Western Fantasy: but the Brave Is the Emperor's Chosen One

It's very depressing to watch, it's like watching the original version of Warhammer Depressed and uncomfortable Knife

I'm a bit stuck. It's already very difficult for the Emperor to face the four gods at the same time. These authors are still making enemies for the Emperor. DND, Marvel and other different worldviews. Almost all the gods have been offended. I really want the Emperor to be beaten.

Are you, the judge, an immortal? Normal cans can't live for a thousand years, and you have to consider the issue of combat power.

The foreshadowing is long and the excitement is short. It is said to highlight the cruelty of the world, but in the end, I feel that the protagonist is too weak at all. Momojiji has always said that the protagonist is determined and a thousand-year-old veteran, but the result is that he keeps suppressing his combat power, which is embarrassing. Writing a Western fantasy, it still has a fighting power, it's too retro, and the warhammer leather is an old thing with green paint, so it's useless. Before watching it, I was still thinking about why there were so few fans and why it was so popular. After reading it, I can only say, it's so good. If you like Warhammer, who comes to see you test your fighting prowess?

For example, if a certain protagonist is reborn in a person in his 20s after hundreds or thousands of years, then this protagonist will be mentally retarded in an instant. He will act like a fool with hundreds or thousands of years of experience, and he has never seen a woman. Especially in many fairy tales and reincarnation novels, it is like a human being falling in love with a paramecium. Everyone's species are different.

I hope all these countries can be used. Here is the first part of the map plan. Some place names have not been figured out yet. By default, the subject countries are within the scope of the big empire or republic, so don't be surprised if some small country settings appear. They are already the slaves of the big empire and will not be marked on the map

The early climax is coming, but the protagonist has no power at all? You say you want to learn magic, but you don't do it at all? There are several demon heart-level people around you, why don't you ask? Are you suppressing your mother's fighting ability?

How to put it this way, the beginning is too detailed, and the settings are all thrown out, which makes people have no desire to read. Then some settings feel not detailed enough. In my humble opinion, I hope the author can work harder. I am still looking forward to this type of novel.

The first few chapters are good, but the rest is a mess. Not to mention the slow pacing and constant sluggishness. I thought I was playing an invincible style, but it turned out that the main character used to be fw, and the description didn't focus on the main character. I really don't know what you want to write.

To be honest, it is a bit difficult to read about Demon Heart and Soul Condensation. If you write about the first level, why not the second level? Try to reduce the reading difficulty for readers.

I feel that it doesn't matter whether the pig's foot is an earth traveler or not. The cognitive personality is already part of the Warhammer world view, no different from the indigenous people.

Can you please stop posting templates? It's really disgusting. If you don't update it, it won't be updated. Book friends won't say anything. Are you deceiving readers by posting a template and making a standard body every day, or are you deceiving yourself? 🙂

Author, why don't you change the title of the book? This article about Hammerwind cannot be found if you directly search for the keyword Warhammer. No wonder many people can't see it.

In the Warhammer world, the Emperor is treated as a dog because he has buffs and spiritual support, which can serve as a protective umbrella for legal psykers. And other gods are too useless, the emperor is better than the bad. It's a bit clumsy for you to still be a dog without getting any benefits from traveling through time.

The three golden chapters at the beginning have the flavor of more than ten years ago. It's such a bitter and grudge-filled story of love and hate. At the beginning, I can't empathize with it at all. The author writes about the protagonist's feelings in large strokes, but lacks description of his character, which makes the protagonist's image pale and weak, and the protagonist's feelings cannot be empathized with.

Brother, I don't know how old you are and whether you are out of society, but if you didn't lie to me, I know you are struggling, and I also know that the starting point is not fair to the author. But your current approach to updating is absolutely problematic and is bad for your character. You cannot do this in society. You cannot treat emergency exceptions as the norm and keep apologizing to others to accept them. This will only give people the impression that your apology is completely insincere and may even be deceiving and exploiting people's compassion. When we readers open the novel product, we hope for a complete content. Of course, we can sympathize with the author's pressure and hard work and let you fill it in before you finish it, but you can't do this every day. I honestly suggest that it is better for you to use the following three options. 1. Just rest and recover, and make it clear how long you will need to rest, and then you can keep up with the normal update routine 2. Directly adjust your update time to noon, or adjust the update word count. 3. If you want, please formally tell the readers that you will only update half of the content each time, and will finish it in the morning, so that readers can be mentally prepared. Otherwise, they will read half of the content every time they click in, which will feel very bad. Really now I feel like a debt collector. Every time you knock on the door, you vomit blood for me to see. I think you are acting a bit too much, but the problem is that you can't blame me for vomiting blood every time because I think it's too fake. No need to really

The design of the power levels is outrageous. The second level of transcendence is similar to the physical power of the original body and there are many of them.

Might as well just write about Warhammer, which becomes a piece of shit after traveling to another world.

No wonder no one read it... I relied on deus ex machina to get through the first chapter, and it was too early to screen readers.

The Warhammer worldview written by the author is too weak. The second level of swords and magic is comparable to the original body. So is ascending to the gods to defeat the emperor with one hand, let alone the Titans and gods above?

Speaking of which, can the protagonist stop smiling bitterly all the time? 😅 We know you want to portray the protagonist's tenacity, but writing it this way seems a bit awkward, and it's not suitable for the protagonist who comes from the Inquisitor profession.

I think this book is well written. The hammer taste is very good. Why are there fewer and fewer people?

The pace is very slow I don't have the patience to watch anymore.

By the way, this classification shouldn't be fantasy. People who are into fantasy have gone to light novels.

And although civilian life is slightly better in the world after time travel, looking at the development trend of this story, the empire is almost dead, the Holy Kingdom should be dead too, the elves are half dead, and there is only one Republic left, but it is probably not much better.

Has the author ever understood hunger and fear? Are you considering writing for the exam?

Is this a mouth cannon stand? Luo Liba Suo, it makes me angry.

I hope it will be longer and I won't send it after writing.

Isn't Warhammer all about heresy and heterosexuality? How come this evil thing pops out of the introduction?

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