the main character is for? You can't look at it from your writer's point of view. Just like a central support, maybe in your eyes, he is the center that supports the entire book. You may be looking at support, but we readers don't care about this. We only care about what he does and how he does it, not the feeling of a supporter behind or with a low presence supporting the whole world. You always write about other Alice's abilities, but I feel like the protagonist's abilities are all the same. It's useless to just highlight one.

What do you think about the AI ​​drawing? Just tell me whether it looks good or not?

It's true that I was born, but there is no news about it. I just stopped updating. It's disgusting.