Sword Art Online: Windspeaker

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There are currently 43 chapters in total, and I only saw the interlude: Falling into the Abyss. Let me talk about the conclusion first. The writing style is not bad and the writing is careful. It is not like other fan fictions with a lot of typos and unclear sentences. I will also write my own thoughts after each chapter. However, I personally don't like this book. As the author himself wrote, this book just adds a bystander to Sword Art Online to criticize his CP, and at the same time makes some things in the original book more reasonable and complete. For example, Argo's intelligence acquisition is accompanied or guided by the author's characters, so that the supporting characters who were originally not full of characters gradually have their own growth trajectory. (The first time I came into contact with the character of Argo was from a game, not counting those that came out later. The first few games were completely marginal characters, and only appeared in a few plots. Ps: I don't read comics or novels) Like the author, he added his own character to the original work and took the bystander route. I read another one in the starting point. To be honest, that book also uses love to generate electricity. Because he is a bystander, the ending is destined. Therefore, even if the protagonist of that book has his own improvement route and growth experience, he still cannot attract readers. And because the ending is doomed, that book is very painful now. The author cannot write the ending, because according to the original ending, his character is destined to be killed by the protagonist of the original text. It has not been updated for a while now. Although I have only read 50% of the current book, this book gives me the same feeling as that book, which is boring. Of course, this may also be limited by the fact that the plot has not yet unfolded. The most difficult thing for me to accept is that the author's protagonist is a man who is frustrated in his relationship, quits his job and is about to commit suicide by taking medicine. I happened to see the notification at this time and learned about this death game. It just occurred to me that my former students may now be trapped in this game. Then after entering the game, there is no other way except to send an email proactively, and start leveling up. Originally, after I saw the relationship between the protagonist and Asuna, I guessed that Asuna chose the game to relax at his suggestion and fell into danger. Under such circumstances, I felt sorry for my friends and teachers, so I chose to enter the game to protect the students. Instead of being frustrated in love and wanting to commit suicide, he finally changed to a way where he would die if he lost the game. I always feel that the author's writing is not about cp, but about the characters redeeming themselves. In fact, the biggest problem is whether fan fiction or "original plot". The author's protagonist is dispensable, so why don't I read the original work? Maybe this kind of writing was okay a few years ago, but reading it from the perspective of a third party is not only easier to write, but also gives me a sense of participation. But writing it like this now will give me a bad feeling. Some people write fanfics out of regret for the original work, while others feel that there are too many things not written in the original work and the settings are incomplete, and they want to improve it and write the world they expect based on the original work. But if you are a bystander going to watch CP, it is more suitable to watch it alone.

The most interesting sword novel I have read so far, but the updates are too slow.

The protagonist is simply a side effect You may see that he has done a lot and seems to be very strong, but in fact the author directly cheated the villain in order to balance and not deviate from the original plot. In order not to deviate from the original work, after some balancing, the role of the protagonist is almost equal to no or even side effects. The progress is not as good as the original work.

Come on, brother who writes about swords and swords

Sword fanfics are very difficult to write, so keep up the good work!

I really like the author's description of the assassination weapon as a dagger instead of a vulgar knife. I really like the assassination game Professional Killer Assassin Thief Ninja. I think the exclusive weapon for assassination must be the weapon of Hundred Soldiers Thief Dagger! Dagger is pronounced four times here Daggers are available in various models here: Short dagger (dagger within twenty centimeters), long dagger (dagger within one foot), double-edged dagger, single-edged dagger, curved dagger, straight dagger And there are many branches of dagger, namely chain dagger (there are two branches in chain dagger, one is a dagger with a chain tied to the tail, the other is a sickle dagger, it can also be called a hook and sickle chain dagger) Refer to Baili Xuance's weapon), wrist dagger (it's great to tie a dagger to the wrist of your left and right hands and you can move the dagger with just a punch), fist dagger (this is better understood as the dagger set on the right fist of the King Lanling King) and the hidden dagger. Everyone likes to call it the hidden sword. Unfortunately, I don't like it, so I call it the hidden dagger. In addition, there are also hidden weapons such as flying daggers and darts and other long-range assassination weapons!

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Why isn't the main character named Zyra?

Sword Art Online, please support me 👏

Oh, sword! Let me increase my popularity

Come on, brother who writes about swords and swords

I will help out with books mainly about swords and swords, come on!

First, it's been a long time since I saw a Sword Art Online novel. It's still in the first person. Come on, big brother who writes novels 😃

It's Christmas, and I suddenly want to see swords 🙂

I want to watch the follow-up, but why is it gone?😭

Suddenly it occurred to me, isn't Freya the younger sister of the dark elf eldest sister?